I was looking through some old emails, and found this story i wrote, I have improved recently, but decided to show it to you guys, please tell me if you like it...And i will try to continue...




The camera moves from solid darkness into a smooth arena, covered by spikes, this was Onaga's throne room. The camera follows in to Onaga falling down to his so-called death. Shujinko falls to his knees in exhausation, seeing as he defeated the one being. He gets up, walks away. The camera zooms into Onaga's eyes, and they open. The camera flies into Shujinko's hand, and he reveals his sword he hid into his sleeve, and throws the sword in Onaga's head, finishing him off for once.
Solid darkness again, fading into light, cleansing light, Chaosrealm is wounded by light, Earth is wounded by climatically enemies, Outworld is concealed in darkness. Zoom to darkness again, and a pair of eyes open, then another, then 2 more, then 3 more open.

MORTAL KOMBAT: REDEMPTION


After Shujinko finished off the Dragon King, a danger was caused by the near-merging of the realms, the danger wasn't a who, but an it, just climatically hazzardous. Explosions started at Earth, the military did some research, and there was nothing causing them, as if the worlds had been imploding upon themselves. Chaos spread, and concealed, the world.
In the darkness, Shao Kahn could see a dark storm rising above Outworld. "It has begun." Kahn uttered. "Those fools just had to bring him back to life. They'll see, but I'll pay the price also."
"Oh, no. Mother, what is happening?" Kitana whispered with fear and confusion in her fragile tone. Sindel replied with a simple breath, "Chaos will overcome." But uttered those words with a startled look on her face, as if she'd seen a mirage of her dead soul. What she had known was that of what nobody had heard. She knew, that the apocalypse would create a new beginning, a new war, and a new face of an enemy.
The Netherrealm has started to succumb to darkness, and as surprising as it had been to the political government of Chaosrealm, light had spread, but it wasn't a light that gave security, it was a light that cleansed of soul vessels. Corpses started to appear, and slowly dissolve into the ground. Burned by the light, Havik uttered his last breath, and started to burn into lesser flesh.
"Have you heard of this insanity?!" The head of guardians roared at anger, in Orderrealm. They had a spy lurking around Chaosrealm, and they had found out easily, that Chaosrealm had become nothing, but Light, poisonous light. The insanity they referred to, was that of Hotaru's failure to lead the guardians that were overseeing the Chaosrealm to life, Hotaru wasn't dead along with them, but dead by Kenshi's blade. Killed by the one who truly could see deception.
A new evil rose, and created a challenge for the 6 worlds. The evil was truly not an who either, but within the seven chosen ones. Three will be good, and Four will be the enemy.
Unfortunately, for the implorers of answers, warriors came to the Elder God's Temple, and saw that they had all been murdered, by a powerful being. The only god that managed to escape was Fujin, the Wind God. The minds of all warriors had forgotten that Raiden ceased to be a God. This thought reliefed them, for he wasn't a target. Unfortunately, they had nobody to answer their confusion. They had to find Fujin, or hope that Raiden, in his scarcely appearances, could explain the lost message.
Burrowed in the catacombs of Outworld, Shao Kahn and Goro rested, and planned their mission, to rescue hope. Fortunately for them, they couldn't be affected by this, but that was unfortunate for the Earth warriors.
Sindel looked away from the view, and closed the curtains to the window, sat Jade and Kitana down, and started to explain.


"A long time ago, before Shao Kahn had ever seen life, There was a cruel master, which one couldn't defy, or he would see to your demise. His place was one which gave me a shock, Shinnok's father. He was cruel to his own son, tormented him, and banished him to the Netherrealm. Residing in the Outworld, he had plenty of souls to torment, and keep for his own. He had so much trust, but he betrayed them all. Before he got power, however.
There was a raging war between Chaosrealm and Orderrealm, but he came to their aid, and brought peace by compromise. The 2 realms trusted him, and gave him support, along with Outworld.
This, however, was too much for him. He went insane with power, and started to torment souls. This caused the worlds to join forces, and mandate war on Sultiken, after a long period of pain and violence, Sultiken's forces turned against him, and finished him off. But his soul had so many souls involved, welded inside of him, and some fled his body, and found new vessels into 7 bodies.
Those 7 bodies weren't just random choices, they were chosen by their skill, and fate. Unfortunately, nobody knew what would occur with the souls, so far, it hasn't happened. As Sultiken died, he roared a message that the souls would do their job as he came back for revenge.
We'll find out who got 'possesed', and they will do their job, I just hope that it doesn't affect us. I'm afraid...He has returned."

"And we'll be ready, I hope." Uttered the figure in darkness.

Gawking in shock, which ended her speech, she wondered who was that figure concealed in darkness standing at the doorway. Kitana pulled out her fans, and started to lunge at the figure. "Stop!" Jade screamed, and Kitana did so. The man walked into light, and showed that he had not died after all. Kitana looked in akwardness, and saw that it was Rain.
Shining. Light. Overcomed. Chaosrealm. Chaosrealm was nothing like the name intended, it was a site of light, as if the light had come from within. However, the same cannot be said for Orderrealm, which became a paradoxical point of view, when it was concealed in death's stink. Transparent acid started to melt away lives.

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