I drew this in class because I was bored. Its all in pen which would explain why I messed up on his left hand. Most of the shading detail was lost but I still like it =)
Seems easy, but nothing could be so hard. Trying to guess life's dealing, what's the next card? I'm surely folding, I don't like this hand at all.
•06/21/2004 10:53 PM (UTC) •
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This drawing is good, even though you did it in pen, which would explain why the quality isn't so good, I still think its a cool drawing.
From what shading you've done is great, especially on the legs, I think it really brings out the muscle detail. You should have done this same thing on his chest and arms to produce that same great effect. Obviously, his right hand is way to big, which you've already said.
You should try doing this same drawing in pencil. I think it would come out a lot better and maybe improve on those few minor flaws. Aside from that, great drawing, 3.5/5.
Thanks for the comments. On with the right hand I was trying to make it appear closer towards the viewer. I should have defined more of a bend in the arm to illistrate it. and yeah I should try it in pencil, but I already drew some new stuff I just need to scan, so look forward to more artwork from me
Yeah the pen made it look weird and funky. But other than that it looks great. Good detail shading but if it was pencil it would look ever better. 5/5.
That's pretty good for what I expect was a doodle. I see what you were going for with the hand. A little more foreshortening on the forearm would help too. The middle finger would only be a wee bit longer than the others. Like less than a quarter of an inch. The pose could be a little less stiff (mainly the other arm) but all in all it's very good.