It's great but it needs a little more humour.

are you even trying ? its not funny. not one bit.
siddu is lying to you to try to be your friend but don't listen to that crap. get better by reading some tutorials. or keep on practicing in mspaint by drawing some stuff on the sprites (pixel art rox)

Think of better jokes, and it would be better.

KENSHIKW2 Wrote: Think of better jokes, and it would be better.

Wow, Someone give this man a medal.

Booooo...lame...please dont do another.

peterbi Wrote: Booooo...lame...please dont do another.

That's what I've been telling him for... quite some time now, but he wont listen.


MKMaster, I'm not even going to wait the five hours that it takes for the comic to load, and like I said, I'm not touching your comics with a ten foot pole ever again. But I just decided to stop by and point out how everyone else is pretty much telling you the same thing I did.

Spoken like a true asshole.

Zentile Wrote: peterbi Wrote: Booooo...lame...please dont do another. That's what I've been telling him for... quite some time now, but he wont listen. MKMaster, I'm not even going to wait the five hours that it takes for the comic to load, and like I said, I'm not touching your comics with a ten foot pole ever again. But I just decided to stop by and point out how everyone else is pretty much telling you the same thing I did.

Is that how you feel? Are you aware of the situation I had with MKMaster?
I'm not going to flame you... just making sure if you're being an idiot or if you're just mis-informed.

Im mis-informed basically but ive seen you post around here and I dont think you should be so fucking harsh. To be quite honest with you, ive looked at some of your stuff that uve uploaded and I think it sucks and those 2 dragon point average rating back me up quite well. I wasnt pleased with your Ermac ripoff (Karnac) either. There you go mr. critique.

So now you can INFORM me of your little relationship with MKmaster.

Well, that was entirely humor-free.

I wasnt trying to make anyone laugh here buddy. If this guy (mkmaster) wants to continue making comics, its only gonna make him worse at it if people like zentile tell him to stop doing something that he sucks with. I mean maybe one day this guy will finally make a good comic?

The only thing I dont like is the abuse Mkmaster goes through. I mean there are other topics on the forum, why not just skip his and go check one of those out?

I check out that one thread and I agree with Zentile that he shouldnt of made that comic about him, but Zentile, maybe you should of gone a little easier on him when he started.

blackwizard Wrote: I wasnt trying to make anyone laugh here buddy. If this guy (mkmaster) wants to continue making comics, its only gonna make him worse at it if people like zentile tell him to stop doing something that he sucks with. I mean maybe one day this guy will finally make a good comic? The only thing I dont like is the abuse Mkmaster goes through. I mean there are other topics on the forum, why not just skip his and go check one of those out? I check out that one thread and I agree with Zentile that he shouldnt of made that comic about him, but Zentile, maybe you should of gone a little easier on him when he started.

Gotta be kind to be cruel sometimes though.

Like those people on American idol, nobody has the balls to tell them they suck, so they go and make an ass out of themselves in front of millions of people, whereas if a buddy told them they sucked, they would retain some dignity.

To be honest MKMaster, your comics aren't that great.
I think the main problem is just the lack of humour, but you're not a complete lost cause.
Maybe if you stop actually trying to be funny it'll just come naturally.
If you have no ideas for comics, there's no real reason to make one (i think i've read that before someplace...) and if you do make a comic with no decent ideas, it's just going to come off really laboured and dry, unfortunately like most of your comics.

Take a break, some time off.
Think about things that are funny that everybody can relate to, ideas form everyday life around you, then come back and try again in a week or so.
If after that, people think your comics still aren't decent, then maybe it's time you quit and moved on to something else, like making fakes, or drawing.

Wizard shuttup. You remember you don't have to be a Grade-A faker to give Constructive critisism do you? Heck, just because my fakes aren't top notch doesn't mean I haven't had years of experience on how to grade.

2nd post:

Abuse? What the hell does giving once again CONSTRUCTIVE critisism have to do with abuse? Sure some light hearted people think it's harsh but remember this:

Compared to the Venomark days, today's graders actually are way nicer. Sure Venomark was a jerk sometimes, but he told the truth. Someone once said his tactic was to make people mad so that they could focus WAY more on their next fakes so that they can get a decent rating. But some people took that as aboslute flaming, and they ruined most topics by flaming him.

So just leave us alone.

OK blackwizard, I gotta say, you took it alot easier than I expected and you've gained a few points in my consideration for sticking up for your opinion and not actually be a total asshole. In fact, I'd shake your hand if I could.

Maybe I am a bit too harsh... but the fact is, most people aren't, or the ones that are as harsh as I am (or harsher) don't dish out opinions as developed as mine, or as constructive. I know my posts seem to be the harshest, but they are constructive and not just point-and-laugh.

Look at Shirt Ninja's last post, for example... ''that was absolutely humour free''. It doesn't really help much, except that it 'hints' that the humour is bad. All of MKMaster's comics which I've reviewed recieved very harsh, even a bit mean, but still constructive criticism, IMO.

There was no need for me to say his first comic's size was gargantuan or dinosauric... but it helps him realize what's wrong alot more then ''the comic's a bit too big''.

I (along with others) have been telling him to stop making comics, because, sure, SOMEDAY he'll make a good comic, or at least one that's not horrid, but why keep making something that you are clearly bad at instead of doing something you're good at? I remember him saying he took four hours with a comic or something... well my last fake, and dispite it's share of negative reviews and obviously not being a fabulous one, clearly took alot more effort and I made it in one hour, with not really much effort at all. Instead of wasting his time on stuff which only gets him bad reviews, why not use his talent? I'm sure he's good at something. Real drawing, writing, movie-making, music writing, collecting shit... there are so many things to do- why make comics if all they get you is negative reviews?

EDIT: By the way, I have to say that I'm actually enjoying the critics that are being made to my critics.

there is already a sequel to this comic.it will be out sometime tonight.and you will like my comics someday.i promise you.and i fixed most of the problems that you pointed out.and i have plenty more ideas.