Temperance - Episode 3
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posted12/04/2006 03:09 AM (UTC)by
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Nemesis316
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08/14/2005 09:52 PM (UTC)


I was sitting around thinking, "what kind of weapon could I give this guy?" Originally, I thought of a broadsword, ring blades (like Tira) and kamas, but then I decided on something more original. The hookspear is what you see here. Took me all day to make the proper positions and get the hook spear in good order.

What will happen next? Next weekend reveals it all. Enjoy.

Here's one of the new stages I drew up for this comic.



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Shinnok-fan64
12/03/2006 01:24 AM (UTC)
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nice one, nemesis, i want to see the ending for that. I like the numerous ways how he kills the Barakas.

4.5/5
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Hikari715
12/03/2006 01:51 AM (UTC)
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Awesome as always. 4.5/5
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SubMan799
12/03/2006 04:08 AM (UTC)
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5
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Ninja_Mime
12/03/2006 04:49 AM (UTC)
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Edit: Nevermind, I'm stupid. Good job with this one. I think this could be even better than TCONS.

I don't like his body though... It seems like all one colour.
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Iori9
12/03/2006 05:36 AM (UTC)
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4.9999/5 you need to do something more with main charachters spites, it seems like you put sub-zero's head on top of a recolored MK2 ninjas body (which you might have lol)

it still looks fine though im just saying, besides that this is an awesome ass sprite comic.
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Nemesis316
12/03/2006 06:12 AM (UTC)
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Actually, what I did was I darkened the ninja suit and did paste over the Sub hair giving him longer locks.

I wanted to go with a simple but sufficient look that would stand out enough but not too much work for me to get sweaty over.
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Iori9
12/03/2006 08:56 AM (UTC)
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Nemesis316 Wrote:
Actually, what I did was I darkened the ninja suit and did paste over the Sub hair giving him longer locks.

I wanted to go with a simple but sufficient look that would stand out enough but not too much work for me to get sweaty over.

OK I understand
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-A-nubis
12/03/2006 03:26 PM (UTC)
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Nice comic man, love the background.

4,5/5
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JimboLimbo
12/03/2006 05:51 PM (UTC)
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Pigs was probably the right word to describe his enemies as, but some of the lines were a bit poor tbh.

"Squeal like piggies!!", a bit childish tongue

"You rush like pigs to battle" - since when to pigs rush to battle? They run to their like slop, or whatever you call pig food, but battle? It just didn't sound right.

Also the bit about "flock of pigs", don't they gather as a herd? I'm not sure if it's herd, but I'm pretty sure it's not flock. Just sounded wrong s'all.

Nice work on the graphics though, although the motion blur seems to be a tad overused in your comics, maybe experiment with another way to express movement in your comics, just to vary them a bit.

Nice job.
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Nemesis316
12/03/2006 06:05 PM (UTC)
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Yeah, good point. I just wanted to give the reader the impression that Mikhail is batshitting insane when he gets into battle.

I appreciate the correction, cheers.
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Ninja_Mime
12/03/2006 06:18 PM (UTC)
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Yeah, I laughed my ass off at "Squeal like piggies!". If it wasn't meant to be funny, sorry. tongue
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JimboLimbo
12/03/2006 07:10 PM (UTC)
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Nemesis316 Wrote:
Yeah, good point. I just wanted to give the reader the impression that Mikhail is batshitting insane when he gets into battle.


I thought so tongue
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12/03/2006 08:23 PM (UTC)
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Mikhail is badass. Not as badass as Sub-Zero though. I would like to see a costume changed as mentioned by other members above. More original, I love the plot. Exceptional overall.

4.5/5
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Nemesis316
12/04/2006 03:09 AM (UTC)
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Like I said, a simple look is good enough that looks good but without having to make such effort to make individual sprites.

Still, thanks for the comment.
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