mk7 should be MORTAL KOMBAT REDEMTION (brand new story)
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mk7 should be MORTAL KOMBAT REDEMTION (brand new story)
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posted07/14/2005 07:39 PM (UTC)by

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Mortal Kombat: Redemption (the same title as my other post, but competely different story with more info)
The story:
Shao Kahn looks to redeem him self as the emperor of Outworld. With the help of prince Goro and the shokan warriors, He has killed Onaga, defeated kitanas army, and destroyed the tarkatan hordes for there betrayal against him. Now that all of Shao Kahns outworld enemies have been vanquised. Shao Kahn looks to finish what he started a long time ago, merge the realms into one, but this time with the kamidogus. His first attack was on Edenia. Queen Sindel, and Kitana along with jade travel to earthrelam for help. Now shao kahn seek to destroy the earth warriors.
Bios:
name: Shao Kahn
origin: Out world
Alignment: evil
allies Prince Goro, havik
Foes:Kitana Sindel Onaga Liu Kang Raiden Baraka
With the help of the shokan I have regain control of Outworld. I have defeated Onaga once again, defeated kitanas army and I have destroyed those back stabbing tarkatan. Now with the kamidogus I have the power to change the realms as I see fit, but something is not right, a fill another present at work a dark presents.
name: Prince Goro
origin: Out world
Alignment: Evil
allies: Shao Kahn
foes: Kitana Sindel Onaga Liu Kang Raiden Baraka, Noob Saibot the centarians (Motaro)
I have sided with shao kahn once again to put him back in to power I had pledge my allegiance by killing what I now know is a fake Kitana. Shao Kahn had revived me from near death at the hands of Noob Saibot. He has also offered that if I take his side he would show my shotan warriors favor and banish the centrarians. I have served him once before and I will do it again for my people
name: Scorpion
origin: Netherealm
Alignment: neutral
allies: the elder gods
foes: onaga, sub-zero, moloch, dramhin, Quan chi
Now that Onaga was killed at the hands of Shao Kahn I seek to continue my revenge on Quan chi. I learn he had survived his ordeal with Onaga. While I was on his trail there was a bright light, and I was transported to the hall of the elder gods. The god want be to be there champion once again to stop Shao Kahn. I grow tired and impatient with the elder gods. the gods also worn me of another even more dangerous threat than Shao Kahn.
name: Sub-zero
origin: Earth realm
Alignment: good
allies; Raiden , frost, sareena
foes: quan chi, scorpion, onaga shao kahn, Noob saibot, smoke, sektor
I survived the trakatan forces with the help of my new armor I have found in the catacombs of the mountain. I have learned a lot about my heritage, I learn new powers and techniques. If only my older brother werent a wraith. he would be a shock it learn of our heritage, but I have to find out what happened to our once thriving race and stop Shao Kahn.
name: noob smoke
origin:netherealm
allignment: evil
allies: ?
foes: Prince goro, sub-zero
I ventured back into earthrealm and went to Japan along with smoke to locate the ninja cyborg Sektor. When we located him he had already created thousands of Tekunin. I looked forward to recruiting some of his Tekunin. Then we gave him and order to make a special type of Tekunin, one that is brought life and uses dark energy. It was for are master
name: sektor
origin: earthrealm
allignment: evil
allies: none
foes: sub-zero forst raiden jax sonya cyrax
I went to Japan to create my army of Tekunin warriors some time ago. When I was puting on my finishing touches, noob saibot and smoke had found my hidden base an infiltrated it undetected. When they found me they said they came in peace. they worn if a great evil and said that they would like for me to make a special type of Tekuin. one that was born of dark magic. I agreed to make this Tekuin
Endings
shao Kahn
Shao Khan had succeeded in defeating the earth warriors. Now Shao khan has all the knowledge he needed to merge the realms as he saw fit. Goro than asked if he could banish the centarians. shao kahn than laugh at goro and told him that once he merge the realms that all shall parish at my feet. Goro tried to reason with him, but it was no use, he killed goro in one shot. When shao kahn was geting ready to shout out the incantation he felt he the present of someone he had not felt in along time. It was the fallen elder..........Shinnok
goro
Goro had defeated the earthrealm warriors. when he had return to Shao kahn he ask him if he could banish the centarians . Shao Kahn had gone back on his word and he said he shall not banish the centarians. An angered goro attacked shao kahn and it looks as if goro was going to win but goro attack from behind by another shokan. It wasnt just any shokan it was kintaro he had help shao kahn kill goro. now there was no one who could stop shao kahn from mergeing the realms.
Scorpion
Now that scorpion had defeated Shao kahn he look to continue his revenge for Quan Chi when all of sudden he was transported back to the hall of the elder gods first they praised him on a job well done. but then the elder gods told of the new threat that he has to stop, it was shinnok. Scorpion did not want to serve the elder gods no more, and rejected there proposal, but before scorpion cloud leave one of the gods said that if you do this big task for us we will reunite you with your family. thinking about his past scorpion agreed to help them again.
