:: Scarlet/Frost Fight 1 ::
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:: Scarlet/Frost Fight 1 ::
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RE: Fan Submission: :: Scarlet/Frost Fight 1 ::
06/19/2011 12:07 AM EDT
Three things noticed after submitting, besides that I need to re-scan it better...

A.) The last panel with Scarlet stabbing Frost needs re-working. Scarlet's pose isn't correct.

B.) Need to touch up Scarlet's finger when she's touching the blood on Frost's face.

C.) Scarlet's swords needs to have something on them that shows that they're on her rather than just floating in mid-space. This was just a

"show off what was finished the other day even though there's still work needed to be done." I just wanted to point these out, because I realized it after I submitted, so I spared you some time. Though if you think there's other things that needs a touch up or needs major fixing, by all means point them out for me.

Thanks!
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RE: Fan Submission: :: Scarlet/Frost Fight 1 ::
06/19/2011 01:41 AM EDT
Its kinda hard to read what they're saying but so far it looks pretty good.
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RE: Fan Submission: :: Scarlet/Frost Fight 1 ::
06/19/2011 04:31 PM EDT
Love it, keep 'em coming.
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RE: Fan Submission: :: Scarlet/Frost Fight 1 ::
06/19/2011 05:05 PM EDT
maximus12 Wrote:
Its kinda hard to read what they're saying but so far it looks pretty good.


You can blame my scanner for that. I'm going to re-trace everything once I get the last minute touches done with it and re-scan it, hopefully coming out darker this time. But thanks for the feedback!

jack4813 Wrote:
Love it, keep 'em coming.


Thank you!
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RE: Fan Submission: :: Scarlet/Frost Fight 1 ::
06/21/2011 09:42 AM EDT
Yeah, if you could ink these, that would be great.


Ink them and color them and you'd have a damn good looking comic book.
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