That is a fucking sweet drawing. I haven't read the bio yet, but I will.
Very nice. Smoke would kick ass if he looked like that! Awesome.

The bio is nice. I'd like to see Part Two.

I love it.

You two make a good team. Great drawing/concept and nicely written and interesting bio.

Whoa, I'm glad I decided to check this out.
Very, very nice stuff there - best concept I've seen for Smoke yet imo.
Critiquing drawings isn't really my strong point, so I won't try, not that I imagine I'd find much .

The bio is real nice too, a good team, fantastic work .

Overall: this is enough for me to cease to draw. Now ay I can reach up to that. Pen's off. (-(

Hmm. I like the style you're going for in these Cyborb concepts (like your sektor one). Little to complain about, the concept matches brilliantly with the bio. The only thing that kinda bothers me is that he looks a little too much like Predator, in terms of how his head is shaped and the way his dredlocks look.
But all in all, this is still the BEST smoke concept I have ever seen, and I expect nothing less from someone with your talent. You should seriously been on the creative team in the MK staff.
4.5/5 I cant wait to see part 2

I love it. Smoke is very pleased.

5/5 You deserve nothing less.

Dayum. thats goooood. nice drawing, cool bio. excellent work. 10/10

That is a pretty cool pic. You really are one of the best artists here.

This is ridiculously good, tied with your Sektor concept as your best work 4 me...

Cyber Smoke is my fave MK character, and I was thoroughly disappointed w/ him in MKD, its too bad you don't work for the MK team - this concept is sick...

Very nice work- A couple items though
A text TYPO:
"TIRED to flee"
I assume was meant to be TRIED to flee.

Also, I can see a hint of a skull/jaw bone with teeth. I'm kind of a scorpion purist, so I don't like to see skull/skeletal designs in other characters myself as it seems to "bite" off scorpion.
Now if that was meant to be a metallic cyborg skull under there (Terminator) then thats more acceptable in concept, but the actual drawing and coloring does not represent that skeletal jaw and teeth as metallic.

Very nice, I love the black metal look and the spear looks very nice.

Thats a kick ass bio. Love it 10/10

Thanks for the input and compliments everyone, I appreciate it. Damn, I must have read and spell checked that thing like ten times. Oh well.

Well, I like this one quite a bit. The bio follows his story nicely.

The drawing itself is pretty good, though I get more of a Noob Saibot feel with the way it looks more on the black side with the dark blue eyes.

Even so, I give this a 4/5. I can't wait to see your alternate bio for him, Pat.

Fantastic job Aculeus. The picture is awesome, I like the way you have some of his original skull showing through the crack in his mask. His spear is also pretty awesome, and the background looks like Classic Sub-Zero from UMK3. Fantistic Job once again.

Wow, this is wonderful. 5/5.

I think you guys should work together more often.
Kinda reminds me of alien vs predator feeling. but still it's great. Very nice job overall, love the spear.

I might be intersted in tempting you. I wonder what could get out of our hands together. And since I am a complete donkey with coloring on PC, I ask for your assistance anyway.

Might you be interested in remaking /enhancing one of my pics?

THAT IS SO COOL!!! Can you make a Ninja Smoke Bio?

The second part of the bio is already written, you'll just have to wait and see what it is.

This is a Great Drawing 5 out of 5

That is fantastic work, as usual. I'm a big Smoke fan, and I'm glad to see that someone made a cool concept art for him. The bio's pretty good too. Can't wait to see the second page!

It's already been noted that this looks very much like Predator, but in this case I think that can be excused, because DAMN that's muthaphukkin' tizzight! I love the bio, too. 10/10