Noob's Dorfen
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Noob's Dorfen
06/23/2003 02:51 AM EST
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RE: Fan Art: Noob's Dorfen
06/23/2003 07:29 AM EST
It looks empty, I think it still needs some work.
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RE: Fan Art: Noob's Dorfen
06/23/2003 08:08 AM EST

~Alucard~ Wrote:
It looks empty, I think it still needs some work.


It should look empty because that was the way i made it. Go to here to see the original background. that was just the same way i made it.
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RE: Fan Art: Noob's Dorfen
06/23/2003 08:41 AM EST
Right, now I had a bit of a hunch you see, so I pasted this into Paint and inverted the colours, and I was right.

This is just a square room isn't it? When you invert the colours it looks like the candles and the light they give off are part of a texture, on a wall?
If you look at Noob's Dorfen, you can tell it isn't square, in any way really. It looks more like a circular auditorium.
And the well in the middle, that is supposed to lead down to the balcony and the Soul Chamber I believe, is just a circle with a texture, which would be fine, but the texture doesn't give hte feel that it leads down anywhere.

Then again, like you said. You did it in an hour.
It just needs more in it, in the way that parts of the floor can be seen when there is light sources around, look at the 2D version.
The candles would be circulating the well in the middle, or at least it looks that way in the MK3 version.
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RE: Fan Art: Noob's Dorfen
06/23/2003 03:05 PM EST
thanks for the input i will redo it and repost it better than this one. THANKS ALL for the Critiques.
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RE: Fan Art: Noob's Dorfen
06/23/2003 07:03 PM EST
thats preety decent, but I think the circle (w/ downstairs lead to the Soul chamber) need more detail
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