I'm not going to comment on the video itself. I'll leave that to others. But, for the record, it's spelled:

S H A O
K A H N

Shao Kahn.

Shoa Khan is one of my Kreated Fighters in Mortal Kombat Armageddon.

yeah sorry bout that, but do comment, i it good or bad?

Excuse me if I hurt any feelings here but Jacob "Sharpeye" Evens your literally are like a Movie/Fake making ADD crack addict with no sense.

There is no nitpicking about this or your other horribly shitty fakes... forget nit picking I could more then Ice-pick this disaster.

There is nothing good about this. Except for maybe the one second I laughed. However, I did not laugh at the lame no sense making jokes you tried to cram into this mess... I laughed at the randomness and the quick jump between the frames. I was like... OMG WTF? WTF? WTF just happened??? What is that big black thing hitting that badly blurred sprite?!?.

I know this forum is not ment to take someones work and bash it, yet as a community we should help one and another. Here let me help you... read some tutorials... use good visuals. WHy the white screen? Plan something like this out in your head before hand and say to yourself... does this make any sense?

There are plenty of folks out there who like to bash my work and that is all part of posting something you have created... but I at least try to improve every time. So before attempting to call out this community by saying you have taken all of our nitpicking and made something remember these simple steps...

Read some tutorials.
Think before you post.
Improve.

I don't even think I can rate this. I will give it a .2/5... the .2 is for unintentionally making me laugh.


HAVE A NICE DAY, DON'T NICK SHAVING.

Well i guess nobody will ever be satisfied.well i quit, im never animating again.Its a waste of my time.But ill tell ya, i would have liked that cartoon even if it wasnt mine.

thats nice.

Dubya Tea Eph?

What in the bloody blue hell was going on? That made no sense what so ever.



Ka-Tra

I agree, The sprites wouldn't stay still, It was to pixelated. If you want to upload it somewhere, don't upload it Google Video, upload it to imageshack.us or photobucket. And don't make the thread name so long.

Are you making these with MSPaint and MovieMaker or something?

Not funny (-1)
Sprites didn't stay in place (-1)
Font was too small (-1)
No sounds, just music (-1)


SOME background (+1)

2/5

You need to get a better program, MS paint will not help you improve.
And you need a better sence of humor. Think of a few funny jokes then make up a story.

out of 10 I give this -5. I know I'm being mean but hey, I'm asshole.
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Tips

- Make a good story and not something you came up in 10 mins.

- After making story, make a story board to help you

- Use www.rnel.net to help you out

- If you fail to follow these tips then just give up

Ok ive thought over night (literaly) of a cartoon.I couldnt get a wink of sleep.
And ive came up with one.Its called One night stand.Its basicly a comic, that has no pannels, and animated backgrounds.Ive made it.And edited it.And i know that you'll like it. It will be on an up coming post called One night Stand.

After watching that....I'm...speechless.....and no..that's not a compliment...

absolute shit 0/0

well, that was bad, as in, well, you no. i think you shouldnt just make a sprite video and immedietly post it where ever. maybe you should ask your friends what they think about it, if they stutter, or hesitate, move on, but dont feel bad. you need practice, alot of it. Oh and, if you can, use spell check, as much as possible, dont...................give.........up.




P.S.i made a fan fic game.....again

Don't go so harsh on him.
He's a beginner, lay off him.
You all were beginners, so give him a chance for christ sakes.
I kinda liked this one...
It was good.

Only bad...
Sprites = too small
Bg = too big with just a plain backround with clouds


Feed back=
You put some bg's from mkw.
Hells things
The Pit 2 = bg.

i kinda liked. Even though, i might be crazy i kindof liked. 3/5.

3/5 is too much redman. He is a beginner, so it's our duty as community members to tell him EVERYTHING that is wrong with it in EXPLICIT detail. THAT is the only way anyone gets better. If some of these people had been around in the early days, posting stuff like this, they would have been eaten alive.

But think for one second, if we discourage him too early, he might give up, he could become a great sprite movie maker, but if we discourage him, he wont be and we would possibly miss out on the best show of our lives. Heck, no one grew up and made the best movie on there first try, and neither has he, the path to greatness starts, with many bumps. Many people know that.

I'm not discouraging him, I'm telling redman and now you that if you want this guy to become great, you need to give him constructive criticism so he can apply it to his next work. To be quite honest, I wasn't going to say anything on this guy's piece until I saw the 3/5 redman gave him. This piece doesn't even deserve a 1, POSSIBLY a .5 if you're nice. No plot, no story, the graphics could have been done by my 6 year old daughter. You can't become great if people are going to kiss your ass throughout your learning stage. Do you think all the great animators/fake-makers/sig makers on this site had easy critics? Unless you want to end up like UltimateRyu, and have to keep re-posting the SAME fake to get Dragon Points, then I suggest you take people's advice for what it is, and apply it.

lol shoa kahn
animating isnt your thing.
if you don't want people insultting you, stop posting them.

if you show your friends before you post it, you wont be dissed by everyone else, unless, they lie to make you feel better, but body language should give your answer. Which is fool-proof.

the only funny thing in this animation is the way you spelled the title
stop posting these " animations"! they are bad!

MAUR! MAKE MORE...

You silly man, make more... I need more.

This shit is epic yo, I will be telling my children about this on my deathbed.