Totally Made Up Sub-Zero History (Introduction to my fake story)
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posted11/24/2008 10:33 PM (UTC)by
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STORMS
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"I speak in insanity. I burned for you. What was my soul, now is gone... it became something much worse. I awoke frozen, and I couldn't feel a thing. I felt dead, though I was very much alive... it's what you did to me. You ripped me apart... and I hated myself as I still loved you. Times have taught me and times have introduced me to things I never knew... like what I'd be after our first Winter."


So, I decided earlier today I was going to make up a totally fake back story to Sub-Zero and this is what I came up with so far. I'm trying to write how he became the way he is. I'm basing it on the idea that Sub-Zero was actually once a normal human being... and how his past world mangled his future. I'll add more soon...

Tell me what you think. smile
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Jerrod
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11/24/2008 08:06 PM (UTC)
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STORMS Wrote:
"I speak in insanity. I burned for you. What was my soul, now is gone... it became something much worse. I awoke frozen, and I couldn't feel a thing. I felt dead, though I was very much alive... it's what you did to me. You ripped me apart... and I hated myself as I still loved you. Times have taught me and times have introduced me to things I never knew... like what I'd be after our first Winter."

I hate introduction threads for works of writing, but at least you showed us a piece of what you plan on doing. I'm interested in seeing the rest of it, as long as you fix that grammar.
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STORMS
11/24/2008 10:33 PM (UTC)
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I didn't think my grammar was THAT bad...

But, thank you for your feedback. smile
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