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posted07/15/2004 09:54 PM (UTC)bySuperMarioBro Member Since
11/25/2003 03:11 AM (UTC)
Heh, cool. You might have wanted to put life bars in this one (although for most strips I'd never recommend that).
Also, why did he say "Not again?" His other arm looks fine. I would have changed the punchline to something else.
Maybe something like "Ooh, I hate when that happens!" or even a simple "Aw, crap".
Baraka broke a nail....lol.
MaxDam •07/15/2004 09:22 PM (UTC) •0
lol! Nice one!

lol good one
And I agree with K, the punchline can be beter ;)
I think that "Not again" is a much better last line than "Aw Crap" would be. With a simple "Aw Crap", this comic wouldn't be as funny as it is.
Zentile •07/15/2004 09:54 PM (UTC) •0
the_shirt_ninja Wrote: I think that "Not again" is a much better last line than "Aw Crap" would be. With a simple "Aw Crap", this comic wouldn't be as funny as it is. |
Agreed. Nice quicky.
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