My reply from your other thread :

"Urm, well, lol.
Okay, it could be better, but I guess you know that, since your begging not to be flamed, lol.
Anyhow

- First off the size. That is way too small. When making your own background, work on a model size of one of the others. That way you can be sure that you have the right size.
- Second, is this a fatality? Because Scorpion is trying to attack, when I suppose he would be in a daze.
- Now, the life in the lifebars is flowing the wrong way, i.e. toward the centre. That is MKDA style, but this is MK2.
- The "Sub-Zero" text should be on the left hand end of his lifebar.
- The timer. Um, interesting idea, but I think even 99 seconds is more than enough time to kill your opponent. If you want to make it look like it's from the game, use a proper timer.
- I'm not too sure what Smoke is doing there. Care to explain?
- The ice wouldn't create blood, infact, it would freeze it, so the blood is a bad idea.
- The way Scorpion's leg has been "cut off" (which might I add is odd for liquid ice stuff), is pretty square (i.e. flat edged).
- No shadows, might save this picture a little bit .
- Screen doesn't appear to have gone dark, but as you made the background, it could have and we'd never know, lol.

Good things:
+ You got the win marks in there, they're in the wrong place (wrong side of the lifebars), lol, but they're in there.

Oh well, keep working at it. You need a truly original idea, and making up a background that just consists of spiky pillars won't help the picture at all. Keep going .

Btw. If it's called "Sub-Zero nut crush", then why exactly does Scorpion have blood coming out of him. Oh well, lol."

My reply from the original thread. Also, like I said over there, head over to that thread I mentioned to see the tips/tricks you wanted to know about.

"Ok, I shall rate if you so desire . Well, the one thing about this is that it is way to short. The heigth should be much greater than what it is. And I just dont like the background, its just pasted props of course. You did get the win tokens, but the timer is wrong, not a logical number at all.

The fatality idea is a bit.... weird, lol. Considering the fact that Scorpion seems to be assisting Sub-Zero with this fatality. The ice isn't very good, well... you just pasted it really. But thats not so bad, its what most do on their first fake anyway, not saying its right or anything, but it seems to be natural for some reason.

I don't really like the lifebars either, I'm just more of a 'stick with the game' person in that area. The blood looks too cartoony, then again, like I said its all just copy/paste. But I must say, it takes courage to show your first fake! Hope to see more recent work from you soon."

Oh jeeze,

As long as you're entertaining yourself.
Wyatt

lol.i think that is hilarious and man did you draw that?obviously stupid question i like the health thing it look real and are you sure scorpion has nuts?lol

thats pretty funny!

Well I gotta say it is origonal, I can only give it a 2/5 though and thats being nice.

Dont get me wrong thats not a mean comment, Its just a little strange if you get me, Theres many mistakes too it that CROWBAR has already pointed out and thats about the same I have to say.

Cockmongler Scorpion. I give this a thumbs up.

I actually like the BG w the columns all toghether...

Bumped from '03....it sucked then and it sucks now.