Sub-zero
the earth warriors had failed in stopping shao kahn and his forces most of them were killed, but sub-zero was able to escape. He returns to the mountain of his ancestors. and while he was there he found a secret passage to a hidden room where there was a huge ancient structure. The writing on the walls explained what this structure could do. It could do three things, one it bring back a handful of live every millennium, it could separate the darkness of someone from the original like a wraith, and it can in enhance the power of a great ice warrior. This would truly help in the fight against shao kahn.
noob smoke
now everything was ready for there master. He was about to make his return when sektor apperad with the new Tekuin sector called (?????) it was perfect than noob saibot bought it to life with a spell that was given to him by his master. It came to life and then it attack sektor killing him with out mercy. before sektor did he got to see noob and smokes master it was Shinnok now with the help of (?????) noob saibot and smoke could help shinnok become the ruler of the realms.
sektor
Sektor was putting the finishing touches on the new cyborg. When he was finish with the new cyborg a strange dark power went into it and in awoke for the first time. sektor was trilled to see his warrior come alive, but his happiness was short lived because the cybrog who went by the name (?????) attack sektor and killed him with out mercy. noob and smoke enter room to congratulate (?????) in his first mission than there was a flash noob and smoke master came true a portal to congratulate him as well it was shinnok they had plan to kill sektor from the beginning.
Characters:
Shao Kahn
Goro
Scorpion
Sub-zero
Noob Smoke
Sektor
Kitana
Sindel
Jade
Liu Kang
Jax
Sonya
Ermac
Johnny Cage (even tough i am tried of him)
Cyrax
Kabal
Kira
Havik
Raiden
The story:
Shao Kahn looks to redeem him self as the emperor of Outworld. With the help of prince Goro and the shokan warriors, He has killed Onaga, defeated kitanas army, and destroyed the tarkatan hordes for there betrayal against him. Now that all of Shao Kahns outworld enemies have been vanquised. Shao Kahn looks to finish what he started a long time ago, merge the realms into one, but this time with the kamidogus. His first attack was on Edenia. Queen Sindel, and Kitana along with jade travel to earthrelam for help. Now shao kahn seek to destroy the earth warriors.
Bios:
name: Shao Kahn
origin: Out world
Alignment: evil
allies Prince Goro, havik
Foes:Kitana Sindel Onaga Liu Kang Raiden Baraka
With the help of the shokan I have regain control of Outworld. I have defeated Onaga once again, defeated kitanas army and I have destroyed those back stabbing tarkatan. Now with the kamidogus I have the power to change the realms as I see fit, but something is not right, a fill another present at work a dark presents.
name: Prince Goro
origin: Out world
Alignment: Evil
allies: Shao Kahn
foes: Kitana Sindel Onaga Liu Kang Raiden Baraka, Noob Saibot the centarians (Motaro)
I have sided with shao kahn once again to put him back in to power I had pledge my allegiance by killing what I now know is a fake Kitana. Shao Kahn had revived me from near death at the hands of Noob Saibot. He has also offered that if I take his side he would show my shotan warriors favor and banish the centrarians. I have served him once before and I will do it again for my people
name: Scorpion
origin: Netherealm
Alignment: neutral
allies: the elder gods
foes: onaga, sub-zero, moloch, dramhin, Quan chi
Now that Onaga was killed at the hands of Shao Kahn I seek to continue my revenge on Quan chi. I learn he had survived his ordeal with Onaga. While I was on his trail there was a bright light, and I was transported to the hall of the elder gods. The god want be to be there champion once again to stop Shao Kahn. I grow tired and impatient with the elder gods. the gods also worn me of another even more dangerous threat than Shao Kahn.
name: Sub-zero
origin: Earth realm
Alignment: good
allies; Raiden , frost, sareena
foes: quan chi, scorpion, onaga shao kahn, Noob saibot, smoke, sektor
I survived the trakatan forces with the help of my new armor I have found in the catacombs of the mountain. I have learned a lot about my heritage, I learn new powers and techniques. If only my older brother werent a wraith. he would be a shock it learn of our heritage, but I have to find out what happened to our once thriving race and stop Shao Kahn.
name: noob smoke
origin:netherealm
allignment: evil
allies: ?
