My Kharacter Koncept... HATE ME NOW!!
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posted07/06/2004 10:25 PM (UTC)by
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Jaybe2K4
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06/30/2004 11:44 AM (UTC)

Name: Rai'Morto (derived from Spanish: 'rey muerto', which roughly translates to 'the king of the dead')
Age: Unknown
Weight: Unknown
Height: 7'0

Style: Xing Yi, Dragon (thinking about changing)

Weapon: *I have quite a few different ideas, but for right now I'll go with this* A giant axe engulfed in Hellfire

Specials:
Hellfire- Remember Shang Tsung's vertical fireballs in MK3? Similar to those. Rai'Morto slams his fist into the ground, causing a shockwave and hellfire to raise from the ground (starting near him and moving towards the opponent)
Brimstone Breath- close range attack... the animation would look something like Sheeva's scream, but it would act like Sub-Zero's freeze moves. A dark cloud (looks kind of like Noob Saibot's Shadow Ball) is spewed that can temporarily encase the opp in stone if they come into contact with it.

Weapon Special:
Burns like Hell- trips up opponent with ax than brings it crashing down, causing them to writhe in pain on the floor.

Fatalities:
Go 2 Hell- Rai'Morto phases into the ground in an ethereal, ghostly way. Seconds later his upper body bursts up at his enemie's feet, and he pulls them into the Netherrealm (imagine Rai laughing maniaclly as his victim screams and struggles to escape, frantically clawing at the arena floor)

Chokeslam- *i didn't really like the idea, but there was so little in common with the old character, i thought i should let Thamuz keep this* Rai picks up the opponent with one hand by the throat and smoke starts to rise from the opps head. The skin begins to melt off of his/her body, leaving only a skeleton. Finally, Rai slams the charred cadavre into the ground and it explodes into shrapnel of bones.

Story: The Netherrealm is always in flux. Souls of vanquished warriors constantly fight to gain control, but no soul is able to obtain power for long, as there are constant uprises and challenges of authority. Rai'Morto is the current ruler of Hell.

Once a great warrior of Edenia, Rai chose to betray his allies and become a general of the Dragon King's army. Eventually he came face to face with his former comrades on the battle field, and killed them. The guilt would eat away at his soul, and slowly drive him insane. When the great King was defeated, all the soldiers of his army were to be mummified. To escape this fate, Rai engaged in kombat with the King's greatest warriors. He fought well, but was overpowered and defeated. Rather than become a souless slave to the DK, he chose to take his own life.

Now, after thousands of years in the Netherrealm, he has all but forgotten his past. His fighting skills still intact, and the fire of madness burns in his eyes. He eventually came to rule with an iron grip and a ruthless spirit. However, one being threatens to overthrow him. The ninja-spectre Scorpion, has unknowingly angered the King of the Dead. With his repeated escapes from Hell, Rai sees Scorpion as a symbol of defiance. He decides to follow him into the world of the living, and bring him back to the Netherrealm. There he will use him as an example to those who dare challenge his might...

Little does he know, that by following Scorpion, he will enter the Dragon King... his past will return to haunt him, his destiny will come full-circle, and he will have to face the sins of his past.

*I've got more, but I'm hella tired, so i'll add on later... tell me what you think... some of it might suck because It was ridiculously late when i wrote this (from like 2:45-4:30) anywaze, idc if u hate it, give me ur honest opinions* smile
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Jaybe2K4
07/05/2004 04:44 PM (UTC)
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oh, just FYI, this is my first attempt at a created character, and was originally developed as a edit of Thamuz's Chu Jiang, but differed so much it kind of took on a life of its own. Props to Thamuz for the initial idea and inspiration. EDIT: ok, no one's commented on my shit yet... so this is an open invitation to bash me, skull me, hate me, flame me, burn me, diss me... idc if you think it's the worst idea since *insert personal most hated character here* just read it and respond... 1
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Thamuz
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07/05/2004 07:37 PM (UTC)
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I thought it was good. I gave good comments in my thread.
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stevodastoppa
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rehab is for quitters...

07/05/2004 07:55 PM (UTC)
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I would like to see more characters like this one from the netherealm, and i like how he has a connection with scorpion that isnt too big but still involves him. if you give an appearance of him it would be awesome as well. you could also say that he was a fighter of edenia instead of earth because the dk wasnt in earth yet...his army was just moved there. but i like the guy. you could make his appearance something like a skull with a flaming crown on his head or something, and a big red cape...kings gotta have capes haha. overall nice though props man
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IOWNYOU
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Its True,I own you.You are my bitch.

07/05/2004 07:57 PM (UTC)
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you wanna know what i think bout it????

i rather see kurtis styker and mocap instead.
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Jaybe2K4
07/06/2004 04:51 AM (UTC)
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lol, awesome... thanks for the opinions both positive and negative... and sorry about the dorky topic title. My character story was just sitting in the forum and fading into anonimity, so I figured if I typed something extremely dumb and n00b sounding it would at least get attention... better to be hated then ignored.

to iownyou, you are free to state your opinion, however my created character isn't going to be in Deception obviously, nor do i think it will make it into future MK titles... it's just something I did to pass the time, so the statement about rather seeing Stryker and Mokap is irrelevant... lol, that was a pretty good flame though, and i can't slight you for that... I pretty much invited it after all
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Wanderer
07/06/2004 07:27 AM (UTC)
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NICE! Excellent story. Excellent moves. Just fucking excellent!

I really can't give any kind of negative critique to this character. Flawless in every way possible (with the exception of story factual flaws, but those can be changed).

I'm also glad you didn't add a description of his physique. Its nice to imagine what he looks like on my own wink
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Jaybe2K4
07/06/2004 10:16 PM (UTC)
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stevodastoppa Wrote:
I would like to see more characters like this one from the netherealm, and i like how he has a connection with scorpion that isnt too big but still involves him. if you give an appearance of him it would be awesome as well. you could also say that he was a fighter of edenia instead of earth because the dk wasnt in earth yet...his army was just moved there. but i like the guy. you could make his appearance something like a skull with a flaming crown on his head or something, and a big red cape...kings gotta have capes haha. overall nice though props man


thanks for the comments and suggestions... yeah, lol i didn't even think about the DK not being around... I was so tired and braindead I just thought "used to be good... good=mortal... mortal=Earth..." lol... idk, did it say the DK was in Edenia before? Well anyways, I changed it to Edenia. and can anybody tell me how to post pix? I have a couple rough sketches just to give an idea of what I was thinking of
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07/06/2004 10:25 PM (UTC)
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I like this character, good job!
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