Since there are Three Characters taking place in this Fake, I don't know if I have any advice on how you should have added the Life Bars/etc. However, this is a cool and funny Concept, I laughed to myself when I saw this. I like the Blood Effects on this Fake, but even though this is funny this is not your best Submission. So, Overall I give this Fake a 2/5.
Spidey Sprite is good, shadows i took note of, blood maybe coulda been better placement of Kano's head looks like Spidey's carrying it (Is he? ). Overall, feh id say 3/5.