Here are all the bad parts I am listing out for you.

Part 1
- Speech bubbles are terrible
- The white transparencies missing on the Raiden sprite
- Lots of spelling errors
- Raiden's MKT VS pose is larger than the two ninjas. Why?
- What's with the white spots for the first panel?
The table, chairs and cards are badly drawn.

Part 2
- Same speech bubbles
- What's with the headshots of the kombatants, Dan Forden and Sean Connery
- Connery's pixelated as hell

Part 3
- Same speech bubbles
- The red "blush marks" are just red spots and are terrible

Most of the dialogue lack punctuation too. For instince, shouldn't Subby, Smoke and Jade supposed to be exclaiming "Goddamn it!" rather than "Goddamn it"?

The plot and humor aren't really appealing, too. Sorry if this is harsh but it's my honest opinon. 1/5

Well everyone is entitles to there opinion and i agree with the grammer errors but im afraid that continues on for a couple of comics(sry)but the god dammit thing was like a silent god dammit you know liek if cartman said "god dammit you guys"

Merry Christmas everyone,and what better way to celebrate the holidays with an all new(as in just made)The Adventuers of Subzero and Smoke comic!

To be honest I still am not pleased much.

- Sub-Zero and Smoke's mugshots are pixelated so much
- The Santa edit isn't appealing, just a badly painted MK1 Shang Tsung sprite
- Same awful speech bubbles
- Still unfunny to me

Here's a tip:
- Read ]{0MBAT's comic tutorial on how to draw speech bubbles (Hint: Use the line and shape tools in Paint)

Im sorry dude, I dont think there a good at all. Just keep on practicing tho and im sure you'll be able to come up with some better work in no time.

Yeah like i said these are comics i have had for awhile i threw them all togehther rather quickly after episode 5 they will be all new with an all new not sucky look but read them until then so your up to date with the story.

TheMightyMeatLord, you need to take time in your sprite comics. Like I said time and time again, your spelling sucks. Sometime in two weeks I'll give you one of my type practicing CDs. I'm serious, Lord Meat.

Gay.

The absolute meaning of CRAP!

You might be thinking, "Well, Arctic, tell me what's wrong with this?"

I'll tell you. First off, the word bubble are comtemptible! They suck because the word bubbles don't even look good and there is no pointers on them. Plus, you used the wrong font and they're not set up right. They are missplaced and pasted anywhere they can fit.

Second, the transparent is repugnant! A majority of the sprites are missing white. Try fixing that and we'll see how much better the comic could've been. Also, the sprites are stretched horribly, try using MS word for stretching.

Next, the humor is awful. I know I need to work on humor in some of my comics but man, at least some people liked mine. Yours, not so much.

Lastly, I will finish off by saying some of the props such as the table and plot are petrifying! Badly drawn even for MS paint. And you need better frame structure.

Overall, the definition of this comic is CRAP! Sorry.

0.5/5

Arcic you can't complain about my comedy because i was nto even your comics were supposed to be funny(WTf with the last panel in damashi's loss!?)anyways Arctic hikari715 already commented on my comic okay she got the message through you could just of said see hikari715 comments and when will people realize that i get there crappy okay i made all of these during an im chat with TheUberNInja so i am aware of there crappy quality just wait to after episode 5 that is when they won't suck anymore so COME DOWN!

Mighty Meat lord

If you are not Able to take in your criticism, do not post your Crap here.

You have done nothing more but Flame at the comments you have been given.

Hikari Gave you a Dragonpoint worthy Reply More than once, giving you advice not telling you anything Bad or Mean.

You replied with a not very thankfull post, not something someone as helpful and kind as Hikari deserves.

Your Sptite Comics are not that good, you have been told what to improve on and youve just told people to stick their opinions.

Arctic commented on your Comic and you Critisized his.........This is not Arctics thread, so its not your place to critisize his work here.

Good Day to you.

What are you talking about?
I agreed with hikari's comments i didnt argue with them in any way
I have not told people to stick their opinions i even said i'd use them in my sprite comics after episode 5 because i didnt want to waste my time when i could being working on future ones
Finally i was mad at Arctic because he just simply copied what hikari said so i found it was a useless waste of space

So my friend it is to you i say good day

P.S. Hikari if you did think my post was ungrateful I'm sorry i didnt mean for it to sound that way i would like to take now to thank you for all your comments....

Except Arctic's god i hate that guy

Yeah... 0.5/5. See what Hikari and Arctic wrote for the why. Also, you should make your own sprites.

By the way, dont ruin your own thread by flaming people (I mean Arctic). He was trying to help, and you just shut him down. That is not cool.

Like i said Arctic was just repeating what Hikari said that is not helping and i knew if i didnt cut him off he was just going to be a jerk about it "tooting his own horn"

You totally took KHC3's story and ran with it!
xD
Ha! You'd never think I'd have seen it, but I have!
It was bleh.
Sorry.
Try harder.
2.5/5

His comics may not be that funny, but at least they're original, and have nice graphics. He actually put effort into them.

Do your comics offer either of those?

No.

Actually i was hoping peopel had seen KHC3 so they would get those jokes.