i think its.. ok but i think smoke is a little to much like a miget ( not ment to offend) and i think she should be more back into it. but i like the idea and overall not a bad pic

Interesting, but I think this one needs some work. The characters look WAY too thin, especially Smoke. Also, when you tried to add the 'smoke' effect to him, it didn't turn out so well; it looks blurry to me. Smoke also appears to be totally ignoring the uppercut and gazing off into the distance, a more 'suprised' look would fit better with this sketch in my opinion. If Smoke were standing next to Jade in this drawing, he would be shorter than her as well, which I don't believe is the case.

As for Jade, she is a little better drawn. But her legs are far too long, and her knees appear to be a bit odd. Her hair seems to have been done very nicely though, the best part of this pic I think. But again, her eyes don't seem to right given this pose. It does appear a bit comical as you said, so perhaps that is what you were going for.

ok not a bad start, you need to get the height thing worked out tho, but u know that. Second off the arms have ok muscle tone but the legs need some work, they are way to skinny especially smoke.the faces arnt that bad tho, but smoke should look more like he is being propeled backwards, not so much straight up.

i like it. i've tried some pictures like this and it was a catastophe. a couple comments if i may, i think smoke looks like he's standing on the ground only... floating if you get what i mean. and i don't know if you wanted it to look smokey or it's just in bad condition... well, good job though.

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its very good but if your smart you can put it in photoshop 7.0 if you have that then add some dark lines en color it then it will be a 5/5

Ha, good picture. Could use a little more work but I like how you've captured the moment. Drawings with action in them can be very difficult.

Keep going
Wyatt

Wow, I like this style! I like how it's kind of, um, fuzzy. It's a very good concept, and a nice try at capturing the moment. However, the shading is a bit smeared. I know you were trying a smoke effect, but I think too much of it got smudged so as to take away from the piece a bit.

For nice piece. 4/5