Oni-Sorcerer Drahmin
I am... Drahmin. Is that my name? The real Drahmin was an Oni from the Netherealm, a powerful, brutish creature with only wrought and destruction on his mind; however, since his escape into Outworld, he searched for the one who attempted to leave him and Moloch behind - Quan Chi.
Near the end of the Deadly Alliance's rule, Drahmin and Moloch tracked down Quan Chi, and a fight had ensued. Quan Chi's magic was drained, and he was about to enter the Inner Sanctum Chamber when he was caught off-guard by the two bloodthirsty Oni. Drahmin leapt at Quan Chi, and both fighters stumbled into the chamber, howling and fighting as the chamber closed around them.
Moments later, I emerged... I was more than Drahmin and Quan Chi could have ever been separate; with Drahmin's immense strength and Quan Chi's cunning intellect and sorcery, we became a perfect balance... A perfect being.
Moloch had difficulty telling whether I was friend or foe, considering I was both, and neither. With his limited mind, however, he made the decision to follow me. My foresight predicted the return of Onaga, the great Dragon King and Outworld's former ruler, and I had decided that it was time for the Oni to bask in his glory.
Using Quan Chi's amulet, Moloch and I returned to the original tomb and opened a portal to the Netherealm. It did not take us long to gather hundreds of Oni demons who were famished for living flesh.
We then returned to Outworld and met with Onaga, who used his magic to revive his indestructible army of mummified warriors. He showed great interest in having Oni serve in his ranks, so a treaty was signed; the Oni would help take over the realms in exchange for our own place of power outside of the Netherealm, and all the corpses of the war going to the Oni. He readily agreed, and the alliance was made. With the Tekunin joining the war in favour of Onaga's rule, our armies would become unstoppable.
However, despite all of these things, I find myself... Tormented. I do not know who I really am... Or who I should be. I find myself thinking that all that power could become mine... All that I need is to destroy Onaga, Sektor, and... Moloch. I have the power to do this... But Moloch is a fellow Oni, who helped Drahmin learn and master his abilities upon his arrival into the Netherealm... But he also would've killed Quan Chi had he not fused into Drahmin and created me.
Am I more Oni then Demonic Sorcerer, or is it vice versa? Who is the more powerful being within myself - Drahmin or Quan Chi?
Author : Jerrod Therace
Creation date: 2005-6-12-19-7
Modification date: 2005-6-12-19-7
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This is a biography based on the idea that Drahmin and Quan Chi had merged in Drahmin's MKDA ending. Based on the biography I wrote here: http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/forum/showmessage.cds?id=13063
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Drahmin's Ending did not take place, since Quan Chi was present during the beginning of Deception... You could have worked around this by saying that he stumbled or was pushed into the Inner Sanctum alone.
Drahmin, I believe, was his actual name as a warlord before he became the Oni Tormentor. Moloch, the Oni Destroyer, on the other hand, has always been an Oni.
An army comprising of the Dragon Army, the Oni, and the Tekunin? Sorry, but that is a highly outrageous army. It would be literally unstoppable, and could never exist due to each ruler having seperate and uncomprimisable ideas of domination.
4 / 10... I just don't understand submissions which are completely unrelated to the actual plot. Sorry, again! I really hate giving bad scores...

http://www.angelfire.com/sd/scaifsal/mk/drahminco.JPG
... I am pretty sure it is Drahmin when he was a warlord.

Sorry... I have never been fond of rewriting the actual storyline...
Drahmin's Ending did not take place, since Quan Chi was present during the beginning of Deception... You could have worked around this by saying that he stumbled or was pushed into the Inner Sanctum alone.
Drahmin, I believe, was his actual name as a warlord before he became the Oni Tormentor. Moloch, the Oni Destroyer, on the other hand, has always been an Oni.
An army comprising of the Dragon Army, the Oni, and the Tekunin? Sorry, but that is a highly outrageous army. It would be literally unstoppable, and could never exist due to each ruler having seperate and uncomprimisable ideas of domination.
Alright, some input! lol, this story, as well as the rest that will follow, won't have any mention of Deception's actual storyline. In all honesty, I don't like all of Deception's plot changes, but we're all entitled to our own opinons, right?
I know that Drahmin was a warlord beforehand, but I figured that the more immeadiate approach to who he has become would be better than mentioning the how he was before he became an Oni.
4 / 10... I just don't understand submissions which are completely unrelated to the actual plot. Sorry, again! I really hate giving bad scores...
It's okay, you gave me a score which you believe the story deserves, which you're entitled to, as it is the goal of the submission boards. At least you gave your point-of-view in a mature fashion, which is all I ask for. The army combination sounds unstoppable you say? You've put too much faith in the bad guys before you can hear the good guys' side of things. Patience, and in time all will be revealed.

Dramin as an OniSorcerer?
100% for you.
So I have a mission:
Make a cover of Johnny Cage's Nightmare. Fail to do so, try it again. You have only 2 chances. Screw both of 'em, and you will be banned. 'K?