raiden transmisson into a elder god
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raiden transmisson into a elder god
Raiden had always been an elder god. Until it was the time of the two sorcerers Shang stung and Quan chi joined forces then Raiden relinquished his power. Now raiden is fighting as a regular god at the end of Armageddon raiden got bored and went to the portal to the heavens and asked if he could get his power without being a disgrace to the elder gods. They said no you can join back without being a disgrace you have fought well in Armageddon you can join without being a disgrace. Raiden the thunder god is as a elder god.

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oh my god. ever heard of a period? or these-" "?or how bout a comma? seriously, read some more, both in books and storylines, to be a better writer.


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maxtono Wrote:
Raiden had always been an elder god. Until it was the time of the two sorcerers Shang stung and Quan chi joined forces then Raiden relinquished his power. Now raiden is fighting as a regular god at the end of Armageddon raiden got bored and went to the portal to the heavens and asked if he could get his power without being a disgrace to the elder gods. They said no you can join back without being a disgrace you have fought well in Armageddon you can join without being a disgrace. Raiden the thunder god is as a elder god.
Raiden had always been an elder god. Until it was the time of the two sorcerers Shang stung and Quan chi joined forces then Raiden relinquished his power. Now raiden is fighting as a regular god at the end of Armageddon raiden got bored and went to the portal to the heavens and asked if he could get his power without being a disgrace to the elder gods. They said no you can join back without being a disgrace you have fought well in Armageddon you can join without being a disgrace. Raiden the thunder god is as a elder god.
OMG This is the greatest thing I've ever read. 1000000/5
Nah, I'm kidding. This was terrible, 0/5 dude.


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Wow... Please, stop writing fan fictions until you have learned the basics of grammar and punctuation, and learned what makes a real story and a real plot. Raiden got bored and decided to get his powers back? The Elder Gods gave them to him just because he threw a few good sucker-punches and didn't consider how he interfered when they told him not to? Re-write it and make it better once you've done everything I just wrote.
maxtono Wrote:
Raiden had always been an elder god. Until it was the time of the two sorcerers Shang stung and Quan chi joined forces then Raiden relinquished his power. Now raiden is fighting as a regular god at the end of Armageddon raiden got bored and went to the portal to the heavens and asked if he could get his power without being a disgrace to the elder gods. They said no you can join back without being a disgrace you have fought well in Armageddon you can join without being a disgrace. Raiden the thunder god is as a elder god.
Raiden had always been an elder god. Until it was the time of the two sorcerers Shang stung and Quan chi joined forces then Raiden relinquished his power. Now raiden is fighting as a regular god at the end of Armageddon raiden got bored and went to the portal to the heavens and asked if he could get his power without being a disgrace to the elder gods. They said no you can join back without being a disgrace you have fought well in Armageddon you can join without being a disgrace. Raiden the thunder god is as a elder god.
Ah, so his quest has truly come full circle. An immortal life indeed.
maxtono Wrote:
raiden got bored and went to the portal to the heavens and asked if he could get his power without being a disgrace to the elder gods.
raiden got bored and went to the portal to the heavens and asked if he could get his power without being a disgrace to the elder gods.
Highly unlikely they'd make a story where someone gets bored and then does something out of bordem.
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