Smoke kills Baraka
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Smoke kills Baraka
06/29/2003 04:06 AM EST
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RE: Fan Art: Smoke kills Baraka
06/29/2003 01:59 PM EST
*yawns* and *sigh*
I havent been here for the last 3 days because I havent seen anything worth seeing and you just wasted my time, I have seen 10 times better work done in MS Paint and we fake pic makers give you are honest feedback and the info just goes in your ear and outthe other. I don't see why we have to waste are time by trying to slap sence into you if your not improving at all.
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RE: Fan Art: Smoke kills Baraka
06/29/2003 02:41 PM EST
Okay, this one could use some work.

Like the BG for example:
Try using more then just props. Maybe take a background and tweak it a little. Because when one too many props are used, people start to notice them. You should use two AT THE MOST. I made a BG similar to this one once...it didn't help the actual fake.

Now the Fatality on the other hand, could also use some work. Try doing something grotesque with the blood. Like maybe an organ showng or having the legs already starting to fall. It's just new stuff like that which will draw more viewers.

All you really need to do is spend more time on your fakes.

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RE: Fan Art: Smoke kills Baraka
06/29/2003 04:03 PM EST
Hmm, yes you are right, more time would be better.
The stage isn't too bad, but like Gl1tch said, tweak it a bit, change the colours of the props, their shape etc.

Anyhow:
- Win marks on the lifebar aren't correctly placed (I know, nit picking, lol).
- There seems to be a lack of blood. I mean if a torso was detatched from the body, you would think that some excess blood would be visible grin.

There isn't much "wrong" so to speak, it's just that the pic is very basic, the idea is quite old now, the spears through the torso's and the like.

I did however like the way that the harpoon goes into Baraka, you did well in making sure that the harpoon was not visible where it shouldn't be.

Either way, keep at it and I'm sure you will improve.
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06/29/2003 05:25 PM EST
*sighs* Smoke Kells Baraka....you are a bad man...very very bad man....Baraka come to you in your sleep and pimp slap you till you scream and cry like a little school girl with skinned knees. Back ground could be better too
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06/29/2003 10:40 PM EST
The BG is boring. Others have already stressed not to just use props like this. Lack of details in the background are boring, which is why its usually a good idea not to just piece props together. The seemingly complete lack of blood is strange, also Baraka appears to be in the wrong position if this were to actually happen. And if this is a fatality, why doesn't Smoke have just one win token?

But, you know that this was just thrown together, you could do better given time I believe. I appreciate you admitted this. Spend more than a day or two on it, and the result will be an improvement.
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RE: Fan Art: Smoke kills Baraka
07/05/2003 02:37 PM EST
its ok, that fatality has been done soooo much. Also its pretty much just a copy and paste. 1.5/5
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