Tekunin War
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posted11/28/2012 02:23 AM (UTC)by
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Chapter 1 - -

"Cyrax, you are complete. You will now be better known as 'LK Unit 4D4.'" The Grandmaster had said to him. "Return to your post outside the gates. I believe you are far more agile and powerful compared to the previous Units created thus far. Sektor, you are next, to become LK Unite 9T9."

The Grandmaster had called me up to the table. He attached wires and complex machinery on me one by one, I felt cold inside, but I was fine with this. The Lin Kuei had no true intentions of being evil as far as I knew. I closed my eyes as the master and other LK Units connected my helmet.

A list came up on some sort of screen. "Here goes nothing." I thought to myself.

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RE10228 LLJUN8 JIHNSBQQE9 TT9JD98 COMPUTER CONNECTING TO SERVER:776 JHH7U UNCL9 GRAN ASMETRES8 FAILURE FAILURE FAILURE: RECONNECTING

CYBER INITIATIVE 2% COMPLETE
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I felt a surge rush through the cold metal as I felt like I was having a seizure.

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CYBER INITIATIVE 34% COMPLETE: ADDING TELEPORT SYSTEM LK9 LKT LK9

CYBER INITIATIVE 70% COMPLETE: ADDING MISSILE LAUNCH UP/DOWN/LEFT/40%ANGLE RIGHT 90% ANGLE COMING END

CYBER INITIATIVE 98% COMPLETE: ADDING FUNCTIONS, CODE FOR ACCESS TO OTHER BORGS =
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The code was a random series of numbers. I didn't understand them, they meant nothing to me. I was starting to disregard the Cyber Initiative, until it was almost done. Numbers, I felt them. Pointy ones, slashing sevens, bouncing zeroes.

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1873747528672356734674386743670823173456780454783403813401836178065743647835648756487333333333333333336428047678067806378064780674803657856745674567845608743678042367803657647832608640237846387678865784635736714965785673470150165703163780657016357065701647567856780147856437867184367851467457481565784374567585731657065705675605165706176547316505670435667813657478037831478011

CYBER INITIATIVE 100% COMPLETE: PREPARING TO REBOOT
- - Decided that I DO NOT want you to close it (if you saw my other Title)
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balkcsiaboot
11/27/2012 01:49 PM (UTC)
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LK Unite 9T9?

That was an interesting first person take on the Cyber initiative.
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11/27/2012 09:38 PM (UTC)
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Typo. It is Unit, not Unite (oops). And also, The Cyborg Units all had Numbers. Cyrax was 4D4 and Sektor was 9T9. I will later make one for Cyber Sub-Zero and Smoke, Units 8T8 (Cyber Sub-Zero) and 8D8 (Smoke), when they come into the story *HINT-HINT*
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VenoMark
11/27/2012 10:51 PM (UTC)
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Before you continue, I suggest that you refer to a few sources to ensure that the intricacies in your short story don't contradict certain details of not only the actual MK plot, but the specifics of certain characters as well. In effect, Cyber Sub-Zero is designated as Unit LK-52O, not 8T8, and Smoke is designated as unit LK-7T2, and not 8D8.

In addition, you may want to refrain from riddling the majority of a chapter with random numbers. The entirety of this chapter was littered with unnecessary numbers and characters, thus making it a relatively pointless read. That is all.
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11/28/2012 01:16 AM (UTC)
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PLEASE CLOSE TILL FURTHER NOTICE
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balkcsiaboot
11/28/2012 02:10 AM (UTC)
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GoobieDoob Wrote:
PLEASE CLOSE TILL FURTHER NOTICE


...yeah...
like a mod is going to "unclose" it later when you so command him to...
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UltimateRyu
11/28/2012 02:23 AM (UTC)
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"RE10228 LLJUN8 JIHNSBQQE9 TT9JD98 COMPUTER CONNECTING TO SERVER:776 JHH7U UNCL9 GRAN ASMETRES8 FAILURE FAILURE FAILURE: RECONNECTING."

My favorite part of the story by far. It definitely captures the essence of a programmed cyborg.
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