i like the idea you have for her.

the whole costume id looking good..

but it's not nitara. its not hard-core, edgy. also she looks anorexic.

8.1/10

Its cool. But I agree she needs to look more hardcore.

Excellent. Your art survied becuz of the excellence. Now goodluck with making a 3D model of it.

Overall the picture needs alot of work. The outfit itself is good but doesnt fit nitara. Like it was mentioned above. She needs more of an edgy, dark look. Would have been awesome you you would have gave her this fauxhawk or something different. Her face looks pretty good. Im not really liking her hair. Her neck is too thin. The right shoulder looks a bit weird. The wings looks rather flat and dull. Some more detail would have been nice. She does look a bit too thin overall actually. Also try making your drawing look a bit more cleaner. The lines through out the piece are crooked and just messy looking. Overall this gets a 3.5/5