Smoke
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Smoke
04/13/2004 07:28 PM EST
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RE: Fan Art: Smoke
04/26/2004 12:13 PM EST
Hmmmmmm... I think a bit more detail with this piece was needed. Your description was very interesting. The style you used kinda fits your view of Smoke, but I wish the style was tightened up more so that some detail would go well with it.

C'mon dude! Don't slip now!! LOL! That Baraka piece is such a gem!! Don't fall apart with your new stuff!! grin

Good job.

Rating: 3/5

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RE: Fan Art: Smoke
04/26/2004 12:18 PM EST
Pretty good job at getting it to look like what you imagined him as in your background story. I think that you should have put a little more details into it tho. His one hand being cringed and the other turning into smoke is a nice idea. Would like to see it again with more attention used for it. Overall good job tho.
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RE: Fan Art: Smoke
04/26/2004 01:36 PM EST
I like your concept of smoke, and you’ve translated his tormented anguish well. But I would have liked to have seen more detail and probably a full body concept instead of just the top half. But I still like it and it’s always good to see a different perspective of a character.
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RE: Fan Art: Smoke
04/26/2004 05:12 PM EST
I like the way you took "smoke" into a different direction. You tried to make him cyborg/human/smoke and it looks pretty good. I like the detail on his face, you did a very good job, and how his body is supposed to be smoke. I wouldnt want to see him return like this though. This smoke is really ugly looking and we already have baraka. 4/5
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RE: Fan Art: Smoke
04/27/2004 10:16 PM EST
Once again thanks for the comments. I never intended to submit this, but I thought you mortal kombat heads might like it. Thanks again. Expect better things from me in the future.
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