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Your own created characters...........
Have any of you just randomly made up youar very own Mortal Kombat character? I have! If so then please list every single detail about you character here. I will rate each and everyone one. Here is what I would like for you to post about your character.........................
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Power:
Costume:
Moves:
Fatalities:
Friends with:
Enemies with:
Describe the story line of your character as well. What is his or her goal in life? I will do my charcater in the next post.
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Power:
Costume:
Moves:
Fatalities:
Friends with:
Enemies with:
Describe the story line of your character as well. What is his or her goal in life? I will do my charcater in the next post.
Name: Rorak
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Power: Control of Fire / Mimics other powers
Costume: Mask like Scorpion's (color black). Black shirt, cape.
Symbol: Skull
Weapon: Straight Sword
Moves: Mimic (Down, back, A). Unleash Hell (Down, Up, Y). Whirlwind (Forward, Forward, B). Power Steal (Back, Back, X).
Fatalities: Fire Death [far] (Up, Down, Up, Down, Y). Back Breaker [sweep] (Back, Foward, Foward, Foward A).
Friends with: Kung Lao, Scorpion, Sub-Zero, Reptlie, Quan Chi.
Enemies with: Shang Tsung, Ermac, Rain, Smoke, Noob.
Rorak was once an ordinary man who was a master at Kung Fu. His name was Decreot back then. Decreot was a teacher and taught of karate at many different schools. He transfered to a different school every year so he could teach more kids of his ways. He designed his sword himself and spent a whole month finishing the details. One day, an elder god named Demashi came to him asking for his help. Decreot asked for what he must do before he agreed. Demashi explained to him everything about the Kamidogu and how he must find all of them and return it to him. Rorak refused to help, for he wanted to continue in his teachings. Demashi (as Onaga) casted Decreot to the Netherrealm for refusing then went to go find another that will help him.
Decreot was frightened there in the Netherrealm. What of his family? Would he ever see them again? He explored the Netherrealm in desperate need of help from anyone. That is when he happened to mean Quan Chi. Quan Chi agreed to free him from the Netherrealm once he escapes himself. And to do this, he would need Scorpion out of his way. They made an arrangement there. Once Decreot destroys Scorpion, Quan Chi will free him. Quan Chi gave Decreot all of the details about Scorpion in order for Decreot to find him. He took off at once.
Decreot looked all around for Scorpion and eventually found him. Without warning, Decreot came toward Scorpion and beat him half to death. Once he thought that Scorpion was dead he turned around and started to walk back to Quan Chi. All of a sudden a spear goes right through Decreot's heart and he is killed.
One year later, Decreot opened his eyes once more..... but wasn't the same. He felt different some how. He looked around to find himself on an altar. Then he looked at a mirror to find that he wasn't Decreot anymore.......
More on the next post!
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Power: Control of Fire / Mimics other powers
Costume: Mask like Scorpion's (color black). Black shirt, cape.
Symbol: Skull
Weapon: Straight Sword
Moves: Mimic (Down, back, A). Unleash Hell (Down, Up, Y). Whirlwind (Forward, Forward, B). Power Steal (Back, Back, X).
Fatalities: Fire Death [far] (Up, Down, Up, Down, Y). Back Breaker [sweep] (Back, Foward, Foward, Foward A).
Friends with: Kung Lao, Scorpion, Sub-Zero, Reptlie, Quan Chi.
Enemies with: Shang Tsung, Ermac, Rain, Smoke, Noob.
Rorak was once an ordinary man who was a master at Kung Fu. His name was Decreot back then. Decreot was a teacher and taught of karate at many different schools. He transfered to a different school every year so he could teach more kids of his ways. He designed his sword himself and spent a whole month finishing the details. One day, an elder god named Demashi came to him asking for his help. Decreot asked for what he must do before he agreed. Demashi explained to him everything about the Kamidogu and how he must find all of them and return it to him. Rorak refused to help, for he wanted to continue in his teachings. Demashi (as Onaga) casted Decreot to the Netherrealm for refusing then went to go find another that will help him.
