sektor seven personal log no. 78.901.56 WTF H4X!?!
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07/18/2010 01:24 PM EST
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07/22/2010 12:12 AM EST
Please tell me that you're doing this for amusement, and not as an exposé of writing talent. I appreciate the fact that you're keeping an on-going 'log' as Sektor, but for what purpose.

You're not too skilled at writing out the descriptions of the things involved in your plot, which is non-existant. Maybe that's your intention. Honestly, as an aspiring writer, I can only offer you advice from my own expierence. Scrap this whole log thing. Take your idea involving Sektor, and put it into a real, thought-out fan fiction. Take your time, explain the setting, the characters, the items involved. Have an overarching plot. Make it about something serious, something engaging, not "Omg h4x". I see potential in you. Read some good fiction novels, and try to emulate those authors. I recommend Eric Nylund (most notable for his 'Halo' novels).
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07/22/2010 08:39 AM EST
the plot line is non canonical. these events take place in my D&D game based off the mk franchise.
"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name. "Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.
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07/22/2010 08:47 AM EST
Sektorseven Wrote:
the plot line is non canonical. these events take place in my D&D game based off the mk franchise.

Oh. Dear. God.
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You just threw out any credibility you had left with your works.
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RE: Fan Submission: sektor seven personal log no. 78.901.56 WTF H4X!?!
07/22/2010 12:55 PM EST
Sektorseven Wrote:
the plot line is non canonical. these events take place in my D&D game based off the mk franchise.

Where the fuck is that Facepalm thing that SEGAManiac7 was looking for in Drive By?

wait...I found it


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07/22/2010 05:20 PM EST
Jironobou Wrote:
Sektorseven Wrote:
the plot line is non canonical. these events take place in my D&D game based off the mk franchise.

Where the fuck is that Facepalm thing that SEGAManiac7 was looking for in Drive By?

wait...I found it



Thanks for the code
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RE: Fan Submission: sektor seven personal log no. 78.901.56 WTF H4X!?!
07/22/2010 05:28 PM EST
how are all these entries being accepted?
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07/22/2010 05:34 PM EST
SubMan799 Wrote:
how are all these entries being accepted?


I'm guessing it's because the author shows promise(or at least he did IMO)


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RE: Fan Submission: sektor seven personal log no. 78.901.56 WTF H4X!?!
07/22/2010 06:07 PM EST
hes getting alot of dragon points of this shitty writing
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07/22/2010 06:13 PM EST
Nope.

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07/22/2010 07:02 PM EST
SEGAmaniac7 Wrote:
hes getting alot of dragon points of this shitty writing

Look at the user rating, out of all of those dragon points, 0 of them are filled right now.


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07/22/2010 07:09 PM EST
ok now that you all are disbelivers i can show you how i tricked you. all of these events happan in the backround. it is a ultra secret agency. no one knows everything about sektor seven. only Crimson D. knows all.

you see the whole noncanonal D&D game explaination was used as a deception. i do run a D&D game and it is an mk based game but it is not part of my works.

i did this to get you to stop over analizing my works looking for bad things. they do not have be the perfect way. i just wanted people to enjoy them and tell me what they liked. but i see that it did not turn out this way so i just dont know what to say now.
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name. "Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.
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07/22/2010 08:15 PM EST
Sektorseven Wrote:
ok now that you all are disbelivers i can show you how i tricked you. all of these events happan in the backround. it is a ultra secret agency. no one knows everything about sektor seven. only Crimson D. knows all.

you see the whole noncanonal D&D game explaination was used as a deception. i do run a D&D game and it is an mk based game but it is not part of my works.

i did this to get you to stop over analizing my works looking for bad things. they do not have be the perfect way. i just wanted people to enjoy them and tell me what they liked. but i see that it did not turn out this way so i just dont know what to say now.
confusedconfusedconfused

You fail for pulling pathetic internet argument technique #1

Pathetic Argument Techniques


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07/22/2010 08:55 PM EST
Guys, be nice. You don't have to like his works certainly, but let's not resort to poking fun and being mean.
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07/22/2010 10:21 PM EST
Jironobou Wrote:
SEGAmaniac7 Wrote:
hes getting alot of dragon points of this shitty writing

Look at the user rating, out of all of those dragon points, 0 of them are filled right now.


Thats the rating he still got 2 dragon points for this
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RE: Fan Submission: sektor seven personal log no. 78.901.56 WTF H4X!?!
07/23/2010 12:55 AM EST
SEGAmaniac7 Wrote:
hes getting alot of dragon points of this shitty writing

To prevent artistic bias, all official submissions receive 2 DPs, no matter what the rater believes the work deserves. This goes for stories, drawings, and animations.
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