*sigh*
Copy and paste no actual editing done + the idea is stupid and childish is just like that guy "peterbi" that did a Sexuality Fake Pic. Anyways I will give you my honest feedback tomorrow, I just need sleep.

Ok, I shall rate if you so desire . Well, the one thing about this is that it is way to short. The heigth should be much greater than what it is. And I just dont like the background, its just pasted props of course. You did get the win tokens, but the timer is wrong, not a logical number at all.

The fatality idea is a bit.... weird, lol. Considering the fact that Scorpion seems to be assisting Sub-Zero with this fatality. The ice isn't very good, well... you just pasted it really. But thats not so bad, its what most do on their first fake anyway, not saying its right or anything, but it seems to be natural for some reason.

I don't really like the lifebars either, I'm just more of a 'stick with the game' person in that area. The blood looks too cartoony, then again, like I said its all just copy/paste. But I must say, it takes courage to show your first fake! Hope to see more recent work from you soon.

HOLY SHIT! POSITIVE FEEDBACK! Thanks, if you didn't know(which I think you did) the 420 is a very, VERY, important number to me, and many like me....I didn't feel like using the same old boring 23 seconds or something. and all of that is from MK 2, so...I just used what I had, but some tips would be really helpful, I'm new to Fakes, and I plan on making many more, perhaps even some friendships along the way .(no, I am not hitting on anyone)

Anyway, the reason Scorpion looks like that, is because the original Sprite, he was getting up, so I flipped and tweaked a bit to make it look right. so yeah, I did EDIT.

thanks for the reviews though, and look forward to many more quirky and retarded Fatalities.

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If you want to really be the best, go to this thread; it has just about every tip/trick in the book.

Urm, well, lol.
Okay, it could be better, but I guess you know that, since your begging not to be flamed, lol.
Anyhow

- First off the size. That is way too small. When making your own background, work on a model size of one of the others. That way you can be sure that you have the right size.
- Second, is this a fatality? Because Scorpion is trying to attack, when I suppose he would be in a daze.
- Now, the life in the lifebars is flowing the wrong way, i.e. toward the centre. That is MKDA style, but this is MK2.
- The "Sub-Zero" text should be on the left hand end of his lifebar.
- The timer. Um, interesting idea, but I think even 99 seconds is more than enough time to kill your opponent. If you want to make it look like it's from the game, use a proper timer.
- I'm not too sure what Smoke is doing there. Care to explain?
- The ice wouldn't create blood, infact, it would freeze it, so the blood is a bad idea.
- The way Scorpion's leg has been "cut off" (which might I add is odd for liquid ice stuff), is pretty square (i.e. flat edged).
- No shadows, might save this picture a little bit .
- Screen doesn't appear to have gone dark, but as you made the background, it could have and we'd never know, lol.

Good things:
+ You got the win marks in there, they're in the wrong place (wrong side of the lifebars), lol, but they're in there.

Oh well, keep working at it. You need a truly original idea, and making up a background that just consists of spiky pillars won't help the picture at all. Keep going .

Btw. If it's called "Sub-Zero nut crush", then why exactly does Scorpion have blood coming out of him. Oh well, lol.

The stage is really cheap. I don't like it. The fatality itself is stupid. I don't even see why the ice would make Scorpion bleed from his nuts like that. WTF is up with the timer, and why is Sub-Zero's health bar backwards? I'd give this a .5 score for effort. Well, I guess you could say you put effort in it...

I'm sorry, but no matter who you are, if a giant fucking block of ice is comin' at your nuts, at a very high speed, its gonna fuck your shit up. As for the Timer, Jesus, 4:20 is for Stoners .. still wondering why no one got that. Either way, it was my first, and I plan on making some more, even one involving the ORIGINAL subby ... just he'll be tampered with and it'll be what I think he looks like now.

Peace.

Its not that they don't get what you mean by the timer, because I am quite sure they do. But using a more, accurate, number is just always better, since the main idea of fakes is to make them look like they could/should be from an actual MK game.

And I wouldn't say its a block of ice. If you get hit with a block of ice, then it won't freeze you.
On the other hand, whatever he shoots, does.
That's not a block of ice (or at least it's not meant to be, sprite wise).

Touche.

timsmk Wrote: And I wouldn't say its a block of ice. If you get hit with a block of ice, then it won't freeze you. On the other hand, whatever he shoots, does. That's not a block of ice (or at least it's not meant to be, sprite wise).

Exacly, a block of ice would Hit you instead!
Btw, why does subzero throws his ice blast upwards instead of straight forward?

The story behind it was this,

It was shortly after Scorpion had been killed by Sub Zero, and he had come back for vengeance, Sub Zero put up a good fight, but Scorpion in his Hellspawn Body, was just too much for him, thinking quickly, Sub Zero dropkicked Scorpion to the floor, and as Scorpion was getting up to his feet, Sub Zero shot an ice blast upwards, angling it so that it'd land right on him, it ended up crushing Scorpion's nuts, so him and his buddy Smoke could make a quick get away.

That's the backstory of it o.O