Decreot was frightened there in the Netherrealm. What of his family? Would he ever see them again? He explored the Netherrealm in desperate need of help from anyone. That is when he happened to mean Quan Chi. Quan Chi agreed to free him from the Netherrealm once he escapes himself. And to do this, he would need Scorpion out of his way. They made an arrangement there. Once Decreot destroys Scorpion, Quan Chi will free him. Quan Chi gave Decreot all of the details about Scorpion in order for Decreot to find him. He took off at once.
Decreot looked all around for Scorpion and eventually found him. Without warning, Decreot came toward Scorpion and beat him half to death. Once he thought that Scorpion was dead he turned around and started to walk back to Quan Chi. All of a sudden a spear goes right through Decreot's heart and he is killed.
One year later, Decreot opened his eyes once more..... but wasn't the same. He felt different some how. He looked around to find himself on an altar. Then he looked at a mirror to find that he wasn't Decreot anymore.......
More on the next post!
there are a few logical errors, but good for a start:
-he was a master at kung fu, but teached karate?
-the story resembles other charaters plotlines in some parts. When creating a character, zou should thinkover, how much heás resembling the others. In mz opinion heás nothing but another Scorpion-like fighter, being killed, then suddenléz finds himself alive, his face changes...you get the picture.
-the moves, costumes and special abilities must be partially-unique too.
So, I guess theese are the points that make a character more succesfull.
What I really did like, was the flow of the story. You seemed to put the words in exact order, and kept it coherent through and untill the end.
-he was a master at kung fu, but teached karate?
-the story resembles other charaters plotlines in some parts. When creating a character, zou should thinkover, how much heás resembling the others. In mz opinion heás nothing but another Scorpion-like fighter, being killed, then suddenléz finds himself alive, his face changes...you get the picture.
-the moves, costumes and special abilities must be partially-unique too.
So, I guess theese are the points that make a character more succesfull.
What I really did like, was the flow of the story. You seemed to put the words in exact order, and kept it coherent through and untill the end.

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Well, I have created about 10 characters. 3 of them are already entered into a tournament in IGN where I am the thread creator(http://boards.ign.com/Mortal_Kombat/b6027/79471363/p1) and 7 others are made for the upcoming tournament in GameFaq.com. Would you like for me to post a couple since I want to find out what you people think about them before I enter them on GameFaqs? I just want the feedback of if they are any good or bad.
Thanx.
Thanx.


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Name: Harlequin
Age: ??
Gender: M
Power: Heightened Agility, Highly Skilled Juggler/Knife Thrower
Costume: (Pic Below)
Moves:Knife toss, Arrow Kick(Think the Kung Lao kick fromMK II)
Fatalities:
Knife Flurry( Throws a few dozen knives at the person)
Neck Breaker: Dives onto the opponent and locks his legs around their neck. Spins in a circular motion and breaks thier neck simultaniously leaping into the air and landing on his feet in his victory pose.
Friends with: Noob Saibot, Reiko
Enemies with:Liu Kang, Kung Lao, Kai
Story: An entertainer for the emperor, Harlequin was actually a spy for the Brotherhood of Shadow. When the emperor was slain, his mission was to find the killers and take them out as well. The Brotherhood of Shadow was not going to be shown up by anybody.

Age: ??
Gender: M
Power: Heightened Agility, Highly Skilled Juggler/Knife Thrower
Costume: (Pic Below)
Moves:Knife toss, Arrow Kick(Think the Kung Lao kick fromMK II)
Fatalities:
Knife Flurry( Throws a few dozen knives at the person)
Neck Breaker: Dives onto the opponent and locks his legs around their neck. Spins in a circular motion and breaks thier neck simultaniously leaping into the air and landing on his feet in his victory pose.
Friends with: Noob Saibot, Reiko
Enemies with:Liu Kang, Kung Lao, Kai
Story: An entertainer for the emperor, Harlequin was actually a spy for the Brotherhood of Shadow. When the emperor was slain, his mission was to find the killers and take them out as well. The Brotherhood of Shadow was not going to be shown up by anybody.


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OK, it seems like you can post your character here, so, please rate mine as well for me. Here is the 1st of the 2 I am posting to get it rated.
