Sometimes Moves Dont Work Ya Know?
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posted06/17/2005 10:35 PM (UTC)by
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LiNkUeI200X
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11/21/2004 06:34 PM (UTC)
http://img90.echo.cx/img90/6225/somemovesdontwork8cv.png

Itz a comic.....
i know the comic is bad made, w/e then just rate it...........
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the_shirt_ninja
06/16/2005 09:48 PM (UTC)
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0/10, I've just seen this kind of sucky comics way too often to be generous.

Where's the sprite editing? All I see is a semi-transparent mess that used to be Kung Lao.
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balkcsiaboot
06/16/2005 11:48 PM (UTC)
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the_shirt_ninja Wrote:
0/10, I've just seen this kind of sucky comics way too often to be generous.

Where's the sprite editing? All I see is a semi-transparent mess that used to be Kung Lao.


You took the words right out of my mouth.
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OngBak
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06/17/2005 12:08 AM (UTC)
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this really need improvement. 3/10wow
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JoRdANMan
06/17/2005 12:41 AM (UTC)
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If people know that their work isnt good then why do u bother posting it in the first place, to waste our time?? Lol w/e i dont mean to be an ass but its kinda true. As for the comic it kinda reminded me of Spiderman when his powers stopped working, just watched it today for the first time smile, so i thought it was ok. Atleast ur trying i guess, maybe in time ull get better. I give it a 4/10
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06/17/2005 02:38 AM (UTC)
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Yeah Kung Lao is kinda screwed up in the last image of him.

Also you spelled accidently wrong on the second last image were he's holding Baraka's head.

Also where is Baraka's body on the image where the harpoon hooks into Baraka's head (3rd Image of Baraka).

3/10 Needs a lot of work, but still worth taking a look at.
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zeroman
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06/17/2005 01:06 PM (UTC)
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i dont like it the text is placed in the same spot and cant tell which one goes first 5/10
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Zentile
06/17/2005 09:59 PM (UTC)
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Grammar mistakes= Minus 3 points
Close to no sprite editing and transparecy = minus 4 points
Humour lacking = minus 5 points
Misplaced speech bubbles = Too annoying. Minus 10 points

Gives you a wopping Minus 22 /10 rating.

Seriously though, you need some real work. Think about the things I pointed out and FIX THEM. I'm sure you'll do better next time IF you pay attention to the criticism.
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SuperMarioBro
06/17/2005 10:35 PM (UTC)
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Zentile = Correct.
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