Those are some of the best blood effects I've seen in a while. They have an Evil Dead-esque, exaggerated sense of force and quantity. The hat floating above the head is a nice touch, too.
Not too much to say about the Rain edit except I would suggest you accentuate the swords a bit more. To me, they feel a little thin in the middle. Good choice in pose, though.
The only aspect I feel detracts from the over-all quality is the background. Its a nice idea for a Pit II variation, but I think you could have gone further. Perhaps adding some hand-drawn rain? I think I would have liked the re-imagined elements more too had they been integrated better into the design. Also, the distant bridge looks blury: odd, because nothing else suffers from that.
Overall, pretty cool.
One last question. The little detail you omitted, (life bars, shadows, etc,) was that intentional?