foes: Prince goro, sub-zero
I ventured back into earthrealm and went to Japan along with smoke to locate the ninja cyborg Sektor. When we located him he had already created thousands of Tekunin. I looked forward to recruiting some of his Tekunin. Then we gave him and order to make a special type of Tekunin, one that is brought life and uses dark energy. It was for are master
name: sektor
origin: earthrealm
allignment: evil
allies: none
foes: sub-zero forst raiden jax sonya cyrax
I went to Japan to create my army of Tekunin warriors some time ago. When I was puting on my finishing touches, noob saibot and smoke had found my hidden base an infiltrated it undetected. When they found me they said they came in peace. they worn if a great evil and said that they would like for me to make a special type of Tekuin. one that was born of dark magic. I agreed to make this Tekuin
Endings
shao Kahn
Shao Khan had succeeded in defeating the earth warriors. Now Shao khan has all the knowledge he needed to merge the realms as he saw fit. Goro than asked if he could banish the centarians. shao kahn than laugh at goro and told him that once he merge the realms that all shall parish at my feet. Goro tried to reason with him, but it was no use, he killed goro in one shot. When shao kahn was geting ready to shout out the incantation he felt he the present of someone he had not felt in along time. It was the fallen elder..........Shinnok
goro
Goro had defeated the earthrealm warriors. when he had return to Shao kahn he ask him if he could banish the centarians . Shao Kahn had gone back on his word and he said he shall not banish the centarians. An angered goro attacked shao kahn and it looks as if goro was going to win but goro attack from behind by another shokan. It wasnt just any shokan it was kintaro he had help shao kahn kill goro. now there was no one who could stop shao kahn from mergeing the realms.
Scorpion
Now that scorpion had defeated Shao kahn he look to continue his revenge for Quan Chi when all of sudden he was transported back to the hall of the elder gods first they praised him on a job well done. but then the elder gods told of the new threat that he has to stop, it was shinnok. Scorpion did not want to serve the elder gods no more, and rejected there proposal, but before scorpion cloud leave one of the gods said that if you do this big task for us we will reunite you with your family. thinking about his past scorpion agreed to help them again.
Sub-zero
the earth warriors had failed in stopping shao kahn and his forces most of them were killed, but sub-zero was able to escape. He returns to the mountain of his ancestors. and while he was there he found a secret passage to a hidden room where there was a huge ancient structure. The writing on the walls explained what this structure could do. It could do three things, one it bring back a handful of live every millennium, it could separate the darkness of someone from the original like a wraith, and it can in enhance the power of a great ice warrior. This would truly help in the fight against shao kahn.
noob smoke
now everything was ready for there master. He was about to make his return when sektor apperad with the new Tekuin sector called (?????) it was perfect than noob saibot bought it to life with a spell that was given to him by his master. It came to life and then it attack sektor killing him with out mercy. before sektor did he got to see noob and smokes master it was Shinnok now with the help of (?????) noob saibot and smoke could help shinnok become the ruler of the realms.
sektor
Sektor was putting the finishing touches on the new cyborg. When he was finish with the new cyborg a strange dark power went into it and in awoke for the first time. sektor was trilled to see his warrior come alive, but his happiness was short lived because the cybrog who went by the name (?????) attack sektor and killed him with out mercy. noob and smoke enter room to congratulate (?????) in his first mission than there was a flash noob and smoke master came true a portal to congratulate him as well it was shinnok they had plan to kill sektor from the beginning.
Characters:
Shao Kahn
Goro
Scorpion
Sub-zero
Noob Smoke
Sektor
Kitana
Sindel
Jade
Liu Kang
Jax
Sonya
Ermac
Johnny Cage (even tough i am tried of him)
Cyrax
Kabal
Kira
Havik
Raiden

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Interesting work. You need to touch up on your grammar, punctuation and spelling so that everything is somewhat easier to read and understand.
A lot of what you've written is somewhat vague and there's not much explanation as to how some things are happening and why. You should consider revising what you've written and make sure it works in terms of how other stories relate to it and how the MK history and past events have also happened. Some of what is going on just doesn't flow. You have interesting ideas, however.
A lot of what you've written is somewhat vague and there's not much explanation as to how some things are happening and why. You should consider revising what you've written and make sure it works in terms of how other stories relate to it and how the MK history and past events have also happened. Some of what is going on just doesn't flow. You have interesting ideas, however.

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tgrant im not sure where you are geting at. ok maybe shinnok's return may have came out of the air, but alot of charaters come from nowhere like some of the new Characters in deception like Darrius ,Dairou, havik etc. Maybe noob smokes bio isn't quite the same as the deception ending. Everything else fits.
in the gamecube version of deception shao kahn and goro team up to rule outworld. the game metions the deal between them
in deception Scorpion is chosen as the champion of the elder gods. He was chosen by the elder gods to defeat onaga i am just continuing where deception leaves off
sub-zero i don't even have to explain but i will in the deception ending he fighting the tarkatan horde then his armor talks to him and helps him win the fight and i continue on from there
sektor is no different it is just continuing from MK:TE
in the gamecube version of deception shao kahn and goro team up to rule outworld. the game metions the deal between them
in deception Scorpion is chosen as the champion of the elder gods. He was chosen by the elder gods to defeat onaga i am just continuing where deception leaves off
sub-zero i don't even have to explain but i will in the deception ending he fighting the tarkatan horde then his armor talks to him and helps him win the fight and i continue on from there
sektor is no different it is just continuing from MK:TE
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