Scorpion Killing Spree
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Scorpion Killing Spree
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posted10/03/2003 08:28 PM (UTC)byMember Since
03/02/2003 09:09 PM (UTC)
Here we go post comments and such:

yeah i'm the first to comment
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i really don't like the life bars. to many of them, it would look much better to put all their names on one bar.
because this (3 bars) takes up to much room and looks odd since theres only 1 on the other side.
the blood could use some more work, then just paste.
blend it more in the pic.
ok idea for the fatal. maybe make each fighter in a different position, like my girlfriend getting freaky
um..... otherwise its kool.
ok
i really don't like the life bars. to many of them, it would look much better to put all their names on one bar.
because this (3 bars) takes up to much room and looks odd since theres only 1 on the other side.
the blood could use some more work, then just paste.
blend it more in the pic.
ok idea for the fatal. maybe make each fighter in a different position, like my girlfriend getting freaky
um..... otherwise its kool.
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Zombie Wrote: put all their names on one bar. because this (3 bars) takes up to much room and looks odd since theres only 1 on the other side. |
Ah I should have done that, didn't think of that. Thanks for the tip for next time.
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its nice, i really like it, but the blood, i may always be sadystic and like seeing blood shed, but theres just too damn much blood, but the idea is good
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Uh.... copy, past, copy past. The fatality idea is pretty lame, and all those life bars kind of fucked up the pictuer too. The blood looks horrible.
Dude, I thought you were better than this. Yeah you are. You have done better than this.
Dude, I thought you were better than this. Yeah you are. You have done better than this.
Defiantly, you have done much better than this. There isn't any editing present here, and I remember you have used some in the past. Anyway, I agree that the lifebars make it look very cluttered, and also cause Scorpion's lifebar to be in an incorrect position. But I'm not sure that combining all the names in one lifebar would be the best way to go either. In theory, Scorpion could simply beat just one of these characters, and could have a victory over all three of them. Not quite sure what to say about this, its really not such a good idea either way.
The sprites positions are a bit boring, it would have been much more interesting with them all placed differently. For example, one could be in this kneeling position, one could be standing, and one could be facing the other direction. The spear could also pass through the characters in different parts of their bodies. The one sprite that is kneeling could have the spear through his head. The one that is standing could have the spear penetrating his chest (of course a sprite edit would be appropriate in this case). Ans the sprite that is facing the other direction could have the spear gone through his back (another sprite edit probably would be needed). Another interesting idea would be to have Scorpion in "retract" position already. It could add alot of depth I believe, since the two in the front could be impaled on the spear, and the one who is farthest from Scorpion could be in a position where he is coming back toward him. Those are just a few suggestions if you ever want to do this again.
As for the blood, well obviously that needs quite a bit of work. Its the same pattern on all of the victims, which tends to make things dull. If you look at Jax, you can see the spear is passing through his head, yet the blood you pasted is below the actual point of entry. The blood below their shoulders is far too plentiful, very overdone. Edit it on each sprite and make it your own. Also, add shadows and dim the background. Like I said, I know you can do better than this.
The sprites positions are a bit boring, it would have been much more interesting with them all placed differently. For example, one could be in this kneeling position, one could be standing, and one could be facing the other direction. The spear could also pass through the characters in different parts of their bodies. The one sprite that is kneeling could have the spear through his head. The one that is standing could have the spear penetrating his chest (of course a sprite edit would be appropriate in this case). Ans the sprite that is facing the other direction could have the spear gone through his back (another sprite edit probably would be needed). Another interesting idea would be to have Scorpion in "retract" position already. It could add alot of depth I believe, since the two in the front could be impaled on the spear, and the one who is farthest from Scorpion could be in a position where he is coming back toward him. Those are just a few suggestions if you ever want to do this again.
As for the blood, well obviously that needs quite a bit of work. Its the same pattern on all of the victims, which tends to make things dull. If you look at Jax, you can see the spear is passing through his head, yet the blood you pasted is below the actual point of entry. The blood below their shoulders is far too plentiful, very overdone. Edit it on each sprite and make it your own. Also, add shadows and dim the background. Like I said, I know you can do better than this.
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It is actually for a contest a killing spree..... But thanx for the feedback and whatnots.
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