Sabre....The Outcome. Part 2 Added.
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Sabre....The Outcome. Part 2 Added.
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posted01/02/2005 02:58 AM (UTC)by

For those of you familiar with the create a character tournament,you should know Sabre.He was cut 2nd round,and in the story had been dragged to the depths of hell.I decided to begin a follow up on him,what happened to him after that.I wrote this about a month ago,and depending on feedback and how my life is gonna go,I will have the continuation up as soon as I can.You will truly understand this if you have read the story,which would be great.Welcome to opinions.
Sabre : The Outcome.
I was defeated in battle by Keilienaten,and pulled down to the depth's of hell.I lied in wait,waiting for my oppurtunity to escape.Little did I know,it would not come to me.I began to have 'good' behavior,deceiving all in my path,to get to the netherrealm,one step closer,to my fight,my revenge.
It seemed as if Shinnok had control of hell,in his grips,he was my first...
Shinnok's Lair
I walked in,as he see's the fallen elder god Shinnok sitting in a throne,curiously staring at me.The look in his eyes,so unexpecting of his distant future.
I said my words 'Lord Shinnok'
I bowed before him.
Shinnok spoke 'And who would you be?Another pathetic warrior killed and pulled down here?'
My eyes filled with anger,but I knew I had only one oppurtunity,and I wasnt going to screw it up 'Thy name is Sabre,I have come from the Mortal Kombat tournament being held by the Dragon King,Onaga...'
Shinnok looked unimpressed 'And you were defeated,and sent here am I correct?'
I responded,trying to calm myself 'I had been defeated by Keilienaten,a very powerful warrior,the cracks of doom opened as your hell hounds dragged me down here!'
He stared down at me 'Sabre was it?I see potential in you...your anger could serve me very well'
I nearly chuckled,trying not to laugh while spitting out 'Would be an honor to serve you Shinnok'
He sounded pleased 'Excellent,show me your powers first 'Sabre',see if you are what you are built to be'
He sent in a bloody warrior,a long sword in hand,the tip covered in blood. 'Ha!That thing?'
The warrior charged towards me,I grabbed his arm and began swinging him around.I let go as he flew into a wall,splattering it with blood.
I began to walk over,but Shinnok interuppted me 'That is all I need to see...'
I ignored him and kept going,I grabbed the...thing by the neck and lifted him.Slowly I dug my fingers into his jaw,forcing them to come out the mouth.He began to scream.
Shinnok yelled 'That is enough!'
I looked towards him,and tugged hard and ripped the warriors jaw clean off.He began to crawl away,but stopped.
I sarcastically said 'Oh...did I kill him?Im SO sorry' I threw his jaw to the floor.
Shinnok stood,and began to clap 'Ruthless bastard arent you?I like that,very good.Follow me.'
He was so easily manipulated...he spoke to me while walking 'What do you wish for,Sabre?'
I smiled widely,and said the only word that came to mind 'Sensui...'
He turned towards me stunned 'Sensui!?You cannot go after him!Do you have any idea what his powers are?'
I chuckled 'Oh yes I do,and I like it.'
Shinnok 'Why do you wish to persue him?'
I looked to the left,staring at a wall. 'He must die,no further questions...none.'
He walked me into a room 'As you wish Sabre.You may stay here for now,but you will be summoned in hours.' He left the room.
I sat on the bed,and lay down.I stared at the ceiling,as I dozed off.
I began to dream,my first fight.I was defeated by double team,then a beautiful woman came.Katian was her name,she had helped me that day.
It brought forward another face,Gabrielle,I watched as I defended her,from her former friend Ghost.Only to be ambushed.I helped her that day.
I saw Katian being stabbed by Nasha with a poisen tipped dagger.I remember the pain she went through.
Gabrielle appears in front of me,I spoke with her that day.Her and Ryoko were attacked.
I see Katian lying in a bed,very sick.I see myself kill her and walk off.
The last image,I was being pulled down here,as the hand grabbed my spirit and dragged me down.
I woke in a sweat. A guard walked in 'Just in time,Shinnok needs you.'
I walked out,and followed the guard,I saw Shinnok standing infront of a huge curtain. 'This is a portal,tell no one of it,but you can go to the netherrealm through this exact portal.' He pulled open the curtain,revealing a huge portal.
I stared at the portal 'This is my ticket,one step closer.....' I stared sharply at him 'So easily manipulated...' I grabbed him by the throat and squeezed as hard as I could 'How does it feel Shinnok?'
He managed to speak,as choking on his own blood 'I knew I couldnt trust you.....'
I interuppted 'But you did,but you did...' I squeezed harder as his head exploded,the blood spraying over me.I walked over to the portal,about to step in.I could hear the feet of Tarkata,smelling the fresh blood.I saw Shinnok's staff. 'I could use this' I grabbed the staff,and jumped through the portal as the Tarkata ran to the room.I shattered the portal.
