My new character-Kamon (Update-Story added)
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posted08/08/2004 05:10 AM (UTC)by
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This is a new character that I have created which hails from the same realm as slim3ddi3g's Keilienaten. He's not done yet and I'm only posting him up to get some thoughts on if I should continue or not.

Name: Kamon
Age: Unknown (Rumored to be a couple of years older then Keilienaten)
Eye Color: Glow with sapphire blue flames
Height: 6’4
Weight: 234 pounds
Alignment: Neutral (Serves Anubis)
Hair: Black goes down past shoulders.
Skin tone: Copper, (Greyish blue in his true form)
Disciplines: Egyptian Martial Arts, Judo, Jujitsu, Pyramid Staff.
Place of Origin: Realm of Rahankutat.
Current where-about: Hamunaptra (City of the Dead)
Power: Can control the Plagues as well as a hidden power unknown to all but Anubis and himself.
Status: Undead General in Anubis' army.
Quote: "Like the Plagues, my wrath is unstoppable."

Weapon Description: The Pyramid Staff is an other worldly weapon. It is given to a general in Anubis' army and can only be used properly by a warrior with exceptional skill. The staff is made of an unknown metal. However, its eerie glow in the night sky resembles the light of a dying soul, glowing with a brilliant sapphire blue. On each end there are three blades, which come to a point, resembling a pyramid on both sides of the staff. They also glow a brilliant blue. The staff itself has a golden luster and has a intertwined serpent stretching the length of the weapon. There is a slit down the middle of the weapon which allows it to be separated with an ethereal chain and used as a flail type weapon. It must be noted that with this transformation, Kamon's reach infinitely increases as the chain isn't made of solid material.

Design
1st outfit: Desert Ninja
Kamon's whole head is wrapped in a turban to keep his identity secret from those around him, allowing him to move freely through the masses. The turbine covers his mouth, nose and head leaving only the eyes open. He wears a white vest with no sleeves and is opened in the front. The vest is kept on by a blood red sash that's wrapped around his waist. He also wears white pants which look much like the Prince of Persia's pants. They are tucked into black boots which have golden shin guards. He wears white arm guards which have curved blades coming from the middle of the fist and extend six inches past the fists. The blades are dual edged for easy inward slashes as well as outward strikes. This whole outfit renders Kamon virtually invisible in the desert sun.
2nd Outfit: Undead General
Kaman’s true form. He wears a jackal headdress in honor of his god. It's cobalt black with sapphire blue eyes. (Think Anubis from Stargate the Movie). He still retains his wrist blades, as well as his arm guards. He now wears a robe around his waist which has shorts underneath. He wears an upper bracer on his left arm in the shape of a cobra. He wears two golden gauntlets. However, these aren't in one piece. The wrist piece which holds the gauntlet together has five small apendages which go down the knuckles and are connected to five slots which is where the fingers go. The guantlets basicaly outline the bones on the back side of the hand. The tips of these gauntlets have diamond etched claws which makes them suited for a very effective close range weapon. Kamon's headdress is opened, revealing his face when he's not in battle, however when he sinks into his stance, the helmet closes and he sees through the sapphire eyes of the Anubis helmet. His boots are made of an unbrakeable steel, said to be used for the weapons of Anubis' army.


Moves: Serpent's Bite: Kamon sperates his whip and turns it into its flail form. He then shoots one end of the staff at the opponent. The blades at the end open up as the head of the staff gets close. When it makes contact the blades snap shut around the opponent's chest causing massive damage and heavey blood loss as Kamon pulls back to retract the chain.

Demonic Sling: This move uses the flail function of the staff to catch an opponent's projectile in between the blades and then shoot it back at them with twice the power and twice the speed.

Clawed Frenzey: Kamon locks his helmet and his eyes flare up. His body glows an undead sapphire blue flame as he rushes the opponent with his hand blades burning blue and unleashes on them a swift ten hit slash combo.

