Hmm, well, first off, it's spelled Kamidogu. Secondly, I don't think the One Being was the one who declared war and there was nothing ever said about its "foolish pride". I believe that the Elder Gods waged war on the One Being because it fed off of them. The Elder Gods created the Kamidogu and used its powers to splinter the One Being's conciousness into the many realms of reality.

I'm sorry if this post is ripping your work apart but this needs to be said...you're assuming way too much.

Firstly, time was irrelivent before the creation of the realms. The gods and the one being are eternal beings, time doesn't matter to them. When the realms were created and mortals came into being, then time took on meaning. To mention that the war between the gods and the one being was waged for centuries should be ommitted.

When you said that there were two beings that was wrong. there is more than one elder god, hence Elder GodS.

Words like "omnipotence" and "foolish pride" were never used in any in game text. Try not to add and sumarize so much, stick to the facts.

where's the kamidogu? You didn't mention it in the war between the gods and the one being. Like Sub 7th said, the Elder Gods created the kamidogu and used it to shatter the One Being's conciousness, thus creating the realms.

The Kamidogu are artifacts holding the power of the Elder Gods. When Onaga got all the pieces, (Raiden said this in the intro) he exibited power only wielded by the elder gods themselves. To say the kamidogu holds the essence of the realms is missleading.

There are more than six realms. Check Wikipedia for the realms of Mortal Kombat section. It'll fill you in on the other realms.

Lastly, you should drop the legend part at the end. There's no metion of a legend of the kamidogu that I know of. It seem as if you're summarizing the events that took place MK:D's konquest and making up your own legend.

Eh. I was sorta basing it off of the One Being's wikipedia bio. So that's what I assumed was going on as I had never read much on the One Being's backstory. Also, I said ANYONE could edit it or add to it, so therefore you can fix any mistakes I make.

Eh, whoever wrote that bio for the One Being doesn't know what he/she was talking about and just made assumptions or just made stuff up in general.

I know. I change it once before but it seems they changed it back.