I was now in Netherrealm,the next step.Shinnok had no idea what was coming,and he payed the ultimate price for that mistake.My journey was nearly complete,I had almost been back,to my revenge....
Sabre : The Outcome.
I was defeated in battle by Keilienaten,and pulled down to the depth's of hell.I lied in wait,waiting for my oppurtunity to escape.Little did I know,it would not come to me.I began to have 'good' behavior,deceiving all in my path,to get to the netherrealm,one step closer,to my fight,my revenge.
It seemed as if Shinnok had control of hell,in his grips,he was my first...
Shinnok's Lair
I walked in,as he see's the fallen elder god Shinnok sitting in a throne,curiously staring at me.The look in his eyes,so unexpecting of his distant future.
I said my words 'Lord Shinnok'
I bowed before him.
Shinnok spoke 'And who would you be?Another pathetic warrior killed and pulled down here?'
My eyes filled with anger,but I knew I had only one oppurtunity,and I wasnt going to screw it up 'Thy name is Sabre,I have come from the Mortal Kombat tournament being held by the Dragon King,Onaga...'
Shinnok looked unimpressed 'And you were defeated,and sent here am I correct?'
I responded,trying to calm myself 'I had been defeated by Keilienaten,a very powerful warrior,the cracks of doom opened as your hell hounds dragged me down here!'
He stared down at me 'Sabre was it?I see potential in you...your anger could serve me very well'
I nearly chuckled,trying not to laugh while spitting out 'Would be an honor to serve you Shinnok'
He sounded pleased 'Excellent,show me your powers first 'Sabre',see if you are what you are built to be'
He sent in a bloody warrior,a long sword in hand,the tip covered in blood. 'Ha!That thing?'
The warrior charged towards me,I grabbed his arm and began swinging him around.I let go as he flew into a wall,splattering it with blood.
I began to walk over,but Shinnok interuppted me 'That is all I need to see...'
I ignored him and kept going,I grabbed the...thing by the neck and lifted him.Slowly I dug my fingers into his jaw,forcing them to come out the mouth.He began to scream.
Shinnok yelled 'That is enough!'
I looked towards him,and tugged hard and ripped the warriors jaw clean off.He began to crawl away,but stopped.
I sarcastically said 'Oh...did I kill him?Im SO sorry' I threw his jaw to the floor.
Shinnok stood,and began to clap 'Ruthless bastard arent you?I like that,very good.Follow me.'
He was so easily manipulated...he spoke to me while walking 'What do you wish for,Sabre?'
I smiled widely,and said the only word that came to mind 'Sensui...'
He turned towards me stunned 'Sensui!?You cannot go after him!Do you have any idea what his powers are?'
I chuckled 'Oh yes I do,and I like it.'
Shinnok 'Why do you wish to persue him?'
I looked to the left,staring at a wall. 'He must die,no further questions...none.'
He walked me into a room 'As you wish Sabre.You may stay here for now,but you will be summoned in hours.' He left the room.
I sat on the bed,and lay down.I stared at the ceiling,as I dozed off.
I began to dream,my first fight.I was defeated by double team,then a beautiful woman came.Katian was her name,she had helped me that day.
It brought forward another face,Gabrielle,I watched as I defended her,from her former friend Ghost.Only to be ambushed.I helped her that day.
I saw Katian being stabbed by Nasha with a poisen tipped dagger.I remember the pain she went through.
Gabrielle appears in front of me,I spoke with her that day.Her and Ryoko were attacked.
I see Katian lying in a bed,very sick.I see myself kill her and walk off.
The last image,I was being pulled down here,as the hand grabbed my spirit and dragged me down.
I woke in a sweat. A guard walked in 'Just in time,Shinnok needs you.'
I walked out,and followed the guard,I saw Shinnok standing infront of a huge curtain. 'This is a portal,tell no one of it,but you can go to the netherrealm through this exact portal.' He pulled open the curtain,revealing a huge portal.
I stared at the portal 'This is my ticket,one step closer.....' I stared sharply at him 'So easily manipulated...' I grabbed him by the throat and squeezed as hard as I could 'How does it feel Shinnok?'
He managed to speak,as choking on his own blood 'I knew I couldnt trust you.....'
I interuppted 'But you did,but you did...' I squeezed harder as his head exploded,the blood spraying over me.I walked over to the portal,about to step in.I could hear the feet of Tarkata,smelling the fresh blood.I saw Shinnok's staff. 'I could use this' I grabbed the staff,and jumped through the portal as the Tarkata ran to the room.I shattered the portal.
I was now in Netherrealm,the next step.Shinnok had no idea what was coming,and he payed the ultimate price for that mistake.My journey was nearly complete,I had almost been back,to my revenge....


