Young Sindel
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Young Sindel
07/29/2011 11:16 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: Young Sindel
07/30/2011 09:26 PM EDT
Wow....I wish I could draw this good.


My only problem is with the face but everything else is fantastic.
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RE: Fan Submission: Young Sindel
07/31/2011 03:10 AM EDT
What, particularly, is the problem with the face? It came out a tad 'sassy' for what I was going for, but... You know.... Maybe she was cranky that day, hehe.
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RE: Fan Submission: Young Sindel
07/31/2011 03:24 AM EDT
Harle Wrote:
What, particularly, is the problem with the face? It came out a tad 'sassy' for what I was going for, but... You know.... Maybe she was cranky that day, hehe.


The shading on the right side kinds looks like she has a black eye. She did come out a bit sassywink
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RE: Fan Submission: Young Sindel
07/31/2011 03:40 AM EDT
Very pretty indeed, though to be honest, I feel that the short hair's not suitable. I can imagine her having long, black hair in her youth, and since in reality she has longer hair than that, it feels like it's lacking a key detail about her character. Definitely a great picture, but I don't see enough of Sindel in it.
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RE: Fan Submission: Young Sindel
07/31/2011 05:01 AM EDT
Jerrod Wrote:
Very pretty indeed, though to be honest, I feel that the short hair's not suitable. I can imagine her having long, black hair in her youth, and since in reality she has longer hair than that, it feels like it's lacking a key detail about her character. Definitely a great picture, but I don't see enough of Sindel in it.


Ah, damn!

That totally slipped my mind! When I was planning out the picture and sketching all the hair I had this fantastic idea for hair just... Everywhere... I got side tracked with a Jade drawing and came back to this one weeks later just sort of powering through the shading to finish it. I completely forgot the hair... I'll have to edit this at some point. Thanks for bringing that to my attention.

I'm also currently working on a 'banshee scream' Sindel picture with more hair than you can handle, hehe...

As for her 'black eye', that's probably a camera issue. Initially, her face remained as shadowy as it is, but her body was darker. I couldn't get it without a flash and for some reason my camera intensely brightens the center of the picture. Since this image is cropped to show just Sindel, the shoulder is actually the center of the picture, so her chest and right side came out significantly brighter than her face, which remained mostly the same... Though it may also be that she just has a black eye, heh, but the shoulder thing only makes that worse.... Now I can't stop looking at it and it looks all swollen. Look what you've done!
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RE: Fan Submission: Young Sindel
07/31/2011 01:02 PM EDT
Harle Wrote:

As for her 'black eye', that's probably a camera issue. Initially, her face remained as shadowy as it is, but her body was darker. I couldn't get it without a flash and for some reason my camera intensely brightens the center of the picture. Since this image is cropped to show just Sindel, the shoulder is actually the center of the picture, so her chest and right side came out significantly brighter than her face, which remained mostly the same... Though it may also be that she just has a black eye, heh, but the shoulder thing only makes that worse.... Now I can't stop looking at it and it looks all swollen. Look what you've done!


I'm sorry!!!
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RE: Fan Submission: Young Sindel
08/01/2011 04:04 PM EDT
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I'm sorry!!!


Hehehehe... I can't tell if you're joking or not, but don't be sorry. I put this up here to have an actual critique of the work, and you pointed out a problem I hadn't noticed that needed to be fixed. Granted, I'm obsessing over it now, but it's all good.
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