Thunder God
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Thunder God
11/21/2005 04:27 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Thunder God
11/23/2005 10:40 AM EST
This pic is fantastic. I love the effects and the background. Raydens face is a bit different but I guess thats the point. In his body there is a very white part, is that supposed to be like that? Looks kind of strange.

The staff looks really good, the only thing I think you can improve his is feet. The right one looks too big imo. Excellent pic!

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RE: Fan Submission: Thunder God
11/23/2005 12:24 PM EST
Interesting concept. I'd like to know why Raidens arms are suddenly transparent. The feet definitely could be improved and I don't really like the overall pose or face. I love the background and lightning effects however. The body and staff are great too.

Nice work. 3/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Thunder God
11/23/2005 03:48 PM EST
tgrant Wrote:
Interesting concept. I'd like to know why Raidens arms are suddenly transparent. The feet definitely could be improved and I don't really like the overall pose or face. I love the background and lightning effects however. The body and staff are great too.

Nice work. 3/5


Thanks for the advices. His arms aren't meant to look transparent. It's the lighting effect.
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RE: Fan Submission: Thunder God
11/24/2005 07:44 AM EST
Not bad. His hands look good, but his feet... There's something wrong happening there. Looks like he has four toes and they're swollen. wow
Nice staff effect. His hair looks like string. I think you pulled the lightning off rather well. His chest looks a little... Misplaced. His ribs, specifically. I can also see cyan, magenta and yellow stripes in the sky... They supposed to be there?
Overall, it's pretty good. I personally prefer black and white illustrations over colored when the concept suits it (I usually end up shading drawings instead of coloring them automatically now). tongue

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RE: Fan Submission: Thunder God
11/26/2005 09:53 AM EST
This submission doesnt say Raiden.Thats not his style
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RE: Fan Submission: Thunder God
11/27/2005 04:19 AM EST
Goroliath Wrote:
Not bad. His hands look good, but his feet... There's something wrong happening there. Looks like he has four toes and they're swollen. wow
Nice staff effect. His hair looks like string. I think you pulled the lightning off rather well. His chest looks a little... Misplaced. His ribs, specifically. I can also see cyan, magenta and yellow stripes in the sky... They supposed to be there?
Overall, it's pretty good. I personally prefer black and white illustrations over colored when the concept suits it (I usually end up shading drawings instead of coloring them automatically now). tongue

4 / 10. wink


Yeah, the cyan, magenta, and yellow stripes in the sky are meant to be there. I thought it needed a little touch of color.
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