Oni-Sorcerer Drahmin
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Oni-Sorcerer Drahmin
06/12/2005 06:15 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Oni-Sorcerer Drahmin
06/15/2005 09:27 AM EST
Sorry... I have never been fond of rewriting the actual storyline...

Drahmin's Ending did not take place, since Quan Chi was present during the beginning of Deception... You could have worked around this by saying that he stumbled or was pushed into the Inner Sanctum alone.

Drahmin, I believe, was his actual name as a warlord before he became the Oni Tormentor. Moloch, the Oni Destroyer, on the other hand, has always been an Oni.

An army comprising of the Dragon Army, the Oni, and the Tekunin? Sorry, but that is a highly outrageous army. It would be literally unstoppable, and could never exist due to each ruler having seperate and uncomprimisable ideas of domination.

4 / 10... I just don't understand submissions which are completely unrelated to the actual plot. Sorry, again! I really hate giving bad scores... wink
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RE: Fan Submission: Oni-Sorcerer Drahmin
06/15/2005 09:32 AM EST
Also, since your character seems to have reverted to his human form of before he became an Oni, the man on the horse to the left could be some inspiration for his appearance...

http://www.angelfire.com/sd/scaifsal/mk/drahminco.JPG

... I am pretty sure it is Drahmin when he was a warlord. wink
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RE: Fan Submission: Oni-Sorcerer Drahmin
06/17/2005 01:09 PM EST
Goroliath Wrote:
Sorry... I have never been fond of rewriting the actual storyline...
Drahmin's Ending did not take place, since Quan Chi was present during the beginning of Deception... You could have worked around this by saying that he stumbled or was pushed into the Inner Sanctum alone.

Drahmin, I believe, was his actual name as a warlord before he became the Oni Tormentor. Moloch, the Oni Destroyer, on the other hand, has always been an Oni.

An army comprising of the Dragon Army, the Oni, and the Tekunin? Sorry, but that is a highly outrageous army. It would be literally unstoppable, and could never exist due to each ruler having seperate and uncomprimisable ideas of domination.


Alright, some input! lol, this story, as well as the rest that will follow, won't have any mention of Deception's actual storyline. In all honesty, I don't like all of Deception's plot changes, but we're all entitled to our own opinons, right?

I know that Drahmin was a warlord beforehand, but I figured that the more immeadiate approach to who he has become would be better than mentioning the how he was before he became an Oni.
Goroliath Wrote:
4 / 10... I just don't understand submissions which are completely unrelated to the actual plot. Sorry, again! I really hate giving bad scores... wink


It's okay, you gave me a score which you believe the story deserves, which you're entitled to, as it is the goal of the submission boards. At least you gave your point-of-view in a mature fashion, which is all I ask for. The army combination sounds unstoppable you say? You've put too much faith in the bad guys before you can hear the good guys' side of things. Patience, and in time all will be revealed. tongue
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RE: Fan Submission: Oni-Sorcerer Drahmin
06/21/2005 01:03 PM EST
Excellent.

Dramin as an OniSorcerer? wow WAHT?! Hmm... I'd better not piss him off when he's brewing up a new spell.

100% for you.wink

So I have a mission:

Make a cover of Johnny Cage's Nightmare. Fail to do so, try it again. You have only 2 chances. Screw both of 'em, and you will be banned. 'K?

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RE: Fan Submission: Oni-Sorcerer Drahmin
06/08/2007 02:21 PM EST
Ok ok, i clicked the link in your sig too this, and decided to read it. It was pretty good, but not as good as Johnny Cage's Nightmare. Still, i liked this one. Hope i don't get skulled for bumping it...
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