my character concept.
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posted04/07/2004 07:00 PM (UTC)by
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salbeinit
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10/09/2003 07:19 PM (UTC)
name:James Truesdell
age:25
height:1.85 m.
weight:86 kgs.
eyes:black
hair:brown
allignment:good
styles: escrima, thai boxing , kali sticks

moves:

flame shot.
trows a flame of his punch.

fast kick.
jumps towards the oponent and kicks him/her in the face making him/her to fall 2 meters away.

moving sweep.
slides and hit the oponent in the feet making him fall.

stuning upercut.
upercut the oponent in the head making him to get dizzy

hitting the fallen.
jumps and falls with his feet on the oponent

story:
when the outworld invasion ocured rayden gived him supernatural abilities to fight for his planet and life. now when he heard bout the dragon king he wants to join rayden and the other earthrealm warrios to repay him, for giving him the abilities that saved his life.
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TomTaz
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"Retirement my ass!"

04/07/2004 02:48 AM (UTC)
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salbeinit Wrote:
name:James Truesdell
age:25
height:1.85 cm.
weight:86 kgs.
eyes:black
hair:brown
allignment:good
styles: escrima, thai boxing , kali sticks

moves:

flame shot.
trows a flame of his punch.

fast kick.
jumps towards the oponent and kicks him/her in the face making him/her to fall 2 meters away.

moving sweep.
slides and hit the oponent in the feet making him fall.

stuning upercut.
upercut the oponent in the head making him to get dizzy

hitting the fallen.
jumps and falls with his feet on the oponent

story:
when the outworld invasion ocured rayden gived him supernatural abilities to fight for his planet and life. now when he heard bout the dragon king he wants to join rayden and the other earthrealm warrios to repay him, for giving him the abilities that saved his life.


This is very decent. Sounds interesting. Maybe if you could give more of a back story? Also add some fatalities. Cause it's not MK without the Fatalities wink Over all very good. Just elaborate a little. Also maybe a concept drawing, describe what he looks like outfit wise?
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art by fear-sAs
04/07/2004 02:52 AM (UTC)
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Not bad. But you should elaborate more. Check out some of the other concept characters on this page.Check out tgrant's Ryoko or my Hatsuma for some inspiration.
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cartmansp
04/07/2004 02:53 AM (UTC)
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salbeinit Wrote:
name:James Truesdell
age:25
height:1.85 cm.
weight:86 kgs.
eyes:black
hair:brown
allignment:good
styles: escrima, thai boxing , kali sticks

moves:

flame shot.
trows a flame of his punch.

fast kick.
jumps towards the oponent and kicks him/her in the face making him/her to fall 2 meters away.

moving sweep.
slides and hit the oponent in the feet making him fall.

stuning upercut.
upercut the oponent in the head making him to get dizzy

hitting the fallen.
jumps and falls with his feet on the oponent

story:
when the outworld invasion ocured rayden gived him supernatural abilities to fight for his planet and life. now when he heard bout the dragon king he wants to join rayden and the other earthrealm warrios to repay him, for giving him the abilities that saved his life.


1.85 cm.?
Thats kinda small isn't it?
LOL
I like the story,good work.
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tgrant
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Project MKK: Coming soon...

Currently working on: MKD & MKA - The One Ring Theory
04/07/2004 06:18 PM (UTC)
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TomTaz Wrote:

This is very decent. Sounds interesting. Maybe if you could give more of a back story? Also add some fatalities. Cause it's not MK without the Fatalities Over all very good. Just elaborate a little. Also maybe a concept drawing, describe what he looks like outfit wise?


I agree with TomTaz. This is interesting and a better back story will help alot! And a concept drawing would be cool too.
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Xalibar
04/07/2004 06:53 PM (UTC)
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His name sounds dumb and uninteresting. Why would raiden give him supernatural powers? I don't think that he could do that and if he could i think he would have given it to someone else.
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sektor101
04/07/2004 07:00 PM (UTC)
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Xalibar Wrote:
His name sounds dumb and uninteresting. Why would raiden give him supernatural powers? I don't think that he could do that and if he could i think he would have given it to someone else.


kid,dont bump into threads like that read theCommunity FAQ because i can guess u havent so dont do that.

thats charchter sounds awesomebut i think u should give him fatalties,a little bit of more story and i thik he should be a little bit taller but the rest is allcool grin keep it up!
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