WEll... the fatality itself is not bad... I like it...
the problem is that the FATALITY sign moves arround!!! next time try to use some guidelines to see better wheere u put the sign in every frame

umm, I think you watched just the origanal...I worked like four hours on the remake. remember the remake is here: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32915405/
NOT Here: http://tabmok99.mortalkombatonline.com/smokes_teleport_fatality.html
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Very nice. 5/5

The fatality is alright, alittle simple, but sound overall.

If you want to re-make it perfect though, you should consider such aspects as darkening the backround, improving the 'Smoke Wins' text (to just one line as opposed to two) and of course, you need sound for it to be 1337 central :-O

Not much has changed otherwise from the re-make it would seem, just he holds the head instead of dropping it :-/

Needs work on the quality aspect, otherwise, alright.

6/10

like it, but common sense: why would scorpions head rip off? should his whole body lift? make him impale him to the ground and then he tears his head off.

plz! Everyone knos that fatalities dont follow the laws of physics... like ever... just look at caged torso rip! shouldnt the whole body just lift, instead of te lgs being glued to the ground and cage beaking the torso off????

Anyway,,, other than little details like the color and size of "smoke wins" I like it a lot... I LOVE that he hols it instead of just dropping it

5/5

This is good, i like the quality of animation, i think its smooth and the physics of the spine, the swaying in the air is well done.

One thing I would add is perhaps more smoke affects around where he teleports. I would also suggest smoke forcing scorpion to fall backwards, like punching or kicking him to the ground rather than him just falling over like a tree.

Otherwise, good, 7/10