Name: La-Vone
Gender: Male
Alliance: Evil
Origin: Outworld
Age: 31
Height: 6¡ ̄2
Weight: Unknown
Allies: Mileena, Baraka, Tanya
Foes: Raiden, Kitana, Bo Rai Cho
Description: La-vone looks a bit similar to Baraka in that he too has sharp sets of teeth like Barakas, but his similarities end right there. He has an Afro-American skin with black goatee and a black mustache. He has a short black hair that only covers the upper part of the head and wears a yellow, fur jacket on his shirtless, well-built body, and wears the brown, boxer¡ ̄s short and a black army boots.
Costumes: Primary: Same as the description
Alternate: Shirtless, with a jean and bare feet.
Styles: 1) Choi Kwang-do: can be found in:
http://www.kickboxing.com/knowledge/search/styles/choikwangdo.htm
2) Krav Maga: can be found in:
http://www.kickboxing.com/knowledge/search/styles/kravmaga.htm
Weapon: Iron Club(Weapon that Drahmin had in MKDA, this time, not implanted like Drahmin was, but actual weapon that he carries)
Bio: I am La-Vone. An Outworlder of the French descendant. I work for Baraka in the Tarkatan race of warriors and am proud to be a member. I am a warrior that Baraka have chosen to ambush the forces of Raiden to give our master Onaga time he needs to take over Earthrealm and shape it in a way that we all feel fit and comfortable in. Earthrealm shall be ours. Raiden and his pathetic armies are no match against our Tarkatan Nomad race. The whole world belongs to us and I will stop at nothing until we get what we are shooting for. World Domination.
Arena: Inside the huge Ice Cave with various frozen corpses and skeletons scattered around
Deathtrap: The opponent can break the ice walls anywhere. If you uppercut them or use any powerful move that sends them flying to the wall, the wall will crack. If they hit the already cracked wall, the wall will break and the victim will fly out. The camera follows them. Outside of that cave is actually a giant pit where they will fall down and get impaled by not one, but several spikes until they die.
Stage Weapon: Giant Ice Shard blade(Can be hard to find since it is has the same color and attribute as the ground)
Entrance Animation: Flosses his teeth as if he just had a big meal and faces the opponent
Winning Pose: Strikes his Iron Club onto the screen in 3D and the screen is seen cracked.
Get up animation: Stares at the sky, put his hands out as if saying ¡®this can¡ ̄t be happening¡ ̄ Then gets up.
Quote: ¡®I will clean your corpse with my teeth¡ ̄
Moves:
1) Tarkatan Fury: F, F, 1(La-Vone aims his head to the opponent, and all of a certain, an image of a fake teeth of his appears, and chews the opponent¡ ̄s head 3 or 4 times)
2) Crystal Koffin: D, F, 2(La-Vone projects a koffin look alike clear crystal and shoots at an enemy who gets trapped inside for a few seconds for more punishment) *Only downside is that this move is pretty slow so you can see it coming but, once it lands, you get a free hit/kombos.*
3) Shadow Uppercuts: B,D,B, 2(La-Vone does Johnny Cage¡ ̄s MK2 move but he throws 4 uppercuts rather than Johnny¡ ̄s one uppercut)
4) Who turn out the lights?: D,U,4(La-Vone flips his thump and index finger with a ¡®tick¡ ̄ and all of a certain, screen turns all black, and for 5 seconds, we hear a bunch of punches getting landed onto an opponent, then the light comes back on having the opponent stunned. Can easily be blocked however, since it is only a close range move that La-Vone should be no farther then in sweep range, other then that, the move cannot be performed to be fair)
5) Between Heaven and Hell: F,B, 2(La-Vone raises one of his arms, then certainly strange looking chamber gets created in about 2 steps in front of him. If the opponent walks into it, or if the opponent was close enough to get that nailed to them, they will fall into a temporary coma and will get stunned for 10 seconds.)
