NoobSmoke wins MKII -animation-
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posted11/04/2005 09:48 PM (UTC)by
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UltimateRyu
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07/25/2003 04:29 PM (UTC)
A big thanks to Kombat for hosting it. This is a remake or Directors Cut of my "The Assassination" ani.

http://tabmok99.mortalkombatonline.com/theassassination_dc.html
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11/03/2005 04:45 PM (UTC)
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Pretty leet, though with this you can tell it was animated GIF imported into Flash. Still, if you learn Flash by itself, and combine it with your other skills, you'll be able to pull off some pretty amazing stuff!

This animation itself was fucking awesome, 9/10, if the crowd in the background was animated it'd be 10/10. (Once you start playing around with Flash, that kind thing should be super-easy to do.)
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UltimateRyu
11/03/2005 05:02 PM (UTC)
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You know what I shouldve done? Saved each individual frame in my original gif process as a png and then import each one in sequence into Flash MX so that the quality would be at its peak and how it was intended. I think I'll try to learn some advanced stuff in Flash. It's fun working with it.
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JimboLimbo
11/03/2005 06:54 PM (UTC)
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Wow, loved the smoke effects when they were running towards Kahn, great job
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11/03/2005 06:59 PM (UTC)
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Great Job there Ryu. I just want to pointed out the Shadows and maybe a bit more of fluidity.
It's ok for me, but there's a few things I don't like.

- Shadows, like MaxDam mentioned.
- I like the smoke/aura stuff, works quite well, but i don't like how it doesn't hide that the sprites themselves just appear suddenly.
- When they're punching Kahn. For one, I always think that repetitive punching always looks sucky (no originality), but Kahn's sorta bobbing about there confused.
- The uppercut doesn't quite look right either.
- Kahn just... lands? From that height and that force? I would've liked either a cool bounce or an impact into the ground, to emphasise. That weird screen blur didn't do it for me at all.
- The blood at the end is probably my biggest gripe. If there's gonna be blood I would've put it as part of an impact with the ground to make a nice "carnage" effect of stone and the blood.
- Didn't like the music. Don't know where it's from or if it has some sort of significance to the animation, but I still didn't think it fit - and also when it suddenly *stops* at the end.
- I guess I got no sense of why their doing this. Obviously in standard fatality animations, the motive is obvious, but with something like this I don't understand why "Noob Smoke" is going after Kahn, albeit by defeating Tsung and Kintaro first.

Still, the effects are nice an stuff, so as I said, an ok animation for me smile.
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11/03/2005 09:58 PM (UTC)
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Yea it was bad when they were punching Shao Khan. 8/10
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11/03/2005 11:36 PM (UTC)
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Very GOOD.

4/5grin
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UltimateRyu
11/04/2005 02:10 AM (UTC)
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Very helpful tips/critiques. I may make a 3rd iteration of this ani sometime if I can think of ways to keep it fresh.
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11/04/2005 03:10 AM (UTC)
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It was ok. Wasn't all that great.

-I didn't like the music
-The blood at the end (wtf..)
-Try to get the clouds not to repeat themselves like that...try to make them look like there are not the same clouds over and over. Make some clouds.
-Shadows (just a little gripe...not that big of a deal)
-Work on the quality of the animation
-Get flash...much easier once you learn the basics
-Sound effects...eh
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balkcsiaboot
11/04/2005 03:35 AM (UTC)
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This is your most dissapointing animation yet. The idea is great, but I didn't know if I should laugh or cry at the actual animation.
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11/04/2005 04:05 AM (UTC)
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This isn't really up to your standards. I won't say what's wrong with it since everybody has already touched on it, but I really thought those punches were lame. You should've had some distance between Noob and Smoke. Have them bounce Kahn around with a few punches and kicks, then, maybe have Smoke, throw Kahn at Noob, following him with a flip, as Noob sets up for the uppercut. As Smoke closes the distance, they both do the uppercut and shoot kahn into the air.
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11/04/2005 09:48 PM (UTC)
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anyone here have flash?
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