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05/06/2006 09:59 PM (UTC)by
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04/26/2006 11:46 PM (UTC)
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Black-Rose
04/27/2006 12:07 AM (UTC)
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I didn't really like this piece dude, you lacked in time to edit this piece out.
Here are some useful opinions:

The Dragon Logo is horrible! (no offence). The circle that centers the dragon isn't straight, and the dragon drawing is flawed deeply. You could've taken the time to make the circle straight, and to've edited the dragon a little.

Scorpion isn't good. The details are nice in what you added, but the base of how good you drew him, isn't very "outstanding". He is out of line, and he is leaning to the side, which I see. The whole drawing of him looks sloppy, and doesn't look like you put enough time into.

The way you spelled Scorpion's name wasn't right, you replaced all of the harpoons with the "O"s, when you should've just of put it in place with the "I". A line pointing up doesn't look like an "O" at all, it would fit as "I" better.

I really, am not impressed with this. You could've taken more time to edit this out, re-do all of your mistakes, and then check it out again. Next time you submit something like this, I advise that you show it as a regular topic first, get out opinions, change them, and then submit it.
Not very good: 2/5

P.S.
I see that you mentioned that this was from a comic that you made/making, well, I would like to see this comic! Is it hand drawn, like this picture, or do you use actual sprites?
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Hikari715
04/27/2006 12:38 AM (UTC)
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I hate to disapppoint you dude, but Black-Rose is right.
Pretty good for a start I guess. Keep practicing. 2/5 EDIT: I am still willing to see your comic though. Sounds interesting.smile
Thank you for your criticism but Note that these were just rough sketches. If I ever return to update these, I will use the ideas you have plotted out.
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