I still think your better off just having two ppl fight at a time. The screen is so crowded. Why is Rain glowing, anyway? The suirt on Jax's neck is funny.

Pretty good job. It's nice and clean tho so that's good. There is no background wrote up on him so I don't really know to much about this one. It is a nice job imo. Btw I like Noob creeping around back there, nice touch. 3/5

I like what you did with jax and kano. I think rain and shao kahn are out of place. You should have not put them in it. Kano and jax alone would have made this piece better. I like how noob is sneeking in the background. The effect of kanos laser going through jax's neck is awesome.

You, really need to slow down. As I said in the past, you have creative ideas but when you add multiple sprites/props to the fake, it kills it.

I'ma pull a TimsMK here.

What needs improvement:

- Kano's eye beam seems to be curving.
- Sprite editing on Shao Kahn. Body is too stiff.
- Too many sprites make the picture too crowded.
- Jax's neck looks odd. It may be because his neck is getting torn, but it could use a little improvement.
-Shao Kahns blood at one part seems to be floating.
- (Now Im going to go really like TimsMK here ) No shadows, and no lifebars.


Now what I do like:

+ Not too much blood. Just the right amount.
+ The background as a whole.
+ The eerie glowing eye effect. Lol.
+ Jax's position.
+ Kano's position.
+ The glowing effect.

Overall.. Great job!

(Take no offence TimsMK )

torchia Wrote: (Take no offence TimsMK )

Heh, none taken .
And with that all said pretty much for me (which most I agree with), I'm gonna agree with Illu$ion, just slow down a little more and take your time. Some of these ideas are really worthy of becoming some really great fakes, and you certainly have at least some skill in making them.

So just take a little more time with them, and do try to keep them to just one on one, or maybe two on one/two if it's a team thing.
Good luck .