Savage Assualt: Kamon unleashes a series of strikes with his hand claws. However, they stay right infront of him until twenty slashes are suspended in mid-air, right in front of Kamon. He then lifts his hand and points to the opponet. The suspended slashes suddenly shoot out with blazing speed cutting and lacerating the opponet on the pass by.

Wave:(An update to Jax's Multi Slam) Kamon shoots one end of his staff into the opponet. The blades dig in, just like in Serpent's Bite. However, instead of letting go, Kamon starts to toss the opponet around the stage multipile times while holding on to the other end of the staff.

Undead Wind:Kamon charges a ball of spectral energy in his cupped hands. He then releases it in a blast of ethereal wind, filled with the hungry souls of the Undead. If this move makes contact, after the initial blast, the left over souls latch on to the opponent slowly draining his health.

Flaming River:Kamon powers up his hand and shoots it into the ground, unleashing the river Styks into this demension. The river burns like fire as it courses through the stage and at the opponent, surounding them and then igniting them from the feet up.

Strength of the gods:Kamon channels the power of his master into his body. This boost of power will increase his attacks exponentially as well as repelensish his some of his life.

Skeletal Cyclone: Kamon surrounds his opponet in a violent cyclone. The cyclone then rips the skeletal remaints of dead warriors from the ground and fuses it into itself. The bone shards become deadly projectlies as they shoot at the opponent inside.


Fatalities:
Scarab Eruption: Kamon shoots his staff into the ground unleashing a shock wave. Seconds later the ground splits open and a sea of flesh eating Scarabs shoots out of the cracks. The scarabs spot their prey, being the opponent and rush towards him. The opponet tries to flee, but it's too late. The scarabs overrun him and dig into the flesh. You can see the scarabs running around underneath his skin. The opponet screams in agony as blood drips out of his pores. Scarabs start pouring out og his mouth and on to the surface of his body. Soon the opponent is coverd in scarabs and then you hear a sickening crunch. The scarbs retreat, only leaving a hallowed out corpse, filled with holes and only parts of their bones.

Final Dawn: Kamon uses his power to cast the final plauge. He eclipses the sky. The fading light focuses on the opponet as the shadow envelopes everything. As soon as the shadow touches the opponet, he is instantly engulfed in flames. His skin melts, his organs rupture, his muscles burn. He bleeds uncontrolabley. The sky turns black and a cinder grey as the clouds are set on fire. A meteor storm starts and on of the meteors comes down on the victim. On impact the remaints of the opponents disintegrate in a cloud of blood and fire. As a visual flare, just to show the sope of this, the camera pulls back out of the areana showing the undead army of Anubis, numbered in the billions swarming the surrounding landscape, all summound by Kamon.

