Shattered Alliance
Shattered Alliance
02/23/2008 10:23 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/25/2008 12:18 PM EST
EDIT:2/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/25/2008 02:29 PM EST
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Epic fail.

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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/25/2008 04:08 PM EST
Now that I look at it...it looks like he copied and pasted.
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/25/2008 05:23 PM EST
Cyber_EV1L Wrote:
Now that I look at it...it looks like he copied and pasted.


What a waste if copied and paste.
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/25/2008 07:52 PM EST
Sub-Frost055 Wrote:
Cyber_EV1L Wrote:
Now that I look at it...it looks like he copied and pasted.


What a waste if copied and paste.


*facepalm*

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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/25/2008 08:04 PM EST
lol.
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/25/2008 08:24 PM EST
He gets Dragon points for that? I might as well put hundreds of crappy stick figure drawings in the Fan Submission just so I can get some myself confused
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/25/2008 08:31 PM EST
There's no editing done at all.He took most things from other fakes.The tall mountain is just the MK2 battle plan thing.sleepCopy and Paste.
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 01:17 AM EST
I like the Santa Clause flying past the moon...
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 01:28 AM EST
MK-4-LIFE Wrote:
I like the Santa Clause flying past the moon...

That's the only "Pro" that exists in this fake lol
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 06:10 PM EST
At first i didnt know who made this and thought it was from a new person. I was suprised when i read the name. I've seen your other fakes and I know you can do better...alot better. So i dont know what's up with this one maybe you were tired but you've done better and probally will remain to.....
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 06:21 PM EST
Wow 95% of the posts here are useless and of a noob-like nature.
Anyways here's an updated version: Version 2a

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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 06:26 PM EST
You can never take critisicm can you?Say goodbye to those DPs. EDIT:
UltimateRyu Wrote:
wow 95% of the posts here are useless
LMAO!That's sad how you quickly took away the picture so you won't lose the DPs. Well,Tom what do you think about that...Two Thumbs Down.
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 06:50 PM EST
Cyber_EV1L Wrote:
You can never take critisicm can you?Say goodbye to those DPs.

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UltimateRyu Wrote:
wow 95% of the posts here are useless

LMAO!That's sad how you quickly took away the picture so you won't lose the DPs.

Well,Tom what do you think about that...Two Thumbs Down.


It's not worth arguing with Ryu, becuase he beleives that everyone on this site are noobs.

You see, submitting things you actually posted a while back is noobish

I remember seeing this pic before, and what's the deal with promoting the same thing without changing? Only for the DPs... that's noobish too

See, Ryu, please define why you beleive 95% of the people who gave crit are noobs. I would like to know why I am apart of that. If this message is useless to you like it was in a different thread, you're basically useless, and a noob as well.

But you know, it's kind of pathetic to actually try to get a point across to you, Ryu, and I know that I'm better than you because if I were you, I'd take crit, but I'm not you, and I'm glad that I'm not you nor will I ever in the future.

So there, it's a waste to actually say something good about your picture if all you're going to do is say everyone is a noob for not liking your picture.

NOOB!
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 06:53 PM EST
Sub-Frosty you saw the pic too right?

I have a wtiness!
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 07:16 PM EST
In response to UltimateRyu's piece:

