The Rise Of The Dragon
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01/22/2009 01:58 PM (UTC)by
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MKHIZANK
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MK-4-LIFE
01/22/2009 01:58 PM (UTC)
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Fantastic job. At first I looked at the wall of text and honestly couldn't be fucked reading it. But I did and I'm very glad I did. I loved the detail you went into, especially in the fight scene. Great, extensive use of your vocabulary there. It would have been better if you had used better grammar and punctuation, but still great. I'll give you a 4/5, because the grammar brought the effectiveness down a lot. Great job though.
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