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Interesting stuff rabid, i don't see why not to include this in the story thread.
If you want, I could make a new section on the site itself for outcomes of all characters. When you guys make em up, i'll put em up together.
If you want, I could make a new section on the site itself for outcomes of all characters. When you guys make em up, i'll put em up together.


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Toxik Wrote:
That's a very interesting story, RW. I like it a lot. I like how he is evil & very mysterious. Good Job.
Are you planning on making an sketch of Sabre?. I think it would be a great good to see how he looks.
That's a very interesting story, RW. I like it a lot. I like how he is evil & very mysterious. Good Job.
Are you planning on making an sketch of Sabre?. I think it would be a great good to see how he looks.
Already got a sketch,he is an older character of mine.People who know the character tournament should know him well...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/Rabid_Wolverine/Sabre_pose.jpg


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What's the matter....everyone illiterate these days?Seems as if no one wants to take the time to read a small story,and only watch something,or look at something.I didn't post this for it to be ignored.I thank Toxik and brodeur for posting and taking the time to read it and comment.Anyone else want to?
I think it could possibly be a good idea to have a tournament for the fallen characters in the tournaments once MK7 arrives or we at least know the bulk of its storyline. I'd like to see characters from the first, second, third (and likely more since MK7 is likely quite a ways off) in another tournament. The concepts can be improved upon, edited, etc. to fit into MK7's storyline. This way the critiques issued from the judges do not go to waste... and the authors have their chance to improve upon their character.
It's nice to see you aren't simply leaving your character to rust simply because he has lost, this really is not done enough in my opinion. I'm not too sure about actually killing Shinnok though... as I have a good feeling we haven't seen the last of him in Mortal Kombat.
It's nice to see you aren't simply leaving your character to rust simply because he has lost, this really is not done enough in my opinion. I'm not too sure about actually killing Shinnok though... as I have a good feeling we haven't seen the last of him in Mortal Kombat.


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~Crow~ Wrote:
It's nice to see you aren't simply leaving your character to rust simply because he has lost, this really is not done enough in my opinion. I'm not too sure about actually killing Shinnok though... as I have a good feeling we haven't seen the last of him in Mortal Kombat.
It's nice to see you aren't simply leaving your character to rust simply because he has lost, this really is not done enough in my opinion. I'm not too sure about actually killing Shinnok though... as I have a good feeling we haven't seen the last of him in Mortal Kombat.
Yes, it is nice to see that, because most likely there will be such an occasion that will take place some time in the future. Keep at it Rabid, it will be nice to see how improved the characters will get for those tournaments, with the help of the judges mostly from the beginning of the tournament, gives the user the idea of what they are missing and what they could improve upon.
I think i have a plan on how to setup the future tournaments, but first, we'll need to not think too far ahead, but still thinking a little at the same time.
I hope other users would enjoy enhancing upon their previous creations to see how well they would fare.
Peace.


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Wow...didn't know anything would really come out of this,awesome.With the thing on killing Shinnok,I know what you mean,may have not been the best choice.Thanks for the comments though.I think its a great idea to have a tournament of all the fallen characters,to see how much people can improve and learn from their mistakes.With the continuation of this story,its in the making,Sabre at this point of writing has just arrived in the neatherrealm...should be up within a few days.
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That was amazing. It's been a while since I've actually "read" a good piece of literature.
This Sabre, he seems like a nice fellow.
Ka-Tra
This Sabre, he seems like a nice fellow.
Ka-Tra
I think I was one of the first to read this a while back. I love that you are not letting him rot in the bowels of hell. He's a great character and you seem to have great plans ahead for him. As for the piece itself, it is very well written and I enjoyed it a great deal. Hope to see a continuation soon.


