Okay, where to begin?

1. You have a lot of misspelling errors to fix, a lot.

2. His medallion has a lot more history to it rather than giving Sub-Zero powers

3. How can Frost use his powers when she basically have his powers? What I mean is, she does have Sub-Zero's moves, and Sub-Zero has her moves, so... I don't get what you mean by that.

4. Are you telling us that Frost stole the medallion once before? Because you used the word "again." Does this mean she stole the medallion before this happened? Be more specific
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But I have a question, did you really wanted Sub-Zero to freeze Frost for his medallion, or forgot that the medallion itself froze her?

So my thoughts:

This is not what I call, "good" because of the fact that you basically turned Frost's DA ending into a story with a twist. It's nor original because you just change a tiny minor thing and have everything about the two mixed up. The fact that you are not specific with a lot of things in your story gives it a lack of interest. The only thing good about the whole story is that these two are my favorite characters. I'm sure you can do better, why not read some other stories and get some ideas.

Otherwise, I'm only giving this a 1 / 5 because it's something, and you did try.

CHEERS!

LOL @ Critique being longer than the story.

Also, fail. Etc.

That's becuase, my friend, is how you tell people what their flaws are. Unlike you, "Fail" is the only thing you have to describe anything, which most people refuse to take that as a critique. Therefore, you fail.

CHEERS!

I've never heard of this critique thing?

Also, lrn2spell because.

Asshat.

LoL @ failing.

Okay, that first sentence is bugging me. You say it likethis:

That, my friend, is how you tell people what their flaws are.

I had to correct it. I just had to. And MKRocket wasn't insulting you, so no need to be a jackass.

Anyways, this....thing is horrible. I think Sub-Frost summed it up pretty nicely. Something to add to what Sub-Frost said is that you need to make it longer