Kiras Ending (Fiction! I wrote this. This won't appear in Mortal Kombat Decption)
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posted09/14/2004 01:47 AM (UTC)by
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Keith
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08/05/2004 11:12 PM (UTC)
After the dragon king had been destroyed, and both realms had returned to normal, Kira returned to her leader Kabal. When in the Black Dragon Compound, Kira found all fellow members, lying dead in a pool of their own blood.
Kabal was sitting against a columb, badly beaten. When he saw Kira he sayed one word: Blade. Then he died. Kira was confused, but her confusion would have to wait as she was attacked from above. When Kira got up to see her attacker, a blonde woman, who looked to be in her late 20s, eraly 30s. She was dressed in black and red and was wearing a cap with the special forces written on the front. Kira was furious and also confused.
How could a lone woman take out an entire army of soldiers including Kabal who was an expierienced warrior? Kira decided to attack, she tried to perform a leg grab, a move which Kano had taught her. He said he was attacked by someone using this move and nearly lost his life. As Kira bent down, she instantly fell on to her back as she felt a boot being thrust into her back. It was shear agony.
Before having time to think, she was lifted into the air by a bicycle kick. Kira tried to fight but this woman was too powerful, Kira had to get away, she was badly beaten, and would soon bleed to death. A glimpse of her attacker, she saw the fury in her eyes and it hit her. This was Sonya Blade, who relentlessly attacked and killed both Kano and Jarek, singlehandedly. Kira knew she didn't stand a chance.
But she couldn't get away. Sonya was pummeling her to death. She grew faint and was about to collapse when Sonya performed a leg grab and threw her across the room.
"Kiss this Bitch!"
said Sonya as she blew a purple substance into Kira's eyes.
Kira was blinded and knew this was the end. Of her life and the Black Dragon legacy.
Kira had a strange senstion in her stomach, she began to vomit and cough up large amounts of blood. She fell to her hands and knees coughing up her own organs.
She couldnt see and secretley wished Sonya would finish her quickly. Sonya kicked her in her mouth and used her back as a ledge, jumped and landed on Kiras torso with her high heel boots. Her heel impaled Kira and her head had been disfigured and parts of her face lay all over the floor.
Sonya was still furious. She had fulfilled what she set out to do decade ago. She had eliminated the black dragon. But as one of the sole survivors of Earths Chosen warriors, she beagn to worry, how would she defeat the next threat and where was the Thunder God and Wind Gods, who had sworn to protect Earths warriors.
What do you think? Let me guess? You're pissed I killed of Kira? You're pissed I killed Kabal? You're pissed the Black Dragon is dead? You're pissed a character who has never had a chance in the Mortal Kombat spotlight won against the Black Dragon? you're pissed it was Sonya? I want to hear all comments.
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Keith
09/12/2004 10:39 PM (UTC)
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Does anyone like my ending. Remember, I wrote this and nothing in it is official. I just wrote it while talking to Queve.
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queve
09/12/2004 11:24 PM (UTC)
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Like I already told you bro, this ending rocks!
I really like the way you write, especially when it comes to giving details about the events that are happening during the story and specific details such as Kiras death!
That part was amazing, let me just quote it:
“Kira had a strange senstion in her stomach, she began to vomit and cough up large amounts of blood. She fell to her hands and knees coughing up her own organs.
She couldnt see and secretley wished Sonya would finish her quickly. Sonya kicked her in her mouth and used her back as a ledge, jumped and landed on Kiras torso with her high heel boots. Her heel impaled Kira and her head had been disfigured and parts of her face lay all over the floor.”
Amazing. That description was just amazing. The way you narrated Kira’s agonizing thoughts and the events that took place after the Fatality attack were brilliant!
Very good job dude! This ending definitely rocks.
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Keith
09/12/2004 11:31 PM (UTC)
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Thank you so much! I love to write fan fiction, and I get good grades in English. Thanks for telling me what you think. I hope Kira fans and Sonya haters are as kind though. tongue
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Dremonius
09/12/2004 11:44 PM (UTC)
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This ending might rock if i didn't think Kabal was awesome.. and I didn't think Kira was going to be my favorite new character. But at least Mavado didn't do them in.
Although, it would be good if three different things happened. 1. Kabal doesn't die 2. Kira doesn't die 3. Kira kills Sonya instead
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BringBackReptile
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XBL:Insanity1234 Bring It...

09/12/2004 11:52 PM (UTC)
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Well written, but Kabal would never fall at the hands of Sonya. Even thou i'm a huge fan of Kabal its still a great ending.
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sanguine
09/13/2004 12:48 AM (UTC)
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I really enjoyed reading this. I think, though, you should have it so Sonya found her missing men and they were there to help bring down the Black Dragon. It should still end in a stand off between Sonya and Kira, with Jax going after Kabal who gets away.
Good job. I agree with Queve and I love your descriptions.
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(Erik)
09/13/2004 01:26 AM (UTC)
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This was very entertaining and I enjoyed it even though I love Kabal and Kira. So um.. is this how long the MK:D endings are gonna be?
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VeinZ
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And into the eyes of the jackyl I say KAAAAAAAAAAABOOM

09/13/2004 01:46 AM (UTC)
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I'm a huge Sonya hater, so obviously I didn't like the ending. However, your writing is pretty decent.
It's a little drawn out for a typical MK ending, but was fun to read. They wouldn't generally go in depth too much about how the fight went. Perhaps the way you do it is better though.
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XxFoXrAcErXx
09/13/2004 02:03 AM (UTC)
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That's a great ending especially since it was Sonya who destroyed the Black Dragon. Although I do like Kira I like Sonya better so it's not that big of a deal that she died the ending is good though.
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SHANG_TSUNG_00
09/13/2004 03:28 AM (UTC)
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Its alright....but Kabal would murk Sonya!
Kabal has brains...strength and skills.
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black_dragon
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Wow, I shrunk...

09/13/2004 04:20 AM (UTC)
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Look at my user naem, I am pissed you did this to them!! Still good
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queve
09/14/2004 01:47 AM (UTC)
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sanguine Wrote:
I really enjoyed reading this. I think, though, you should have it so Sonya found her missing men and they were there to help bring down the Black Dragon. It should still end in a stand off between Sonya and Kira, with Jax going after Kabal who gets away.
Good job. I agree with Queve and I love your descriptions.

I like that too. But this is without a doubt, a very deep ending. I liked it very much. smile
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