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09/06/2003 10:25 AM EST
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 01:50 PM EST
As you might already know, I don't like your style at all, specially the ape-like fingers and hands.
He has too many muscles, too. It's like he has more muscles then the world has people.
The anatomy has stepped over the line of correctness, and overall, it's just not a pretty sight.
Try coloring it. No, even better, try making a completely diferent drawing.

BTW, where were you all this time, and why have you come back?
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 03:00 PM EST
I don't know if I like this or not, I mean, it kind of looks cool but like Zentile said the muscles and everything looks wrong. It kind of looks like he has like two tiny biceps on one arm.

It is interesting though, but like, maybe it's *too* interesting... o_o;
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 03:11 PM EST
zentile i cant understand why you dont like my style i mean whats so ugly about it some peoples are weird
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 03:20 PM EST
um what?
karim Wrote:
zentile i cant understand why you dont like my style i mean whats so ugly about it some peoples are weird


You shouldn't get mad at people just because there giving u a honest reply.
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 03:26 PM EST
aight if you peoples dont like my style i dont care cause i like my style
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 03:37 PM EST
Ok, congratulations. Now if you don't care about people's opinions why do you submit your fan art here?
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 03:40 PM EST
hmmm interesting, it has its own style but like staighted before the muscle structure needs work. its also a little confusing, there is alot going on.
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 04:01 PM EST
Sands spider what is muscle structure what does it means
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09/06/2003 04:07 PM EST
He means the actual muscle, like how it's shaped and stuff.
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/06/2003 04:54 PM EST
I like your style, so because it is different, that is why I like it!
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/07/2003 04:29 AM EST
I am not a fan of this picture, personally. It reminds me too much of his UMK3 costume, which was not too popular with the fans, especially in Annihilation the film.
I'm sure you know by now, the proportions are a bit off, example: look at his forearm, and then the rest of his arm. They do not match well.
His muscles. How many does he have? Lol. There's an awful lotta muscles on that arm, some I'm sure shouldn't be visible tongue.
I also don't like the way his head/face was done. The mas looks like it occupies more of his face than it should, and his eyes, are kinda triangular. Part of the style, I guess.
Good attempt smile.
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/07/2003 08:35 AM EST
It isn't bad, but to me it seems just a bit too simple. You do have your own style, but you really should add more of your own personal touches to this. Just seems like a common Sub-Zero design, without much detail. I'd say you should try focusing on the costume more, give it some depth. Add some oriental markings, or his amulet even. I know this is your style, but to me I think you need to cut down just a bit on the ink, some of the black lines are thicker than they should be.

The one part I do like about the head is the mark over his eye. It looks pretty cool drawn in your style, but the rest doesn't look drawn very even. On the mask, it seems as if the individual sections were just randomly threw in. Try to balance the sections of the mask, make them in proportion to one another. They also appear a bit too jagged, especially the chin which looks almost like a point.

The muscle structure needs some adjusting. His chest is oversized, too bulky. Unless he was arching his back this wouldn't look realistic, as Sub-Zero's chest doesn't extend out that far. The muscles on the arm need work too. Some of it looks right, but you drew to many of them. In this pose, and most other poses, this many muscles on one arm isn't likely. And when you come to the forearm, the width of the arm changes dramatically. Make the arm flow together as one, not two pieces. Also, the fingers are a bit out of size as well. But, it is better than some of your earlier work, and with a little definition it could be better.
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/07/2003 09:18 AM EST

~Crow~ Wrote:
It isn't bad, but to me it seems just a bit too simple. You do have your own style, but you really should add more of your own personal touches to this. Just seems like a common Sub-Zero design, without much detail. I'd say you should try focusing on the costume more, give it some depth. Add some oriental markings, or his amulet even. I know this is your style, but to me I think you need to cut down just a bit on the ink, some of the black lines are thicker than they should be.

The one part I do like about the head is the mark over his eye. It looks pretty cool drawn in your style, but the rest doesn't drawn very even. On the mask, it seems as if the individual sections were just randomly threw in. Try to balance the sections of the mask, make them in proportion to one another. They also appear a bit too jagged, especially the chin which looks almost like a point.

The muscle structure needs some adjusting. His chest is oversized, too bulky. Unless he was arching his back this wouldn't look realistic, as Sub-Zero's chest doesn't extend out that far. The muscles on the arm need work too. Some of it looks right, but you drew to many of them. In this pose, and most other poses, this many muscles on one arm isn't likely. And when you come to the forearm, the width of the arm changes dramatically. Make the arm flow together as one, not two pieces. Also, the fingers are a bit out of size as well. But, it is better than some of your earlier work, and with a little definition it could be better.
Aight i understand en i will stop with that fat ink .
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/07/2003 04:25 PM EST
okay nothing personal but why the hell did you quote Crow message? when some1 writes a page long reply don't ADD BODY TEXT TO POST, it takes a lot of space in the page.
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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/07/2003 10:12 PM EST
Sorry, but I hate 2 tone vector art that's not done well :-/

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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/09/2003 01:14 PM EST
Okay, out of your many many posts... this is the only one I have responded to. Mainly because your other ones were usually not good at all. This one is okay. It has that rediculus broken glass look to it but if it were to be colored... I think it may look quite decent.

... oh and I ony say this to help- but try using periods and commas and exclaimation points in what you type. because If you don't, you confuse people. Is english your original language?

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RE: Fan Art: Sub zero
09/09/2003 08:59 PM EST
I like your style very much! The only thing in this particular drawing is that the forearm looks too thin compared with the rest of the body... It's an excellent drawing!


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