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Hypothetical Bio for Noob Smoke
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posted09/01/2004 03:41 AM (UTC)by
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Alright, here's something I threw together.

As the Deadly Alliance battled with the thunder god, Noob Saibot patiently awaited in the outer chamber for kombat to culminate. Now severed from all loyalties, including Kahn, his plan of action was to wait for a victor to arise, and then to finish them off in a decisive preemptive attack. Thereafter, Noob would seize the spirits of the soul chamber and then rule with immense power.

But his plans were crushed by an unexpected rival. The ninja Smoke, who had advanced beyond his cybernetic prison, crossed Noob Saibot on his way to aid Rayden in the fight. Knowing that any interference would foil his strategy, Noob took on the former the Lin Kuei warrior. The two were evently matched, and traded hit after hit until they both sensed an massive power close by. A power which without any doubt was on the verge of detonating.

Out of desperation, the two ninjas agreed to combine powers in order to evade the blast. With their essences merged together, they shielded themselves from the explosion. But in the aftermath, they had created a bond which couldn't be broken by any mortal. The two warriors crawled out of the rubble, only to discover they were somehow mortally linked. This revelation was a dark one at first, but both Noob and Smoke looked in the distance and saw Onaga: A threat that would eventually destroy everything, themselves included.

And at that moment, a new alliance was formed. These Ying and Yang mentalities had combined to create a being much more powerful. Two complimenting forces draw together to establish an entity that was two creatures, fighting as one immensionly strong warrior. Good and evil; Spirit and flesh; humility and arrogance; This alliance prepared for kombat. Smoke, who fought for the preservation of others, and Noob Saibot, who fought the preservation of himself, made an oath to destroy the Dragon King.
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 •08/30/2004 06:45 AM (UTC) •
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Just reading that gives me chills! I love it! I hope that they use this story... or yet an even better one! It'd suck so much if it was less than what you have written. That was so cool! I loved that last paragraph and the last two sentences about each character.
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 •08/30/2004 06:47 AM (UTC) •
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Great story TemperaryUserName! I love it. good detail's and plots. I throw my hat to you
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ErmacMk5
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 •08/30/2004 06:50 AM (UTC) •
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Great stuff Temp! I love how you work the detonation into the story.
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 •08/30/2004 06:53 AM (UTC) •
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but.. dum dum dummmm-- where did the detonating power come from --dum dum dummmm *70's style drama show piano in the background*

no really, i want to know, it sounds like a good biosmile
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 •08/30/2004 06:54 AM (UTC) •
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I was rethinking this, and noticed that if Noob Smoke is a sub-boss like some people are "thinking", then the story wouldn't work. Hmm...
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 •08/30/2004 06:55 AM (UTC) •
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o wait a second, nvm, now i know what the detonation is *blushes*tongue
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 •08/30/2004 06:56 AM (UTC) •
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aznmagicguy Wrote:
I was rethinking this, and noticed that if Noob Smoke is a sub-boss like some people are "thinking", then the story wouldn't work. Hmm...


Goro was a good guy in MK4, and he was the sub-boss.
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 •08/30/2004 06:57 AM (UTC) •
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aznmagicguy Wrote:
I was rethinking this, and noticed that if Noob Smoke is a sub-boss like some people are "thinking", then the story wouldn't work. Hmm...

The guy said that because Noob/Smoke was the last character he fought before Onaga. There was no Subboss in the version he played.

Anyway, thanks for all the replies, peeps. smile
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 •08/30/2004 06:58 AM (UTC) •
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Oh hey, you're right. Sorry about that. Lol, now that I think about it, it's quite weird to see Goro and "good guy" in the same sentence without the "pummels to death" part.
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 •08/30/2004 07:11 AM (UTC) •
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that's an interesting bio Temperary....well written.this makes me think about this new tag "Noob Smoke" on what they have to show in Deception....time will tell.


fear the Noob....Smoke
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 •08/30/2004 07:11 AM (UTC) •
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**Applauds**
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 •08/30/2004 07:19 AM (UTC) •
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Wow, i love this idea. I love how they developed a "mortal link" meaning that they most likely wont turn against eachother for no good reason in the near future, and hopefully never will turn against eachother. Good job dude smile
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 •08/30/2004 08:20 AM (UTC) •
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Awesome story TemporaryUserName! I can't wait to see what their real story is... But i hope it resembles your story.

But why were you expressing the "Yin & Yang" so much at the end? You kinda ruined it for me rambling so much, lol- j/k. Great story man.
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 •08/31/2004 01:24 AM (UTC) •
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Forgive me for knocking this back to the first page, but I seriously want to thank you guy for the responses. I truly appreciate that, because after half an hour of outlining a bio, it feels good to know that it was well received.

And sorry about the rambling, lol.
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 •08/31/2004 01:33 AM (UTC) •
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Nice theory Temp, sounds good/interesting to me!.
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 •08/31/2004 01:36 AM (UTC) •
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I like it. Personally, I'm always ambivalent towards the bios created by non-Midway personnel. If they're bad, that's one thing, but if they're really GOOD, it's painful because I know that's not the way they're going to go (and that's a shame).

But it's great work.
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 •08/31/2004 01:38 AM (UTC) •
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Here is what actually happened though:

Noob and Smoke fought along side eachother in DA. After a while they noticed that they have much in common. They shared harships together and soon grew close. The homosexual ass pounding was inevitable for the first ever MK gays. Now, they stand and fight to take care of eachothers asses (pun intended). The rest of the comebatants are gay bashers, and all fight noob smoke as the sub boss. The final boss is the DK because he brought noob and smoke to together and he must die before he does the same to Scorp and Sub
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 •08/31/2004 01:40 AM (UTC) •
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Oy. Just oy.

Does anyone really find gay jokes funny?
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 •08/31/2004 01:40 AM (UTC) •
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That was a tad offensive, don't you think?
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 •08/31/2004 01:43 AM (UTC) •
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Its what boon told me, dont shoot the messanger...
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 •08/31/2004 01:45 AM (UTC) •
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Gay jokes are just like Racial jokes.

Good theory Temp.

Noob and Smoke rule grin


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 •08/31/2004 01:47 AM (UTC) •
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Which part of my joke was incorrect about gays? Tell me and I will agree it was "just like a racial joke" ...as non-sensical as that is.
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 •08/31/2004 01:54 AM (UTC) •
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It's not incorrect, it's inflammatory and deliberately offensive. Racial slurs aren't "incorrect" either. Just lay off the gay jokes in the future, someone might get offended.
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 •08/31/2004 02:00 AM (UTC) •
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Im sorry if I offended anyone. I was just hoping that noobsmoke would represent the gay community. Venom and several others were gay in GGX so its not totally improbable of having gays in a fighting game. You gotta be more open-minded
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