I think that this is your best (seriously, compared to your other ones, it is).

Is it smaller? Yes, and that's good. You've still got prolems, though.

- You're still resizing stuff. If it's not the backgrounds, it's the sprites. With few exceptions, just leave the size alone.

- I still had to read stuff backwards. I shouldn't have to. Put things in the right order.

- Don't leave the cursor right next to the text if you're going to take a screenshot of it to put it in your comic. You can still see it!

- Well there is a small border around some of the panels, no big deal, but you should avoid those from now on.

]0MBAT Wrote: Is it smaller? Yes, and that's good. You've still got prolems, though. - You're still resizing stuff. If it's not the backgrounds, it's the sprites. With few exceptions, just leave the size alone. - I still had to read stuff backwards. I shouldn't have to. Put things in the right order. - Don't leave the cursor right next to the text if you're going to take a screenshot of it to put it in your comic. You can still see it! - Well there is a small border around some of the panels, no big deal, but you should avoid those from now on.

And to add to that, the seperate frames as seperate pics, isn'treally working for you. Thats Why the files are so large. Do it all on one big sheet, with frames/panels/boxes instead.

ok,thanx

And to think I actually believed you when you said all problems would be fixed.
The size is still a problem. Even though now the frames aren't dinosauric, things are stupidly resized.
The order of speech bubbles was still wrong in a couple of frames.
And of course... the unexistant humour.

I'm telling you, stop while you can. I'm sure you're good at other things, nobody's bad at everything. Stick to the things you're good at. You don't want to end up like LadyRaiden.