Triple Ice Spike Fatality
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Triple Ice Spike Fatality
08/11/2003 09:44 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Art: Triple Ice Spike Fatality
08/12/2003 01:06 PM EDT
Well the quality horrible =/ it looks like you save it to many times as a jpeg which makes your fake pic very blur. I suggest you try sharemation.com and also add "public sharing" to "on" when you register thats what I been told.

I like the way you are trying to start editing things yourself, instead of copying and pasting. But the background looks boring how is black them I see something which is hard to tell what it is. The lifebars look way to stretch out, also the text are terrible, like I said don't save it as a jpeg to much. I don't really like the FATALITY text is way to big and it takes space a lot of space. Use actual Mk3 Text "SUB-ZERO WINS". Add shadows. Kano doesn't really look like his in pain, when some1 is impale there should be more expression on his body, I suggest you focus on the effects expecially the blood.

I can see your trying to improve, but gather all this feedback into 1 so that way you won't make the same mistakes next time.
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RE: Fan Art: Triple Ice Spike Fatality
08/12/2003 01:53 PM EDT
Shoulda made it a double and left out the one that is going horizontal tongue.
Well, it's clear to see you are improving, but here are some "things".

- The background for starters it's just a.........moon. Bit boring and with the quality loos looks very bright and blurry. Not good, and a bit too basic.
- Next, lifebars, and they are a bit weird, lol. Very stretched, just use the standard ones, lifebars don't make a fake (but they are missed when not there tongue).
- Lifebar texts, well, exremely hard to read. That timer is HUGE! As I said, use the standard.
- Now, the other texts. Sub-Zero Wins text should be in all capitals. The fatality text is just odd really, use a bloody one, or standard (which are bloody, heh).
- Add some shadows.
- The ice spikes are squared off at the end, it makes it look, well, square, lol. Some rounded, or even better, spikey edges would look better.
- The blood, well, it kinda looks like a vine. Look at it in the spike, it doesn't look right.

Good things:
+ Some of the blood is good.
+ The ice spikes' texture looks good too.
+ Once again, an improvement smile.

Just make sure to get a better, more creative idea for the background, then make it happen. A moon and a floor aren't too exiting tongue.
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RE: Fan Art: Triple Ice Spike Fatality
08/12/2003 02:01 PM EDT
I dont care much for the quality, I care for the originality and the whole idea, the message of the art. I really like it, its real cool. 5/5, dude, nice work.
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RE: Fan Art: Triple Ice Spike Fatality
08/12/2003 07:22 PM EDT
Hmm.. well I guess you are improving. It is nice to see you trying your own styles and things with the lifebars, etc. But, it all looks just too big, and makes this look too 'crowded' in my opinion. The lifebars wouldn't be bad, but they need to be a bit thinner, and the timer needs to be a bit smaller. The names text is also quite hard to read, especially against this BG and with the damaged image quality from the jpg save. Should be smaller, as should the pictures of these characters in my opinion. The fatality text isn't that bad really... but its low on the screen, if you resize the top of this image, you should be able to move it up some.

The BG, well, its a little too simple for my tastes. Something in the foreground of the moon would be a nice addition to this. That black area to the left is too large not to have something in it, it doesn't look that good like that.

You should have just used the 2 spikes I think, because where the third one goes through his chest, it disappears. It never exits the other side of Kano's body, and it would look better with just the 2 ice spikes in that case. The spikes do have that 'ice' feel to them though, nice job there. The blood had areas that I like, and some I don't. I do like the blood on Kano's head, very good work there. The blood on the bottom part of that ice spike though looks too solid, and it gives it that 'vine' feel Tim spoke of. The spike going through his leg isn't so bad, the blood you used looks ok, but maybe a little more of it is necessary. Anyhow, you have become MUCH better than your first fakes were, you keep improving each time you submit.
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