The Tears of a Queen
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The Tears of a Queen
05/10/2011 08:54 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: The Tears of a Queen
05/11/2011 09:26 PM EST
In response to Jerrod's piece:


This may be your best so far. Showing Shao Kahn before he became an evil dictator was incredible. Sindel's death seemed right not some suicide poison. Kitana barely learning to walk at 400 was great. Could this be rain? The baby from a purple orb? It seems right. 5/5
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RE: Fan Submission: The Tears of a Queen
05/12/2011 05:42 PM EST
maximus12 Wrote:
Could this be rain? The baby from a purple orb? It seems right.

Thanks for reading my work!
Sindel demonstrates a lot of her abilities with the colour purple, so that's why the protective orb the baby was covered in is purple, not to create foreshadowing. This won't be the last we hear about it, though to be fair...
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This is the second time I wrote something featuring this character.

More will be revealed, don't worry. smile
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RE: Fan Submission: The Tears of a Queen
05/12/2011 07:54 PM EST
Very nice work like usual,
I really liked the way you portrayed Shao Kahn having a genuine care for Sindel, that's my favorite version of him.
Sindel's portrayal was just as good, especially her misery of living in the aftermath of Outworld overtaking Edenia in the beginning.
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RE: Fan Submission: The Tears of a Queen
05/14/2011 03:35 AM EST
-Brad- Wrote:
Very nice work like usual,
I really liked the way you portrayed Shao Kahn having a genuine care for Sindel, that's my favorite version of him.
Sindel's portrayal was just as good, especially her misery of living in the aftermath of Outworld overtaking Edenia in the beginning.

Thanks! I always thought it would be more interesting if Shao Kahn genuinely cared for Sindel, as it makes for a deeper character. We're never told how long they were married for, but I think it's safe to assume that there had to be some amount of time for them to develop love/hate for each other, especially since Sindel died unexpectedly.
I'm glad you guys enjoyed it so much. grin
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