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Well...here is part two.I don't know if it turned out the way I would of exactly liked it to,but hopefully you guys still like it.
Sabre : The Outcome,continued.
As I hit the cold,hard ground the only thing that reached into my mind was Sensui....Sensui....Sensui.I looked around as tarkata began to surround me,I stayed there,kneeled, staring into their hungry eyes.One of them walked up to me,his face had been scarred,bones ran through his skin...he spoke to me.
Tarkata 'So we got a new bitch in town,do we?'
I simply kept my eyes on him,then slowly looked to the floor 'I want nothing of you,I am here for one reason,and one reason only,but....'
He slapped me across the face 'But what,fool?'
I lunged onto him and drew out on of my thrice dragon 'But I AM willing to kill whoever gets in my FUCKING WAY!'
He stared at me,almost in fear 'I mean you no harm,no disresp....'
I quickly snapped on him 'You mean ME no disrespect?Then that slap was just a welcome was it?Consider this a warning,if I see any others come after me...there will be no mercy...'
I began to walk away,but I heard footsteps from behind me,I turned around and quickly punched the stomache with my blades,I pulled him closer to me 'Bares...si...ehre...'
I watched as the group began to slowly spread out,I looked at them all,then nudged forward and watched them all run in fear...I threw the tarkata down 'This...is the mark....of Sabre!' I drove my staff through the dying tarkata's stomache '....and I am here...' I let go of the staff and walked away.I watched out of the corner of my eye as a tarkata ran for the staff,I quickly drew a knife and threw it,impaling him in the head. 'And if ANYONE tries to take this staff,I sha'll personally HUNT you down and gut you like the little chickens that you all are!....Got it?'
I continued my search for some type of portal,some type of way to get my revenge on those who tormented me throughout my time....I was doing this all for Sensui,sure I had some friends,some good friends...but who needs friends?Where were these 'friends' when I was pulled into the depths of HELL?Friends are overrated...who needs them,they are only there until you truly need them...nevermore.
I walked through the village,these....demons just watching me like I was some kind of monster,but I wasn't...was I?I saw children playing,but as I walked by them they ran in fear.I continued my search...although I had no fucking idea where I was going,but I knew I was getting closer.
I followed my senses which brought me out of this village,I walked around seemingly mindlessly,but I knew I was going somewhere,I just didnt know where.I walked around a corner and say a huge beam of light,a woman dressed in white was being carried up,I thought about trying but decided against it.I watched in awe,as the beam slowly lifted her,I continued to watch,but just as she was going through some type of portal,I heard her yell. 'No,no not my kriss!' she yelled,I saw her reaching for some type of blade,but as she touched it she was quickly sucked in.I watched as the blade fell,making a loud clinking sound as it hit the ground.I slowly began to walk towards the blade as a tarkata quickly ran and picked it up,the little bastards pick up anything they can for free.I began to chase him,but as he saw me he ran as fast as his little ass could,he began to pull away from me,but I pulled out my thrice dragon and threw it into his calf,he fell in pain.
Tarkata 'Ahhh...what do you want with me?'
I kneeled beside him 'Give me the blade...'
He simply stared at me 'Find your own stuff!'
I pulled out the blade from his calf 'Give it to me before I do that to your throat,now.'
He just looked at me like I was crazy and dropped the blade at my feet 'There...there take it!Just leave me be.'
I began to stand 'Fine...BUT if you EVER try ANYTHING like this again,I will kill you.'
I picked up the blade and began to walk away,as I started to I collapsed to one knee. 'What the hell is this?' I yelled.Power was surging through my body,but not as I normally felt it,it was an overwhelming amount of...good.I felt as if I wanted to help anything I could see,but shook out of it.I looked back at the tarkata.
'Have you learned your lesson?'
He wouldnt look at me,his voice trembled '...yes,yes I do...'
I smirked at him 'I don't believe you...' I grabbed him by his head and with one swift slice,decapitated the tarkata...a feeling came over me,as if I was helping...
Sabre : The Outcome,continued.
As I hit the cold,hard ground the only thing that reached into my mind was Sensui....Sensui....Sensui.I looked around as tarkata began to surround me,I stayed there,kneeled, staring into their hungry eyes.One of them walked up to me,his face had been scarred,bones ran through his skin...he spoke to me.
Tarkata 'So we got a new bitch in town,do we?'
I simply kept my eyes on him,then slowly looked to the floor 'I want nothing of you,I am here for one reason,and one reason only,but....'
He slapped me across the face 'But what,fool?'
I lunged onto him and drew out on of my thrice dragon 'But I AM willing to kill whoever gets in my FUCKING WAY!'
He stared at me,almost in fear 'I mean you no harm,no disresp....'
I quickly snapped on him 'You mean ME no disrespect?Then that slap was just a welcome was it?Consider this a warning,if I see any others come after me...there will be no mercy...'
I began to walk away,but I heard footsteps from behind me,I turned around and quickly punched the stomache with my blades,I pulled him closer to me 'Bares...si...ehre...'
I watched as the group began to slowly spread out,I looked at them all,then nudged forward and watched them all run in fear...I threw the tarkata down 'This...is the mark....of Sabre!' I drove my staff through the dying tarkata's stomache '....and I am here...' I let go of the staff and walked away.I watched out of the corner of my eye as a tarkata ran for the staff,I quickly drew a knife and threw it,impaling him in the head. 'And if ANYONE tries to take this staff,I sha'll personally HUNT you down and gut you like the little chickens that you all are!....Got it?'
I continued my search for some type of portal,some type of way to get my revenge on those who tormented me throughout my time....I was doing this all for Sensui,sure I had some friends,some good friends...but who needs friends?Where were these 'friends' when I was pulled into the depths of HELL?Friends are overrated...who needs them,they are only there until you truly need them...nevermore.
I walked through the village,these....demons just watching me like I was some kind of monster,but I wasn't...was I?I saw children playing,but as I walked by them they ran in fear.I continued my search...although I had no fucking idea where I was going,but I knew I was getting closer.
I followed my senses which brought me out of this village,I walked around seemingly mindlessly,but I knew I was going somewhere,I just didnt know where.I walked around a corner and say a huge beam of light,a woman dressed in white was being carried up,I thought about trying but decided against it.I watched in awe,as the beam slowly lifted her,I continued to watch,but just as she was going through some type of portal,I heard her yell. 'No,no not my kriss!' she yelled,I saw her reaching for some type of blade,but as she touched it she was quickly sucked in.I watched as the blade fell,making a loud clinking sound as it hit the ground.I slowly began to walk towards the blade as a tarkata quickly ran and picked it up,the little bastards pick up anything they can for free.I began to chase him,but as he saw me he ran as fast as his little ass could,he began to pull away from me,but I pulled out my thrice dragon and threw it into his calf,he fell in pain.
Tarkata 'Ahhh...what do you want with me?'
I kneeled beside him 'Give me the blade...'
He simply stared at me 'Find your own stuff!'
I pulled out the blade from his calf 'Give it to me before I do that to your throat,now.'
He just looked at me like I was crazy and dropped the blade at my feet 'There...there take it!Just leave me be.'
I began to stand 'Fine...BUT if you EVER try ANYTHING like this again,I will kill you.'
I picked up the blade and began to walk away,as I started to I collapsed to one knee. 'What the hell is this?' I yelled.Power was surging through my body,but not as I normally felt it,it was an overwhelming amount of...good.I felt as if I wanted to help anything I could see,but shook out of it.I looked back at the tarkata.
'Have you learned your lesson?'
He wouldnt look at me,his voice trembled '...yes,yes I do...'
I smirked at him 'I don't believe you...' I grabbed him by his head and with one swift slice,decapitated the tarkata...a feeling came over me,as if I was helping...
Nice work man, You continue to make Sabre more interesting. The Tarkatan interaction was nice..and Sabre's own reaction when he gripped the blade. So now we know how he might escape the netherrealm...but What then? DUN DUN DUN... O.o