Story:
As a young boy, Kamon belonged to a well off family, which served under the pharoah Akhenaten. His father was a high priest and grand counceler to the paroah. As a young child, Kamon was a free spirit. He always ran off on adventures and caused mischief. But the kind hearted pharoah would only dismiss this as childs play. As Kamon grew older, he became intreseted in the art of combat. He wished to join the pharoah's mighty army. His natural ability to fight made him one of the top candidates for the position of General in the pharoahs army. His prefered styles were anything with short strong strikes and take downs. He learned the anatomy of the human body and therefore increased his knowledge of combat by studying the affects of pressure points and critical hits in important zones on the human body. His prefered weapon was the bladed staff. It's long reach and twin blades on both sides, made it ideal for long range and short range combat. As the years went on, Kamon's training increased as well as his skills. At the young age of 200 he became General in the pharoah's army. He lead them to countless victories against a rival empire. Kamon had a good heart, and instead of finishing off his opponents, he recruited them into his army, and made took rival empires under one rule. The pharoah's kind heart and Kamon's military expertiese allowed the empire to flurish, eventually encompassing the entire realm. However, their were still pockets of terrorists who threatened to break the ties of the empire and throw it into chaos. Among these terrorists, was the former general of Akhenaten's army, Sekhmet. He always held an ever deepening hatred for the pharoah's new general after being bested in combat, and loosing his right eye, to Kamon. His ties to the underground terrorists called, The Eyes of Ra. They were called so, because before a new member could be sworn in to the faction, he had to gouge out one of his eyes and replace it with a golden one, modeled after the Eye of Ra. Sekhmet developed a plan to get rid of Kamon and establish his rightful place at Akhenaten's side. In the fallowing weeks, their have been a number of strange disappearnces in the capital city. The officals believed that the Eyes of Ra terrorist faction was gathering hostages, for an upcoming ransom demand. Knowing that the pharoah would not want any harm to fall on his subjects, it made him an easey target. The officials reported to Kamon, telling him that they have uncovered the location of the hostages. It was at Scorpion's Gorge at the Desert's Bones, a rocky wasteland devoid of all life. Kamon lead a small task force to retrive the hostages. As his forces got closer, they were ambushed by a guerilla attack. Kamon was the only one who survived. Filled with anger at the death of his comrades, Kamon rushed towards the location. As he got their he witnessed a horryfic sight. The so called hostages where skinned and put on pikes as markers of the terrorist factions. The fouls smell of death filled the gorge as rotting flesh decomposed in the heat of the sun. Within minutes the Eyes of Ra jumped out of numerous outcroppings in the gorge, surrounding Kamon. Against all odds, Kamon, fueled with rage abondoned all honor and dignety and slaughtered the terroist factions. The caves of the gorge ran red with the blood of his enemies. He, did not come out unscathed however. His injuries severe, he knew he wouldn't be able to return. As Kamon wandered through the gorge, his life coming to an end he said his final prayer."Ne reku, no ham ne kewam ishtan amshare. Ti setzu ki kon aruer, no remier de rue karistar." "As I pass through the valley of darkness, I'm not afraid. And with my dying breath I am at peace." Kamon collapses and dies in the gorge. However, as his spirit passes into the next world, he is met by the death god Anubis himself. Anubis tells him, that Kamon's life was cut short. His valor has no meaning, he was decived and therefore threw his life away by surrendering to hatred. Anubis tells Kamon that he has a strong spirit and great potential. If Kamon agrees to a pact, he will be returned to the world of the living, to avange his death, and possibley save the lives of many others. In exchange, he turns over his soul to Anubis and becomes his general. Kamon agrees to the pact and is instantly returned to his body. He feels a new sense of purpose, and a new power growing inside. Anubis tells him that he has been bestowed with tremendous power. He can tear apart the heavens and bring forth the Wave of Drakness, Anubis' army. In exchange, he gives up almost all of his free will to Anubis after his revenge is complete, and honor restored. Kamon returns to his beloved city in disguise. He finds out that Sekhmet has once again become general. As he searches for his traitor he runs into the young princess Kielienaten, who doesn't recognise Kamon at all. Kamon's new gift lets him see a darkness growing inside of her but says nothing. Kamon finally corner's Sekhmet in his chamber. Before Sekhmet can react to his ressurected rival his blood is spilled on the walls, and entrails littered all over the room. As his opponent dies, Kamon can feel his free will being torn from his body. He is now the bringer of death, and weilder of plagues under the command of Anubis. His orders are simple, increase the army of Anubis, and crush all who stand before him. In the upcoming years Kamon would lay siege to what he helped build, as Anubis' army swept the realm. the pharoah and the queen are dead, and the empire has all but fallen into chaos. Keilienaten rules mercylessly, and the ranks of the Undead increase. Soon they will be unleashed like a plague on all the realms, ending the existance of the second race of humanity, just like they did eons ago, with Kamon leading the charge, from his own throne at the city of Hamunaptra a dark time will fall to the human race.
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only the fallen have won,because the fallen can't run my vision is not obscure for war there is no cure.

08/07/2004 05:57 AM (UTC)
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very nice dude grin
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Dark_No0B
08/07/2004 05:59 AM (UTC)
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Awesome concept bro. The design is bad ass.
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TomTaz
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"Retirement my ass!"

