Vocal Cord Rip
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posted11/21/2008 03:46 PM (UTC)by
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11/19/2008 12:17 AM (UTC)
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UlcaTron
11/19/2008 01:04 AM (UTC)
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I like the idea, but major flaws are easily visible.

Blood :

Well, it looks poorly done. It looks like a bunch of spaghetti meat and kool-aid on the floor. You should probably try re-doing that.

Stage :

It doesn't seem 'dark' enough for the stage itself. It doesn't match the arena basically.

Sprites :

No editing, copy+pasted.

Concept :

Rather good, but pretty common for my taste.

You could have probably changed up the arena a bit more, fixed up the sprites, and re-do the blood. Better luck next time. Lol. =] Also, please don't take offense, I'm only trying to help ya out.

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redman
11/20/2008 09:55 PM (UTC)
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UlcaTron Wrote:
I like the idea, but major flaws are easily visible.

Blood :

Well, it looks poorly done. It looks like a bunch of spaghetti meat and kool-aid on the floor. You should probably try re-doing that.

Stage :

It doesn't seem 'dark' enough for the stage itself. It doesn't match the arena basically.

Sprites :

No editing, copy+pasted.

Concept :

Rather good, but pretty common for my taste.

You could have probably changed up the arena a bit more, fixed up the sprites, and re-do the blood. Better luck next time. Lol. =] Also, please don't take offense, I'm only trying to help ya out.

2.5/5

Kinda exactly what He ^ said. ^^ :D

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11/21/2008 03:46 PM (UTC)
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For starters the vocal cord is not exactly a cord...and all the above.

Try mixing the stage props to create your own background than redo this. Should increase it's value alot more.

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