Temperance - Episode 3
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Temperance - Episode 3
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posted12/04/2006 03:09 AM (UTC)by

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I was sitting around thinking, "what kind of weapon could I give this guy?" Originally, I thought of a broadsword, ring blades (like Tira) and kamas, but then I decided on something more original. The hookspear is what you see here. Took me all day to make the proper positions and get the hook spear in good order.
What will happen next? Next weekend reveals it all. Enjoy.
Here's one of the new stages I drew up for this comic.



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nice one, nemesis, i want to see the ending for that. I like the numerous ways how he kills the Barakas.
4.5/5
4.5/5


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Awesome as always. 4.5/5
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Edit: Nevermind, I'm stupid. Good job with this one. I think this could be even better than TCONS.
I don't like his body though... It seems like all one colour.
I don't like his body though... It seems like all one colour.
4.9999/5 you need to do something more with main charachters spites, it seems like you put sub-zero's head on top of a recolored MK2 ninjas body (which you might have lol)
it still looks fine though im just saying, besides that this is an awesome ass sprite comic.
it still looks fine though im just saying, besides that this is an awesome ass sprite comic.

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Actually, what I did was I darkened the ninja suit and did paste over the Sub hair giving him longer locks.
I wanted to go with a simple but sufficient look that would stand out enough but not too much work for me to get sweaty over.
I wanted to go with a simple but sufficient look that would stand out enough but not too much work for me to get sweaty over.
Nemesis316 Wrote:
Actually, what I did was I darkened the ninja suit and did paste over the Sub hair giving him longer locks.
I wanted to go with a simple but sufficient look that would stand out enough but not too much work for me to get sweaty over.
Actually, what I did was I darkened the ninja suit and did paste over the Sub hair giving him longer locks.
I wanted to go with a simple but sufficient look that would stand out enough but not too much work for me to get sweaty over.
OK I understand


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Pigs was probably the right word to describe his enemies as, but some of the lines were a bit poor tbh.
"Squeal like piggies!!", a bit childish
"You rush like pigs to battle" - since when to pigs rush to battle? They run to their like slop, or whatever you call pig food, but battle? It just didn't sound right.
Also the bit about "flock of pigs", don't they gather as a herd? I'm not sure if it's herd, but I'm pretty sure it's not flock. Just sounded wrong s'all.
Nice work on the graphics though, although the motion blur seems to be a tad overused in your comics, maybe experiment with another way to express movement in your comics, just to vary them a bit.
Nice job.
"Squeal like piggies!!", a bit childish
"You rush like pigs to battle" - since when to pigs rush to battle? They run to their like slop, or whatever you call pig food, but battle? It just didn't sound right.
Also the bit about "flock of pigs", don't they gather as a herd? I'm not sure if it's herd, but I'm pretty sure it's not flock. Just sounded wrong s'all.
Nice work on the graphics though, although the motion blur seems to be a tad overused in your comics, maybe experiment with another way to express movement in your comics, just to vary them a bit.
Nice job.

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Yeah, good point. I just wanted to give the reader the impression that Mikhail is batshitting insane when he gets into battle.
I appreciate the correction, cheers.
I appreciate the correction, cheers.


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Yeah, I laughed my ass off at "Squeal like piggies!". If it wasn't meant to be funny, sorry. 


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Nemesis316 Wrote:
Yeah, good point. I just wanted to give the reader the impression that Mikhail is batshitting insane when he gets into battle.
Yeah, good point. I just wanted to give the reader the impression that Mikhail is batshitting insane when he gets into battle.
I thought so

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Like I said, a simple look is good enough that looks good but without having to make such effort to make individual sprites.
Still, thanks for the comment.
Still, thanks for the comment.
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