6) See you in hell: D,B, 3(Looks much like Scorpion¡ ̄s hand from hell fatality from MKT, for a giant skeleton hand comes out from the ground, grabs the opponent and squeezes them and stuns them for 5 seconds)
7) Lunch Time: B,F, 1(La-Vone sharpens his teeth and rush at the opponent and bites their head for a few seconds and backs up. Opponent gets knockout and get back up shaking their head)
Fatality:
1) Cannibalism: F,U,U,D, 4(La-Vone walks up close, and bite off the neck of an opponent with his teeth like what Mileena does in MKD but quicker then, chew down on the body of the opponent to pieces then eats them bit by bit. Leaving only the legs standing which he kicks them down the ground, blood flies everywhere)
2) Hey, Turn the light on: F,B,D,U, 2(La-vone flips his fingers like he did in his ¡®who turn out the lights¡ ̄ move, then the screen blacks, we hear a whole bunch of bone crunching sound and shrieking scream, then all of a certain, with the clicking sound the light gets turned on again, La-vone is seen chewing something. The opponents crushed bones and bloods are seen around him. La-vone turns around in surprised look that he got caught eating or something and kicks the screen in 3D)
Hara Kiri: F,B,B,D, 3(La-Vone breaks one of his sharp teeth with an agony and with that, he cut himself in half and fall down)
Ending: The forces of Raiden and his allies were no match for the newly formed Tarkatan warriors army. They attacked in packs, and under the command of La-Vone, they seemed invincible. Raiden even asked his secret brother Yanden to help, but the vicious and ruthless warriors such as Tarkatan were too much for them to handle. La-Vone knew about the weakness of the forces of Raiden and took advantage of that fact and raided the attacks. Baraka was no fool and he saw a potential in La-Vone. Part of the reason he has chosen La-Vone as the commander of his newly formed army. Raiden and Yanden¡ ̄s allies have been fallen. Onaga and Tarkatan warriors charged in. Earthrealm will soon fall to them.
Please rate this character of mine and I will post another one tomorrow. To see if he is worth it to enter the tournament on the other board I am at.
Thanx in advance
Name: La-Vone
Gender: Male
Alliance: Evil
Origin: Outworld
Age: 31
Height: 6¡ ̄2
Weight: Unknown
Allies: Mileena, Baraka, Tanya
Foes: Raiden, Kitana, Bo Rai Cho
Description: La-vone looks a bit similar to Baraka in that he too has sharp sets of teeth like Barakas, but his similarities end right there. He has an Afro-American skin with black goatee and a black mustache. He has a short black hair that only covers the upper part of the head and wears a yellow, fur jacket on his shirtless, well-built body, and wears the brown, boxer¡ ̄s short and a black army boots.
Costumes: Primary: Same as the description
Alternate: Shirtless, with a jean and bare feet.
Styles: 1) Choi Kwang-do: can be found in:
http://www.kickboxing.com/knowledge/search/styles/choikwangdo.htm
2) Krav Maga: can be found in:
http://www.kickboxing.com/knowledge/search/styles/kravmaga.htm
Weapon: Iron Club(Weapon that Drahmin had in MKDA, this time, not implanted like Drahmin was, but actual weapon that he carries)
Bio: I am La-Vone. An Outworlder of the French descendant. I work for Baraka in the Tarkatan race of warriors and am proud to be a member. I am a warrior that Baraka have chosen to ambush the forces of Raiden to give our master Onaga time he needs to take over Earthrealm and shape it in a way that we all feel fit and comfortable in. Earthrealm shall be ours. Raiden and his pathetic armies are no match against our Tarkatan Nomad race. The whole world belongs to us and I will stop at nothing until we get what we are shooting for. World Domination.
Arena: Inside the huge Ice Cave with various frozen corpses and skeletons scattered around
Deathtrap: The opponent can break the ice walls anywhere. If you uppercut them or use any powerful move that sends them flying to the wall, the wall will crack. If they hit the already cracked wall, the wall will break and the victim will fly out. The camera follows them. Outside of that cave is actually a giant pit where they will fall down and get impaled by not one, but several spikes until they die.
Stage Weapon: Giant Ice Shard blade(Can be hard to find since it is has the same color and attribute as the ground)
Entrance Animation: Flosses his teeth as if he just had a big meal and faces the opponent
Winning Pose: Strikes his Iron Club onto the screen in 3D and the screen is seen cracked.
