Red Dragon Mavado
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Red Dragon Mavado
02/24/2007 02:43 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
03/03/2007 09:25 PM EST
Wow... I have read a couple of your stories and this is very good! I like the idea of trying to replace MK6's story ; very nice idea.
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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
03/03/2007 09:28 PM EST
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Wow... I have read a couple of your stories and this is very good! I like the idea of trying to replace MK7's story ; very nice idea.

Actually, I'm replacing MK:D's not MK:A's story, although we'll see if there are enough people who want me to continue once I submit all the biographies and the endings.
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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
03/03/2007 09:33 PM EST
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UlcaTron Wrote:
Wow... I have read a couple of your stories and this is very good! I like the idea of trying to replace MK7's story ; very nice idea.

Actually, I'm replacing MK:D's not MK:A's story, although we'll see if there are enough people who want me to continue once I submit all the biographies and the endings.


My bad. I meant to put MK6
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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
03/05/2007 02:17 PM EST
Nice, 5/5
It's nice to see Mavado being involved, he doesn't get as much attention as he deserves.
You can probably tell from my Username that I like Mavado tongue
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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
03/11/2007 12:50 PM EDT
This story is great i should hope you continue and if you need any assistance feel free to call on me and i will use the force to furthur assist you.

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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
07/04/2008 01:56 AM EDT
How convenient for the bastard. Base their entire organization on a myth that makes them believe they are the rightful owners of the world...I love it! grin

This was another excellent read buddy. I cant believe I missed all this great fics from you. Since they are sooo many and so long, I wont go into the super-huge-deep analysis I went with the Sonya fan fic, but I will post my thoughts regarding my overall opinion of your works.

I’m reading them in the order you suggested btw.

Anyway, you did an excellent job outlining that thing that makes Mavado so different from Kano. The whole loyalty part and admiration towards Subby.

I liked the way Mavado seemed to be very secure and evil, but at the same time, you made him be loyal and sympathetic...well, either way he is still planning to kill the Lin Kuei and rule the world, so I guess he isn’t going to change that much. It was fun to read because I tied some things from here with Sonya’s bio, and Im sure I’ll be tying a lot of details after I finish reading the next ones.

I find it extremely interesting that you based this before MKA even came out, and that there are some similarities such as the red dragons being more “dragon like”. In MKA, the Konquest part, they actually develop this sort of experiments turning them into mutated beasts. Kano was even one of the prisoners they used their science/magic to turn him into a servant but it looks like they made him even stronger and smarter.

Anyway, I loved the “Dragon Culture” reference and the huge battle with Sektor. Is Sektor a huge gigantic monster then?

Great reference about Hsu Hao dying at the hands of Jax, and it was time to see Kano die (as much as I like him). I also liked the “Spanish conquistador” reference, a fun fact that reminds me of Mavados original name and his supposed-to-be Latin/Hispanic culture.

The Dragon Medallion bit has got me interested. I cant wait to see what happens next.

Once again: Excellent!
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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
07/04/2008 01:37 PM EDT
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I liked the way Mavado seemed to be very secure and evil, but at the same time, you made him be loyal and sympathetic...well, either way he is still planning to kill the Lin Kuei and rule the world, so I guess he isn’t going to change that much.

Yeah, I really try to show that everyone has a reason for their actions. I want my characters to be as believible as possible, and with that, they become more human, so people can relate to them much more easily.
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II loved the “Dragon Culture” reference and the huge battle with Sektor. Is Sektor a huge gigantic monster then?

Yes he is. I've always wanted to draw a concept art of what Sektor looks like now, because at this point, I made Sektor upgrade himself to match his status as Tekunin Grandmaster. TO give you a description of what he's supposed to look like, he's roughly 9-10' tall, extremely bulky and heavy, but can use wheels under the soles of his feet for better manoeuvreability, and can launch 30 missiles simultaneously (20 from his chest, 2 from his shoulder cannons, 4 from his sides, and 4 from his thighs). His head looks like a combination of that of an Alien and a Predator, except that the back of his head is a lot longer to accomodate various wires plugging into his brain. His arms also have four special plates that when the arch up from his forearms and spin, produce a massive energy blast, so that he doesn't have to rely only on missiles.
Hopefully that description isn't too confusing. Once again, thanks for taking an interesting in my story! Your comments are always welcome. grin
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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
07/15/2008 02:23 AM EDT
The description is great! Thanks for that. smile

I really like the idea of making Sektor like that, its very cool and scary actually. An even more real and deadlier danger!

I havent forgotten about your other fics btw. I'll get to those asap. I've really had fun reading your story.

Good job once again.
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RE: Fan Submission: Red Dragon Mavado
07/17/2008 07:54 PM EDT
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The description is great! Thanks for that. smile
I really like the idea of making Sektor like that, its very cool and scary actually. An even more real and deadlier danger!

Yeah, that was the idea. I always think about my fan fiction as being as much like the game as possible, so I imagine the characters as how they would be represented if it was a game. I always pictured Onaga (obviously), Drahmin (now super-powered thanks to Quan Chi's magic), and Sektor as being end bosses.
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