08/07/2004 06:05 AM (UTC)
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"...thoughts on if I should continue or not"

First: *Smacks Smoke* Don't be absurd! Of COURSE you should continue!! tongue

It is brilliant man. I'm especially interested in the pyramid Staff < VERY cool weapon there!

Nice work Smoke, can't wait to see the finished project!
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08/07/2004 06:26 AM (UTC)
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*Gets up from the hit to the head by TomTaz.*
Cool. I will continue then.
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08/07/2004 06:28 AM (UTC)
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Nice character, I like it! wink
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"Retirement my ass!"

08/07/2004 06:28 AM (UTC)
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Alright then, *Hands Smoke an Icepack for his head* Carry on. tongue
*Edit* Awesome moves man...and sick fatalities! Especially the scarab one!
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Ryukeshen
08/07/2004 08:41 AM (UTC)
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It's a pretty good concept, but not too original. Scarab fatality is too much like The Mummy/Mummy Returns/Scorpion King. Also, I don't understand why he is from both Egypt and another realm. I mean, you could have just made him from Egypt. Anubis is the Egyptian God of Death, basically, but he was also the patron to embalming, maybe include something about that if your character is going to follow Anubis.

I don't understand how your character has control over plagues. That's Moses' job, lol.

I'm just sayin, if you're gonna do a guy from Egypt following the God Anubis, research it first, or don't copy it at all. :)
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08/07/2004 07:29 PM (UTC)
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Kamon isn't from Egypt, rather he's from an Egyptian type realm. As for the plagues, it's not the Biblical plagues he controls. If you've seen the Mummy than you know that Imotep also had the power to bring forth plagues. That's what I'm going for. And as for following Anubis, he isn't some fanatic who fallows the death god, in his story (which I'll write soon) Kamon was ressurected by Anubis as a general in his army.
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Project MKK: Coming soon...

Currently working on: MKD & MKA - The One Ring Theory
08/07/2004 09:02 PM (UTC)
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The concept is a big mix of the Mummy and Stargate. That means it's awesome! I love it! Kamon is very powerful and has a cool weapon and interesting moves. The Fatalities, especially Final Dawn are nice.

Whatever it is your adding should truly make this already great character even more awesome! The concept is great as it is imo.

Nice work!
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I know what you did last tuesday.

08/07/2004 10:06 PM (UTC)
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generaral of the undead army of anubis?thats a character id love to see in a mortal kombat game!
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KingKabal88
08/07/2004 10:12 PM (UTC)
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this character sounds bad-ass!!! he definetly belongs in MK.
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Frostbyte6479
08/07/2004 11:03 PM (UTC)
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That is kinda a cool concept(at least part of it), but as was already said, it sounds like it was pulled right out of the rough draft for The Mummy Forever(Not an official title!)
The weapon is cool. He has far too many moves, though that Final Dawn(My wife's name!) is really cool!
My final rating is a 5 out of 10!
With ideas like this, I'd bet you can come up with better!
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UrbanSmooth
08/08/2004 01:19 AM (UTC)
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Awesome concept, Smoke.

Please add pics and/or 3D renders.
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08/08/2004 02:01 AM (UTC)
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awesome, very cool man..
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08/08/2004 05:10 AM (UTC)
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Frostbyte6479 Wrote:
That is kinda a cool concept(at least part of it), but as was already said, it sounds like it was pulled right out of the rough draft for The Mummy Forever(Not an official title!)
The weapon is cool. He has far too many moves, though that Final Dawn(My wife's name!) is really cool!
My final rating is a 5 out of 10!
With ideas like this, I'd bet you can come up with better!


It's cool. I totaly respect your opinion, and welcome constructive critisism. This is only a rough draft of a character, I'm planing on saving this and working on it to truely flesh him out before the next tournament. But right now, I have a fight scene to write. I also would like to thanke everyone who thinks Kamon is cool. And I promise, his story will be up tomorrow at the latest.
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