I don't like it at all.
First off, the fact that there is no complete floor makes the arena too gimmicky. Having to jump from platform to platform is something that one would see in Smash Bros, and should not be in Mortal Kombat. Also, the platforms are big enough to support two fighters in close-range only, which means that all it would take to knock someone into the fiery pit is weak attack with some knock back, like a single kick or a few punches. The size of each platform, and the idea that all it takes is for one to win the match is to either connect with jump attack, counter a jump attack, or just get close enough to kick someone, does not make the stage useful.
Aesthetically, the stage is boring. A lone mountain in the background? Bridge poles decorated with spikes? A blue moon with a silhouette passing in front of it? All of these are MK elements, but they have been used before and don't add anything that is fresh, but still nostalgic to MK's style. Aside from the fire coming from the depths, there's nothing original about the stage that makes it stand out from anything that has appeared in any existing 2D MK stage.*
And as for the fighters, well, it's just confusing. What did Jax to to Sonya exactly? Considering how much space he is taking on the platform, I have to assume that he must've carried her to that location and held her above his head to perform the fatality. But once again, I have no clue what he did to her to break her in two. The thing is, since his arms are in blade-mode, I could assume he cut her in half, but that would mean that she would have been floating above Jax, which means that she could've actually been trying to jump over him! That makes sense... Except that unless she was standing at the very edge of Jax's same platform, she would have never made a good jump to avoid Jax, and since he's in the middle of the tiny platform, she wouldn't have had much space to land at that spot in the first place, let alone jump over him without fear of falling off. Also, since when can Jax produce electric bolts like Raiden? If that's what he used to cut her in half, then that's just lame, as electricity doesn't cut things, but burns them. Also, the electricity he is producing made me think it was connected to the lightning that's on his left, and when I looked at the fake quickly, I though that it was part of the lightning, not that he was producing it himself.
In the end, I have to say that this has to be the least practical stage idea for an MK game that I've ever seen, with a very uncharacteristic fatality.
*I know he copied and pasted the stuff, so please don't bother pointing it out to me.
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 09:04 PM EST
I appreciate the critique Jerrod but you're being a bit too technical about the scenario. Just use your imagination a lil and you will see the possibilties.

Also, the beautiful fire was hand crafted by me, which is not a C&P job.

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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/26/2008 10:49 PM EST
UltimateRyu Wrote:
I appreciate the critique Jerrod but you're being a bit too technical about the scenario. Just use your imagination a lil and you will see the possibilties.

Also, the beautiful fire was hand crafted by me, which is not a C&P job.

Yeah, which did not take much effort either...
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/27/2008 04:31 AM EST
Cyber_EV1L Wrote:
Sub-Frosty you saw the pic too right?

I have a wtiness!


Damn what was it? I need a good laugh after uni today. (Ryu's self-loving posts aren't cutting it anymore)
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/27/2008 12:26 PM EST
UltimateRyu Wrote:
I appreciate the critique Jerrod but you're being a bit too technical about the scenario. Just use your imagination a lil and you will see the possibilties.

Also, the beautiful fire was hand crafted by me, which is not a C&P job.


You want critiques, yet you want use not to be technical? Contradictory?

You want use to use our imaginations when YOU should just make it clear?

Oh, and woohoo for "handcrafted fire." It looks like shit. Congrats on that.

Also, it's possibilities.

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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/27/2008 03:19 PM EST
MKRocket Wrote:
UltimateRyu Wrote:
I appreciate the critique Jerrod but you're being a bit too technical about the scenario. Just use your imagination a lil and you will see the possibilties.

Also, the beautiful fire was hand crafted by me, which is not a C&P job.


You want critiques, yet you want use not to be technical? Contradictory?

You want use to use our imaginations when YOU should just make it clear?

Oh, and woohoo for "handcrafted fire." It looks like shit. Congrats on that.

Also, it's possibilities.


You gotta read between the lines dude. What he's really saying is:

"Thanks for the critique Jerrod, but I know it sux. Posting bad fakes and getting Dps for it gives me an epic hard-on"
Same ol' same ol' sleep
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/27/2008 03:47 PM EST
fedegita Wrote:

You gotta read between the lines dude. What he's really saying is:

"Thanks for the critique Jerrod, but I know it sux. Posting bad fakes and getting Dps for it gives me an epic hard-on"

Same ol' same ol' sleep


I'm just pointing out his futility.

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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/28/2008 06:04 AM EST
My version was better. Too bad you stole the idea and made this piece of shit.
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RE: Fan Submission: Shattered Alliance
02/28/2008 11:01 AM EST
Nah, that pit fire came out great. I'm not manager of product development for nothing ya know. Maybe I'll give you a few pointers sometime MKR. Given your latest fake effort in creating sub-par special effects, you could use it.