Sheeva
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Sheeva
04/22/2006 12:50 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Sheeva
04/22/2006 05:42 PM EST
Very nice work dude! There are some good things I saw, and some bad parts that I have seen as well:

Good
I like your style with drawing dude, it is very clean, nice, and organized. I like the costume that you have given Sheeva, like how the straps cover that one area of her breasts. They way you made her hair flow through the air is pretty cool as well, makes it look like it is all windy and stuff. The cape you have around her is detailed, and well laid out. It doesn't show on her neck, but yet gets wider and wider as it goes down the body, that's a good way to do that. Nice job putting the arms in the right places, many people who draw Sheeva mis draw the arms to where they aren't even nor the same size. I can see you put some effort into this!

Bad
There aren't too many flaws that I have seen, just a few things that are bugging me, that is all. Sheeva's left eye is too close to the edge of her face. Let alone, her left side of her face is a little too small, and isn't buldged out wide enough to fit the mouth, eyes, etc. The eyes alone I thought should've been a little bigger, then have a sparkle in the eye, but make her look mad, otherwise that sparkle wouldn't go with her.

Nice job dude! I like this one more then any of your others!
Work on the advise I gave you, and you'll be even better next time!
5/5 Black-R
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RE: Fan Submission: Sheeva
04/22/2006 05:48 PM EST
THNX Black Rose for the tips and the good mark, c ya dude.glasses
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RE: Fan Submission: Sheeva
04/23/2006 03:21 PM EST
Oh and Black Rose, the cape is actually attached to her belt, sorta like Mileena's MKD costume, I got it of the MKA render of her new costume.
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RE: Fan Submission: Sheeva
04/23/2006 04:12 PM EST
Wow I like that 5/5. I like the shin and forearm guards, and the boob thing is reminiscent but very different from her MK3 costume, although it makes her look like a four armed jodie marsh. You're a great artist.
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RE: Fan Submission: Sheeva
04/23/2006 04:23 PM EST
Wow, nice. 5/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Sheeva
04/24/2006 11:39 AM EST
THNX for the feed back.
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