Get up animation: Stares at the sky, put his hands out as if saying ¡®this can¡ ̄t be happening¡ ̄ Then gets up.
Quote: ¡®I will clean your corpse with my teeth¡ ̄
Moves:
1) Tarkatan Fury: F, F, 1(La-Vone aims his head to the opponent, and all of a certain, an image of a fake teeth of his appears, and chews the opponent¡ ̄s head 3 or 4 times)
2) Crystal Koffin: D, F, 2(La-Vone projects a koffin look alike clear crystal and shoots at an enemy who gets trapped inside for a few seconds for more punishment) *Only downside is that this move is pretty slow so you can see it coming but, once it lands, you get a free hit/kombos.*
3) Shadow Uppercuts: B,D,B, 2(La-Vone does Johnny Cage¡ ̄s MK2 move but he throws 4 uppercuts rather than Johnny¡ ̄s one uppercut)
4) Who turn out the lights?: D,U,4(La-Vone flips his thump and index finger with a ¡®tick¡ ̄ and all of a certain, screen turns all black, and for 5 seconds, we hear a bunch of punches getting landed onto an opponent, then the light comes back on having the opponent stunned. Can easily be blocked however, since it is only a close range move that La-Vone should be no farther then in sweep range, other then that, the move cannot be performed to be fair)
5) Between Heaven and Hell: F,B, 2(La-Vone raises one of his arms, then certainly strange looking chamber gets created in about 2 steps in front of him. If the opponent walks into it, or if the opponent was close enough to get that nailed to them, they will fall into a temporary coma and will get stunned for 10 seconds.)
6) See you in hell: D,B, 3(Looks much like Scorpion¡ ̄s hand from hell fatality from MKT, for a giant skeleton hand comes out from the ground, grabs the opponent and squeezes them and stuns them for 5 seconds)
7) Lunch Time: B,F, 1(La-Vone sharpens his teeth and rush at the opponent and bites their head for a few seconds and backs up. Opponent gets knockout and get back up shaking their head)
Fatality:
1) Cannibalism: F,U,U,D, 4(La-Vone walks up close, and bite off the neck of an opponent with his teeth like what Mileena does in MKD but quicker then, chew down on the body of the opponent to pieces then eats them bit by bit. Leaving only the legs standing which he kicks them down the ground, blood flies everywhere)
2) Hey, Turn the light on: F,B,D,U, 2(La-vone flips his fingers like he did in his ¡®who turn out the lights¡ ̄ move, then the screen blacks, we hear a whole bunch of bone crunching sound and shrieking scream, then all of a certain, with the clicking sound the light gets turned on again, La-vone is seen chewing something. The opponents crushed bones and bloods are seen around him. La-vone turns around in surprised look that he got caught eating or something and kicks the screen in 3D)
Hara Kiri: F,B,B,D, 3(La-Vone breaks one of his sharp teeth with an agony and with that, he cut himself in half and fall down)
Ending: The forces of Raiden and his allies were no match for the newly formed Tarkatan warriors army. They attacked in packs, and under the command of La-Vone, they seemed invincible. Raiden even asked his secret brother Yanden to help, but the vicious and ruthless warriors such as Tarkatan were too much for them to handle. La-Vone knew about the weakness of the forces of Raiden and took advantage of that fact and raided the attacks. Baraka was no fool and he saw a potential in La-Vone. Part of the reason he has chosen La-Vone as the commander of his newly formed army. Raiden and Yanden¡ ̄s allies have been fallen. Onaga and Tarkatan warriors charged in. Earthrealm will soon fall to them.
Please rate this character of mine and I will post another one tomorrow. To see if he is worth it to enter the tournament on the other board I am at.
Thanx in advance

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Well, it seems like it does not take the single Quotation mark. Well, just substitute the Korean Character you see in the body as the single quotation marks. I hate it when that happens.
Hello... just reminding everyone to submit their concepts so they can be posted on the site in their very own threads. Dragon points are given as well... there are many final authors here, and I sincerely wish a lot of you made use of the submission process.


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For rorak:
There ya go. If ya don't like it, i.m. me.

There ya go. If ya don't like it, i.m. me.
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