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Sabre seems to be a wee bit on edge, lol. He definetly has a one track mind. I didn't think that his encounters with Sensui would have that type of affect on him. But at the moment, he's in the top layer of the Netherealm, guess who's at the bottom? He remind me of Scorpions younger days. Great job, I might do something like this for either Sensui or Ravage after this concludes.


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Thanks for the opinions guys,im enjoying doing this alot,and I hope that I can get back to the story thread very soon.Smoke...with Sensui,at first I actually hated him,sounds strange but he pissed me off lol.But now,just to see what I can do,Sensui has been like a god send for Sabre.I am going to continue this,and conclude it soon...maybe.
Others opinions are welcome.
Others opinions are welcome.
Good Job on the update. I like it a lot. I like how he describes his feelings about him and other people. I like the way the dialogue is, and I also like the way he thinks and the way he acts. I think is a great story.. I like it a lot. Good Job.


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Rabid_Wolverine Wrote:
Thanks for the opinions guys,im enjoying doing this alot,and I hope that I can get back to the story thread very soon.Smoke...with Sensui,at first I actually hated him,sounds strange but he pissed me off lol.But now,just to see what I can do,Sensui has been like a god send for Sabre.I am going to continue this,and conclude it soon...maybe.
Others opinions are welcome.
Thanks for the opinions guys,im enjoying doing this alot,and I hope that I can get back to the story thread very soon.Smoke...with Sensui,at first I actually hated him,sounds strange but he pissed me off lol.But now,just to see what I can do,Sensui has been like a god send for Sabre.I am going to continue this,and conclude it soon...maybe.
Others opinions are welcome.
Lol. When I was made Sensui I wanted to make a character that people loved to hate. But also I wanted people to like him at the same time. Guess I succeded.
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